高中英语Book-2-Unit-2-单元话题写作话题写作课件

1、单元话题写作The Olympic Games单元话题写作The Olympic GamesYou have to believe in yourself. Thats the secret of success. 你必须相信自己，这是成功的关键。 Charles Chaplin You have to believe in yourselLearning Aims:1.To Learn what is a good writing and to learn the techniques of writing. 2.To write a composition about the 2016 O

2、lympic Games.Learning Aims:Enjoying and analyzing（分析感知优秀作文）高中英语Book-2-Unit-2-单元话题写作话题写作 Here are my suggestions on how to improve our ability to communicate in English. First, youd better make full use of various opportunities to practise speaking English. For example, you can join the English club

3、or English corners where you will meet a lot of people who would like to communicate with each other in English. In this way your ability of listening and speaking can also be improved.Passage 1 Here are my suggestions o Second, try to do more reading and know more about English cultures. It is wort

4、hwhile to travel to foreign countries so that you will have a better understanding of cultural differences. Last but not least, learn to use proper body language. Sometimes spoken language is not enough for you to express yourself, so gestures and posture can make you understood better and avoid mak

5、ing mistakes in communication . I hope my advice can be of great benefit to you . First , SecondLast but not least Second, try to do more Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in peoples life in recent years. In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing le

6、tters or using the public telephone. But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. Whats more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.With these changes,

7、 peoples pace of life has been quickened and peoples work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different continents. In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.Whats moreIn a wordIn addi

8、tion/MoreoverPassage 2 Great changes have tDISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ DISCUSSION: A good compositionContent structurelanguage覆盖所有内容要点层次分明，语法结构合理。语言地道、规范、得体A good Content structurelanguaDISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要

9、完整) （内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）DISCUSSION: DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)* Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅) Language:* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文)* No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误

10、)* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)DISCUSSION: Avoid Chinglish!1) Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded. 2) There has a highway connected with Beijing.3) Though shes almost 40，but she still plans to compete.4) I forgot my dictionary at home. 5) It will

11、cost us much money to buy one. Languageheavy.leftistakeAvoid Chinglish!Languageheavy.高中英语Book-2-Unit-2-单元话题写作话题写作阅卷教师喜欢什么样的作文?字体工整，卷面干净；紧扣主题，条理清晰；语言地道，过渡自然；长度适中，一气呵成。阅卷教师喜欢什么样的作文?字体工整，卷面干净；阅卷教师讨厌什么样的作文?涂涂抹抹，斑斑点点； 层次不清，段落不分；语句不通，杂乱无章；书写潦草，卷面不洁；阅卷教师讨厌什么样的作文?涂涂抹抹，斑斑点点； 高考英语评分原则：1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2. 评

12、分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。高考英语评分原则：高考英语评分原则：5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。高考英语评分原则：assessPlease learn to your compo

13、sition now.assessPlease learn to 书面表达评价表 项目 自评 他评1.书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划?2.句子开头注意大小写了吗?3.有没有注意标点符号?4将文章分段了吗?分成了几段?5有单词拼写错误吗?几个?6.有时态错误吗?误用了哪种时态?7.注意主谓一致了吗?8.有没有语态的错误?9.有没有使用关联词?使用得当吗?10.有没有词性的错误?哪一种?11.简单句表达正确吗?12.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构?13.表达方式是否多样化?注意长短句搭配了吗?14.有没有用好词好句?用了哪些? 书面表达评价作文范文： The first modern Olympic G

14、ames were held in Athens in 1896. With its development, there are over250 sports nowadays and any country can take apartif their athletes reached the agreed standard. Themotto of the Olympic Games is “Swifter, Higher andStronger.” Its well known that the 31st Olympic Games will beheld in Rio de Jane

15、iro, Brazil in 2016. Of course, theChinese athletes are admitted as the competitors tocompete for the honor of our country. In thecompetition, women will also play an important partin the Olympic Games. We hope that Brazil will succeed in holding theevents.作文范文：Suggestions for you:1.Try your best to learn English and get yourselves interested in it.2.Do more reading .3.Form the habit of memorizing words every day.4.Practise writing regul