中医学术论文写作课件

1、中医学术论文写作兰凤利 上海中医药大学2022/9/191中医学术论文英文写作1 写作目的2 论文结构3 写作要求4 写作方法2022/9/1921. 写作目的发表在国际知名学术期刊，如SCI收录期刊。与中医药有关的SCI期刊（按2005年收录分析）（IF/2004年）：(1) Journal of Alternative and Complementary Medicine （1.401）(2) Complementary Therapies in Medicine (1.317) (3) Alternative Therapies in Health and Medicine (0.971

2、 )(4) American Journal of Chinese Medicine (0.593 )(5) Acupuncture & Electro-Therapeutics Research （0.341）2022/9/1932 论文结构 (structure/format)2.1 扉页 (title page)2.2 正文 (main body)2.3 附录 (appendix)2022/9/1942.2 Main Body 正文(IMRaD)IntroductionMaterials and methodsResults (and)Discussion(Conclusion)2022

3、/9/1962.3 Appendix 附录Acknowledgement References2022/9/1973.1 Introduction 引言The purpose of an introduction is to bring the reader into the general area of your study and then state the specific area of study (move from the general to the specific). The introduction shows the scope of your investigat

4、ion efforts.2022/9/199Introduction200 words背景Statement of general area or history of problem意义Statement of importance or need进展Statement of previous findings, reports or studies (citations)目的Statement of purpose of current study范围Statement of specific area of problem to be studied2022/9/19103.2 Mate

5、rials and Methods 材料与方法Readers must be able to reproduce your results, evaluate the validity of your results and the soundness of your methods, and follow the logic in the paper. 2022/9/1911Materials and Methods简要说明研究设计（Study design）详细说明研究对象：Patients, Subjects, healthy volunteers, animals (sex, age,

6、 species, breed, physiological state, etc.)随机分组方法和选择标准（Methods of any random assignment of subjects to groups and criteria for admission to study groups）药物（Drug）,激素（hormone）,试剂（reagent）, 其它化学品（other chemicals）, 商标（trademark）,生产厂家（manufacturer）及所在地（location）简要说明测定方法（Method of measurement）简要说明统计分析方法（M

7、ethod of statistical analysis） 2022/9/1912Materials and MethodsApproval from “Institutional Review Board” (“informed consent” from patients and explanation on “Animal Welfare Act”) Randomized Controlled Trial, RCT: JAMA 1996; 276: 637-639 或 www. consort-statement. org/statement. HtmPast tense2022/9/

8、19133.3 Results 结果This section tells the reader what happened in your work. Remember: let your results speak for themselves and dont embellish (leave that for Discussion section) 2022/9/1914ResultsIn chronological orderIntegrated, clear, pithy, correlated, and logicalPast tense(present tense: truth

9、or well-known fact, e.g. Erectile dysfunction is common in men with diabetes.)Significant/significance: 2022/9/1916Points for attention: Such expressions as “The results tended to be greater than”, “showed no promising trends”, “It could/might be inhibited by” should be avoided.2022/9/1917Discussion

10、简要说明研究背景 (Background)简要介绍总的发现 (General findings)介绍具体要点 (Introduction of points)与先有发现 (若有) 进行比较 (Comparison in the context of other studies)意义(Suggested meaning)结论 (Conclusion): We conclude that前瞻研究 (Future studies)2022/9/1919DiscussionTense分清实验过程和结果（past tense）与分析意见（present tense）；他人研究结果（past tense或

11、present perfect）与本研究结果（past tense）；普遍适用的结论（present tense）与只适用本研究的结论（past tense）；2022/9/1920DiscussionThe Use of Parenthesis: however, we believe/think/consider, to our knowledge, in our experience (practice)避免含糊的倾向：These results seem to suggest that oral sildenafil could be useful in some selected p

12、opulations and certain conditions.2022/9/19213.5 Acknowledgement 致谢Always get the persons approval of your intention to mention him in the acknowledgement and of the form in which you will present the acknowledgement.2022/9/1922AcknowledgementThis study was supported by Medical Research Funds from S

13、tate Administration of Traditional Chinese Medicine.Dr. Wang was supported by a National Research Council Associate-ship. We thank Li Yunlong for his assistance with technical aspects of this study.We are grateful to Mei Mei for assistance in preparing the manuscript. 2022/9/19233.6 References 参考文献R

