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1、高考作文提分策略5 Tips for English Essay Writing一、Features of Good English Essays一篇好文章有什么特点？1.Comprehensiveness.全面性:包含所有要求内容。2.Clean and neat.整洁性:书写工整，卷面整洁。3.Differences.多样性:使用较高级词汇和语法结构，句式多样。4. Logic/Coherence.连贯性:逻辑清晰，上下文连贯，恰当使用承上启下的词语和连接词，使全文流畅连贯，浑然一体。想要写一篇高分作文，你还要了解评分标准：第五档（很好）：（21-25分）1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.

2、覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档（好）：（16-20分）1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉1、2个词重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构 紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（适当）：（11-15分）1.基本完成了试题规定的任务

3、。2.虽漏掉一些内容，但段盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。6.整体而言、基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（较差）：（6一10分）1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内 容。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档（差）：（1-5分）1.未完成试题规定的任务。2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原

4、因可能是未 理解试题要求。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误、影响对写作内容的理解。5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。6.信息未能传达给读者。江苏2018高考作文范文： As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on

5、different consumers. I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time

6、 to make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consump

7、tion. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings. 分析：18年作文仍然是读写作文，即先用30词概括阅读材料，然后针对材料中的话题写一篇议论文谈看法。首先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料，然后进行比较和分析，表明态度，作出价值判断。文章首段要简要介绍两段材料，第一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论，结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好。第二段材料为一家人去餐馆

8、吃饭，看了on-line rating，选择去了其中一家，但饭菜很不好吃，从而凸显出online rating的不靠谱。然后写作者对online rating的看法，表明观点，注意用2-3个论据来支撑自己的看法。首先在概括要点时，本文要抓住要点，语言精炼。本文所给材料是描述某种现象，那么就必须用概括的文字来说明某种现象，这篇文章做到了第二步是提出自己的观点并加以论证。首先提出自己的观点，之后用论据来证明自己的观点，结尾总结了要点，与自己的观点句相呼应，使读者对主题有深刻的印象。特殊句式和词汇用法也已标出。这就算第五档作文。二、Examing the topic (审题)审题，先审内容：1.列提

9、纲，主要是选一个主题 进行分析 2.看字数，要求字数的20左右。然后审时态：确定主要时态，建议不超过2中，时态越多，越容易出错。再审人称：写作时，不要搞混人称。最后审题材：看是议论文，书信，还是图标类作文，每种题材有一定的书写格式。江苏2018高考作文： 【写作内容】1. 用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 不必写标题。 我们来看下2018年江苏高考英语作文，它是一篇读写作文，需要你先阅读材料，然后概括出一

10、个现象，再针对消费排名现象写一篇议论文，表明作者的立场，并说明理由。全文用第一人称（I），时态用了一般现在时（may have,there is,tend to等),并且穿插了一般过去时(bought,tasted),简单明了，不容易出错。不同题材常用句式：图表作文：开头：A survey on the topic of - has been carried out which has aroused a heated discussion among.例句：Recently, a survey on the topic of whom do you turn to when in troub

11、le has been carried out in our school which has aroused a heated discussion among students.写作过程中，详细描述图表中的数字或百分比书信类书信文体包括三大类：1、单一应用文（只达到一个目的） 2、简单述说型（欢迎稿等） 3、功能混合型（一封信里可能达到好几个目的）种类：建议信，申请信，感谢信，道歉信，邀请信，求助信，咨询信。建议信开头：Im writing the letter to offer you some suggestions/do you a favor.申请信开头：Im writing to

12、 apply for the job/position/opportunity.感谢信开头：Im writing to express my heartfelt gratitude/appreciation to you.道歉信开头：Im writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.邀请信开头：Im writing to invite you to join the .求助信开头：Im writing to ask you to do me a favor./I have no choice but to turn to your help.咨

13、询信开头：Im writing to ask your some relevant questions.告知信开头：Im writing to inform you of some relevant details.建议信中间段：Here are several suggestions for you. 1.You ought to do sth. 2.You are supposed to do sth. 3.If i were you,I would do sth. 4.Its high time that you did sth.罗列要点，在句子之间加上连接词结尾段：Hopefully,

14、these suggestions would be helpful for you.If theres anything else I can do for you,please let me know.申请信中间段：I have confidence that I can handle the job well.As for the reasons,for one thing,.for another.申请项目通常有：志愿者，支教老师，夏令营，记着等申请理由：1、经验类例句：Living in Seattle for half a year as an exchange student,I

15、 do well in English speaking and writing. In 2008,I served as a Volunteer in the Beijing Olympic Games,therefor,I was equipped with adequate relevent experience and social skill. 2、知识类例句：Once I won the sceond prize in the CCTV national English speaking contest. In my spare time,I used to communicate

16、 with my foreign friends through the internet,exchanging ideas on cultural difference and current affairs. 3、性格类例句：Im also the vice monitor of my class,which has equipped me with a strong body and the abilityof leadership. Being the team leader of our school basketball team,I get along well with my

17、teammates,enjoying my outstanding awards and a harmonious interpersonal relationship in my team.结尾段：Hopefully,the chance would be offered to me.If so,Iwould devote all my effort and wisdom to your company/this activity.感谢信中间段：Whenever I recall these days,I just cant help thinking you.It was so kind

18、of you to do sth.Besides,you did sth,which really moved me.Nothing would be able to erase our wonderful memories and I will cherish them forever.结尾段：Thanks for reading my letter.道歉信中间段：How I wish had(not) done.However,I have to.As a result,I have no choice but do sth.I believe that if you were me,yo

