高考英语二轮研讨会书面表达：邀请信

1、应 用 文 写 作二轮专题复习Practical writing1. To analyze the writing precisely.2. To express key points completely.3. To use language beautifully.一、学习目标How to write a better invitation？全国卷近五年应用文写作文体话题考查一览表（2015-2019）年份卷别文体话题 2019I卷申请信在伦敦申请做当地美术馆举办的中国画展的志愿者II卷告知信告知队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛III卷邀请信邀请英国朋友Allen参加学校的音乐节 2018

2、I卷介绍信向外国人介绍来中国家庭做客的礼仪、习俗等II卷通知为校宣传栏写一则通知，介绍一部英语短片III卷介绍信向对方介绍自己学校的体育运动情况 2017I卷告知信告知外国朋友下次上课的计划II卷邀请信邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展III卷邀请信邀请留学生朋友加入校乒乓球队 2016I卷求助信请外教帮忙修改申请书和个人简历II卷邀请信为摄影展征稿III卷道歉信为不能赴约道歉 2015I卷约稿信请朋友为“外国文化”栏目写稿II卷邀请信邀请外教去敬老院陪老人们过重阳节二考情一览全国I卷近五年应用文文体考查201520162017201820192020约稿信求助信告知信介绍信申请信邀请信（？）文体预测

3、：全国一卷文体考查多样化！邀请信会成为考查文体吗？话题预测：中外交流、中国传统文化和社会主义核心价值观的结合全国I卷近五年应用文话题关键词201520162017201820192020外国文化外教帮忙上课计划中国做客中国画展？一、评分原则1. 本题总分为15分，按五个档次进行评分。2. 评分时，应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：(1) 对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。(2) 使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。(3) 上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。三、评分标准第五档：(13-15分)能写明全部要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达清楚；第四档：(10

4、-12分)能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言有少量错误；行文不够连贯, 表达基本清楚；第三档：(7-9分)能写明基本要点；语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意；第二档：(4-6分)能写出部分要点；语言错误多，影响意思表达；第一档：(1-3分)只能写出一两个要点；语言错误很多，只有个别句子正确。二、各档次的给分范围和要求如何写一封完美的邀请信？审题要准 （precise）要点要全 （complete）语言要美（beautiful）四、考点突破假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。注意：1.词数80左

5、右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.（2020年1月 浙江高考真题）邀请信写作关键之一：Analyzing审题要准Precise三 审审文体: 审人称：审时态：假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。邀请信第一人称和第二人称一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅审题失误邀请信写作关键之二：Key points要点要全CompletePara 1: state our purposePara 2：give detailed descriptionsPara 3：express our expect

6、ation1. Background2. Purpose列 要 点1. .2. .3. .假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。列 要 点1)Background： school.hold.contest. 2)Purpose： Im writing to invite. Para 1：Para 2：Para 3：1)比赛时间： It will start at. in.2)演讲话题： Its topic is.3)报名方式：sign upExpectation: look forwar

7、d to.假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。首段缺少背景介绍 首段缺少写作目的 How are you doing recently? Our school is going to hold., so Im writing the letter to invite you to.假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。结尾没有表示出期待或希望 I hold the belief

8、that your participation will add color to the contest. Looking forward to your reply.假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。23缺少要点假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。213顺序颠倒at 3 o clock this Saturday afternoon, lasting about two

9、hours.假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。时间笼统邀请信写作关键之三：Language语言要美beautifulInner beautyOuter beautyInner beautycorrect 语言正确proper 语言得体 coherent 语言连贯concise 语言简洁 pure 语言地道will be heldwhich is to be语言要正确地道longing for语言出错The contest will take place in our school h

10、all next Sunday. All should center around the topic ”Dream in my heart”. If you are interested in it, do not hesitate to call Students Union to sign up.语言要简洁连贯has过于啰嗦套语使用要得体不合语境How to polish our writing1. Im writing the letter to invite you to join in the contest.（From Lin Shuai）Im writing the lette

11、r to invite you to _ in the contest.Knowing that you _ Chinese, I would like to invite to compete in the contest.2. Knowing that you are good at Chinese, I would like to invite you to compete in the contest. (From Chen Jie)participatehave a good command ofI词汇高级化晚词优先学以致用I sincerely hope that you will

12、 _my invitation_ .take2. I hold the belief that the activity is beneficial to Chinese learners. (From Zhang Chang)I hold the belief that the activity is _ to Chinese learners.1. I sincerely hope that you will consider my invitation.(From Wang Yu) 2短语优先化into considerationof benefit 短语优先活学活用1. Good ne

13、ws never fails to come on time. (From Shao Mingyang)3. A Chinese speech contest is going to be held in our school. (From Sun Hao)2. So pleased am I to hear it that I write to invite you to participate. (From Wang Bingyu) 4. Knowing that there will be a contest, I cant wait to tell you about it.（From

14、 Wang Siya）III句式多样化肯定不如双否好陈述不如倒装妙主动不如被动巧分词结构不能少1. To begin with, you are talented in making a speech. (From Ren Feiran)3. However, you should sign up on our school website by yourself.(From Teng Ziyue)2. A month later, you will get the opportunity to show your Chinese. (From Sun Peiyao) 4. In a word

15、, I do hope you will accept my invitation and perform well.(From Wang Zhengyang)4行文连贯化起-创造良好开端承-顺势承上启下转-巧妙转折过渡合-完美结束文段Outer beautybeautiful handwriting 注重外表，美化书写813行文连贯化句式多样化词汇高级化短语优先化五作品赏析14句式多样化12词汇高级化conveniencecontestorganize13行文连贯化One possible versionDear George, How are you getting on these da

16、ys? Our school plans to hold a Chinese speech contest for foreign students and wed like to invite you to compete in it. The contest is a good chance for you to show how well youve learned Chinese. It will take place in the school hall from 9:00 to 12:00 on the morning of January 18. The topic is “Traditional Chinese Culture”. If you are interested, sign up on our school website before January 10. I am looking forward to your reply. Your