14、eference styles should be specific to each journal. References: Uniform Requirements for Manuscripts Submitted to Biomedical Journals /journals/resource/unifrqr.htmE.g.2022/9/1924References 参考文献在排印中（In Press/Forthcoming）, e.g.Leshner Al. Molecular mechanisms of cocaine addiction. N Engl J Med. In Pr

15、ess 1996.个人交流（personal communication），尽量避免使用（ICMJE），如确需使用，可采用以下形式：In a letter received from Robert J Glynn, MD. in January 2005, he stated that In a conversation in March 2006, Denis A Evans, MD reported that Our findings in this aspect of the study agree with those of Paul A Scherr, PhD (written co

16、mmunication, September 2005) 2022/9/19263.7 others 其它插图说明：Type or print out legends for illustrations using double spacing, starting on a separate page.插图：Design your figures for the appropriate reduction.表格：A table should be totally self-contained unit of information.2022/9/19274.1 写作ABC4.1.1 Passi

17、ve or active?Patients were instructed on the use of oral sildenafil. Blood levels were monitored every four hours.We instructed each patient on use of oral sildenafil and showed patients how to record blood glucose values every four hours.2022/9/19294.1.2 We or I? (single author)“Resolve to take the

18、 great leap and say I. Everybody should by now recognize that a mask is more conspicuous than a face.” Wilson Follett, Modern American UsageThe author (I)This study, this report, this research, this thesis (I)2022/9/19304.1.3 写作ABCPrewriting: to select a journal, and read “Instructions to Authors”;S

19、imple outlining on the basis of your research materials;From Interior to Exterior: writing “materials and methods”, “results”, and “discussion” first, then writing “introduction”, “abstract” and “title”. 2022/9/19314.2 论文标题的撰写Titles are to be written to be understood by those in your field, telling

20、them exactly what you have done in your work. 2022/9/19324.2.1 文题的一般要求Titles should be short, clear, and amenable to indexing. (JAMA)1) short and concise: Write in one line (not a sentence), not containing an active verb, not exceeding 25 words or 120-140 letters and spaces, no abbreviations or chem

21、ical symbols except those that are generally accepted, e.g. DNA, RNA, AIDS, CT; (Cv could be explained as cardiovascular or costovertebral, etc.)2022/9/19332) Informative: State exactly what you want the reader to know about your paper and your work;3) Indexing: Pack as many key words or indexing te

22、rms as possible into the title without overloading it, key words not in the title will be in the abstract or can go in the “Key Words” section of the paper, key words are usually in the beginning or ending of the title.2022/9/19344.2.2 简洁 副标题的使用副标题的作用A. 突出病例数Gallstone Ileus: A Review of 40 CasesB. 突

23、出重点内容Acquired Immune Deficiency Syndrome: Disease Characteristics and Oral ManifestationsBalancing: Treatment of Gynecological Diseases2022/9/1935C. 突出研究方法Urine Cannabinoid Analysis: An Integrated Multimethod ApproachD. 突出同位关系Academic Dismissals: Due Process 2022/9/1936E. 解释性用词Pancreatitis in System

24、ic lupus erythematosus (SLE): A case report and review of the literatureExamples of Paired Medicinals: Experiences in Compatibility Developed by Different Schools2022/9/1937F. 提问或选择Is chronic abdominal pain a surgical symptom or a psychiatric symptom?Chronic abdominal pain: a surgical or psychiatric

25、 symptom? 2022/9/19384.2.3 介词的使用 research on management forobservation onexperience inintroduction tocontrast betweensurgery for2022/9/19394.2.4 格式1) 词组式Some Aspects of Renal TumorsEffects of Glucose on Neuroblastoma in Vitro and in VivoPattern Identification and Treatment of DysmenorrheaExperiences

26、 in Treating Infantile High FeverTreatment of Globus Hystericus (Plum-Pit Qi) with Integrative Medicine2022/9/19402) 主谓式Lets Do Away with SmallpoxDietary Cholesterol As Carcinogenic for Human Colon Cancer2022/9/1941(3) 疑问式Can Prostatectomy Be Improved?Must We Specialize Herniorrhaphy for Better Resu

27、lts?Does Danggui Sini Decoction Contain Fresh Ginger?What Are the Indications of Scutellaria Decoction?2022/9/19424.3 论文摘要的翻译与写作4.3.1 论文摘要的作用4.3.2 论文摘要的分类4.3.3 论文摘要中时态的应用2022/9/19434.3.1 论文摘要的作用“The function of the abstract of a scientific paper is to provide an overview of the paper so that the readers know the main story and a few essential details of your wo