19、u would make the same decision.结尾段：Hopefully,you would accept my apology and understand my situation.邀请信中间段：分3层 1、Here are several relevant details about this activity.The activity will be in.(地点）on the afternoon of .(时间） 2、The theme of the activity is .,which is undoubtedly both meaningful and ente

20、raining. 3、Not only will we do.,but we will also do. and .结尾段：If you need any futher information,please send an emial to. or call me at.And Im looking forward to your presence.求助信中间段：I am wondering if you would like to.In great need of .Im eager to. Being lack of.and .Im now in a dilemma that(+同位语）省

21、略号部分就是你要求助的内容。结尾段：Thanks for reading my letter.Im sincerely looking forward to your early reply.咨询信中间段：I tried to search the internet,but found no clear answer.Would you please be so kind/nice as to tell me.? (公开透明化信息） Besides,I also need some information about sth. How is everything going with sb/s

22、th? (咨询有关人或事物） It is convenient for you,would you please tell me sth? 让对方帮助自己一个小忙，这个因信件内容不同而不同。结尾段：Thanks for reading my letter.Im sincerely looking forward to your early reply.告知信中间段：罗列具体要点，这类信件往往比较简单结尾段：If you need any further information,please send an email to. or call me at .书信体：应用为主，传情为辅，开门见山，

23、直奔主题，不简单罗列要点，用好高级连词，分词，倒装，强调，从句等语法点，要灵活运用。三、 Writing（写作）全文分为三段式，每段之间留有一行，每段最好有一个topic sentence内容上，写作要求中提到的内容都要写，且写的内容要与主题相关。词法和句法要求：1、使用高级词汇，替换低级词汇 2、使用词组替换单词 3、句型丰富，非谓语，独立主格，特殊句式 4、连接词，主要以“逗号”隔开的词，或词组 2018年江苏高考作文，三段式，且每一段都有中心句：第一段第一句：（As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an

24、efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption）第二段第一句：（ I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase.）第三段第一句：There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. 写作中：可以替换的一些词有：我认为-Low：I think.替换：form my point of view,as far as Im c

25、oncerned,on a personal level感谢你Low：Thank you for.替换：make sincere thanks and grtitude to sb越来越多的Low：more and more.替换：sth is increasing number /a growing number of sth is 例句：In the recent decades,a growing number of people are using Internet. 越来越多的人使用互联网。有机会Low：have a chance to do.替换：own an opportunit

26、y to do sth /be in possession of the opportunity to do.例句：I appreciate being in possession of the opportunity to write to you. 很高兴有机会给你写信。做。是很重要的Low：doing sth is important(初级表达）/ It is important for sb to do sth(稍微高级）替换：It is of +抽象名词（等同于形容词）to do 例句：It is of great importance o learn English. 学习英语很重

27、要。我希望所有人。Low：I hope all the people.替换：My expectation is that individuals例句：My expectation is that individuals can help people who are in trouble. 我希望人人都能帮助那些处在麻烦中的人。如果Low：If.替换：provided that / assuming that / Given that/ on condition that例句：I will lend you the book on condition that you return it on

28、 Monday. 如果你能在星期一还我，我可以借给你这本书。我（从。）得知Low：I know that.替换：I was informed by.that./I was kept up to date on./ sb keep me up date on.例句：I was informed by my doctor that my leg hurt badly. 我的腿伤的严重。因为。（现象），人们。Low：Because./because of,people例句：Thanks to that App I loved reading. 多亏了那个app,我才喜欢阅读。我们在。中应该高度重视。

29、Low：we should pay attention to替换：sth is supposed to draw our attention/We are supposed to bear sth in our mind/We are supposed to concern about sth to the great extent.例句：We are supposed to bear this issue in our mind. 我们应该牢记这件事。我们将尽最大努力。Low：We will try our best to .替换：We will make every effort to./

30、We will spare no efforts to.例句：We will spare no efforts to help him. 我们将尽最大努力帮助他。giveoffer thinkemphsize wantbe eager to/ long for thanksappreciate/gradtitude goodremarkable/outstanding/fabulous happydelighted/cheerful usefulcontribute to/beneficialbasicessential saveset aside sometimesoccasionall h

31、ave tocant help but duringin the course of be busyingbe rushed off ones feet be interested inbe absorbed in/be caught up in连词的巧妙选择：低级连接词，按照时间先后顺序：and，then中级连接词，按照逻辑顺序：firstly，secondly高级连接词，非谓语动词例句：Hearing this,a few people began to run after him.不同句式地使用：It 句式1.It is adj for sb to do/It is of +例句：It

32、is vital for us to learn computer well,because it has changed our life.2.It is+被强调部分+that.例句：It is through the internet that we can learn more.3.It 作形式主语的主语从句通常为了避免主语冗长，造成句子结构前重后轻，而选择使用it作形式主语。It is reported that 16 people were killed in the earthquake.倒装句（前面总结过6中形式,就不一一列举）Only in this way can learn

33、 english well.只有通过这种方式，我们才可以学好英语。定语从句例句：Donghai is a county,located in the north of Jiangsu province,which is famous for crystal独立主格常见的由with/without引导/ there being+名词./代词例句：Without a word more spoken,she left the meeting room.With his son disappointing,the old man felt unhappy.There being no bus,we

34、had to walk home.固定结构No sooner.than./Hardly.when. /Upon+doing 一。就。例句：No sooner had I reached home than it began to rain.Theres no denying/doubt that. 不可否认例句：Theres no doubt/denying that you will have a bright future.We cant emphasize the importance of doing sth too much. 再怎么强调。重要性也不为过例句：We cant emphasize the importance of protectin