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1、书面表示技巧方法第1页Writing (15 分)书面表示第2页 一、考试题型命题作文提醒作文限制性写作, 给出情景和提醒，让学生构想自己处于这么情景中该怎么办英语和汉语同时出现第3页一.学会审题。确定短文体裁（普通为记叙文）二.依据所给提醒内容，确定所用到主要时态（多为普通现在时态，普通过去时态，普通未来时态）第4页2000-年书面表示题分析年代题目体裁/内容题 型时 态My favorite /Everyone needs help记叙文个人兴趣/谈论帮助作文对话普通现在时普经过去时I hope记叙文个人愿望作文对话普通现在时普通未来时I love my hometown记叙文描写故乡表示

2、感情作文对话普通现在时普通未来时第5页表示愿望 记叙文 作文/对话 If I have a lot of money, I will 普通现在时 普通未来时记难忘事 记叙文 作文/对话 Highs and lows in my life 普通过去时表示感情 记叙文 命题作文Love for my parents 普通现在时 普通过去时第6页 四、中考答题要求 1、 学生能在所学词汇、句型和语法 范围内写正确句子，不得少 于60个词。2、要表示真实感情3、对卷面整齐有一定要求第7页三.学会转换作文题目，将新面临题目转换为自己写过熟悉题目，学会发散思维列：此次月考题目-My first My fi

3、rst dream- My dreamMy first journey-A trip toMy first teacher-My favorite teacherI hope- My dream第8页 四.写出条理清楚文章，遵照一定模式1.用总分- 总 模式 1）先有引入语，将话题转到题目上2）定出主体内容 ，分层次清楚写出文章能够用：First 第一 second 第二 third 第三或 At first(首先） Next其次 finally 最终来分清文章体系，方便阅卷人批改3）结束文章时一定要再次点到体2.丰富文章体裁，学会使用以下句型：第9页基本句型模块、主语be动词+名词、形容词、

4、数词（表语） 表示人或事物身份、特征、形状等。I am a teacher.You are students.My brother is tall。Our classroom is big and bright.Mr. Brown is sixty .第10页I am happy/angry/friendly/ sad/sure/sorry/glad/afraid/第11页2、主语+动词+宾语We study English hard.Mary likes dancing.Tom has been to Beijing twice.Some foreigners came to our cit

5、y yesterday.第12页There is a blackboard on the wall.There isnt any bread on the plate.There are many visitors in the park.There is something wrong with my bike.There is nothing serious with you.4.Its +adj+to do sth.Its + adj.+for sb.+to do sth. 3、There +be 第13页惯用动词模块Be,.have,do, go, come ,visit, play,

6、 work,study,learn,Run,jump,climb,walk, talk ,hear ,listen, say,speak,tellwatch ,read ,look,seewrite, sit,stand, like ,enjoy,finish, think, want ,hope, wish ,decide, forget, remember，believe，第14页 碰到不难写词语时，用简单同义词替换近义词模块：Beautiful-nice,good, Wonderful- excitingDelicious-nice,goodDifficult - hardDiffere

7、nt - not sameInterestingfunny第15页 动词时态模块1、描写人或事物惯用普通现在时 My friend/Our school/ I love my hometown.2、记叙发生事情惯用普通过去时 A happy day/ A diary / A visit to 3、表示想法和愿望惯用普通未来时 I hope /I want to be 第16页一些需要注意细节：1.标点符号使用一定要规范，句号是黑点2.标题，句首字母大写3.在无格子情况下，为了使书写更美观，可轻轻用铅笔画横线第17页七、书面表示评分标准一挡（13-15分）内容切题、层次清楚、语言流畅、基本无语言

8、错误。二挡（10-12）内容切题、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表示错误较少。三挡（6-9）内容基本切题、层次不够分明、语言表示较多错误。四挡（1-5）有一定内容、但语言表示错误较多。注意:作文语法错误扣分不得超出2分；单词拼写错误扣分不得超出2分；剽窃卷中阅读材料剽窃部分不给分。第18页八、答题思绪与技巧第19页认真审题惯用句子要求提醒书写规范英语思维列出关键点惯用词语第20页九、优异范文点评 依据提醒写一封约80个词信。1、提醒：收信人姓名：Susan 写信人姓名：Li Ping 2、要求： 请把你兴趣- 打篮球、玩电脑游戏、交朋友、 看电视、读书等及家庭情况向她做一个介绍。第21页De

9、ar Susan:How do you do ! My name is Li Ping. Im a Chinese boy. Im fourteen. Im from Kunming, China.Kunming is called “SpringCity”,because its neither cold in winter and nor hot in summer. Its a beautiful city.I like playing basketball computer game,making friends,watching TV and reading books. There

10、 are three people in my family. 第22页They are my father, my mother and I. My father works in a factory. My mother is a doctor. She works in a hospital.I want to make friends with you .Please write to me soon. Yours, Li Ping(95-20=75) 第23页 A diary It was blowing hard outside. I went to bed after I fin

11、ished my homework. Suddenly I remembered that the windows of my classroom were open. Quickly I got up and put onmy clothes.I ran against the wind to theclassroom in hurry. On the way to school I had many falls. 第24页When I arrived there ,I was too tired to go any farther. I did my best to closed all

12、the windows. Till then there was a smile on my face . After a short rest, I left the classroom happily. (92-26=66).第25页 年书面表示解析提醒：父亲妈妈给了你无限爱，你必定把这 份深情切记在心。但你是否曾用适当方式表示过你对父亲妈妈爱呢？要求：1、依据所给题目。用英语写一篇短文，记叙你为父亲妈妈做过一件事，以表示你对他们情感。词数不少于60个。2、语言流畅，书写规范。卷面整齐。文中不得使用真实人名、校名，不然以零分计。第26页 实战训练 An E-mail to Li Hua 提

13、醒：Tomorrow is Sunday .Your friend Li Hua invite you to have a pinic with her .But you cant go .要求：依据提醒，用英语发电子邮件告诉她你想法或打算。第27页认真审题惯用句子要求提醒书写规范英语思维列出关键点惯用词语第28页列出关键点、词组、句子。表示感激和心情表示遗憾说明原因thank you for want to go with sbhave a lot of things to do do my homework wash my clotheswatch TVlisten to the musicgo shopping Be sorry to say be afraidwhat a pityButbecausefirst secondthird第29页组句成文、书写规范Dear Li HuaThank you for inviting me. I really want to go with you .But I am afraid I cant.Because I have a lot of things to do .First I must finish my homework in the morning.Second I have to wash my cloth