高三英语写作复习课易珊珊 完整版课件PPT

1、 高三英语写作专题复习 An English writing practice for the students of Senior Three欧阳遇实验中学：易珊珊Lead in:A talk on writing1.What do you think of writing ?2.Is there a shortcut to writing ?3.What kind of writing is the most difficult?How to write a Composition According to Tables and Graphs雅礼联考卷： 观察下列图表，请以“Changes

2、 in the Ownership of House”为题，为校报写一篇短文。短文应包括以下内容：1、根据图示描述该市住房产权的变化2、分析产生这些变化的原因3、说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响Some Problems existed in Ss compositions:Some Ss couldnt understand the requirements very well. So they only described the changes. Theydidnt analyze the reasons and the effects.2. The ways of expressio

3、ns arent proper. Some students couldnt express what they want to say.3. There are too many mistakes in your compositions, including spelling, grammar and so on.4. You should pay much more attention to your handwriting.学生习作Changes in the ownership of House Ten years ago in 1995, the state-owned house

4、s were three times as many as those owned privately. And now in 2005, the private houses are four times as many as state-owned houses. The reason of the great change is that people in the big city have become richer than before. This allows them to afford more houses. And at the same time, the natio

5、nal market is opening to more people and areas, so the state-owned houses become less. The change may have certain advantages. More people will live in a good habitat. Their lives will be better than before. And the whole country will be a peaceful and friendly place. It also shows that our country

6、has been able to meet all the challenges from all over the world. -Written by Chenchen (Class 56 )范文赏析Study an example of Good Writing 1.情景作文某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法。词数不少于60。生词：图表chart一、内容要点： 1. 图表1中六项活动及所用时间 2. 图表2中一个数据反映的情况 3. 自己的一个看法二、说明： 1. 内容要点可用不

7、同方式表达。 2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。The writing process:1）Have a correct understanding of the given information，and grasp the main idea；2）Make a careful analysis of the information， ask yourself the questions 3）Write an outline；4）Use the right technique of writing. The writing process:1）Have a correct understa

8、nding of the given information，and grasp the main idea；2）Make a careful analysis of the information， ask yourself the questions 3）Write an outline；4）Use the right technique of writing.1. What is the main idea of chart 1 ? the daily average amount of time on different after-class activities. 2. How l

9、ong do the students spend on their homework? 93 minutes3. How much time does it take them to watch TV? 46 minutes4.How much time does listening music and working on the computer take up ?34 minutes and 30 minutes each5. Do they have much time left for sports ?25 minutes6. Do they still have time for

10、 housework?12 minutes7.Any comments on one of the data given in chart 2 ?Little time for sports8. Any suggestions ?Do more exercise Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities. The students put the most time93 minutesinto their

11、homework, and next in line is watching TV, which takes up 46 minutes. They put in about the same amount of time listening to music and working on the computer, 34 minutes and 30 minutes each. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework. As is shown on Chart 2, only 10% o

12、f the time is taken up with sports activities. I think the school should encourage the students to do more exercise after class. This way, they may be healthier and more energetic. 范文赏析 This kind of writing is an information interpretation processThe information may be given in numbers，lines or curv

13、es，etc，usually a few explanations are givenThe organization of the writing is essential to a good essay of tables and graphs Generally，it is as follows：Features IntroductionThat is，in the first paragraph，you have to demonstrate the general situation of what has been reflected in the table or graph；T

14、hen，in the second paragraph，you have to analyze carefully the numbers，lines or curves，and point out the rate of increase or decrease；In the end，you have to write your own opinion or commentGeneral introductionAnalysisConclusion 概要介绍分析图表总结概括课堂练笔CLASSROOM PRACTICE课堂练笔Classroom PracticeDirections： Writ

15、e a composition based on the title and the following chart in no less than 120 wordsThe causes are given under the horizontal line And the percentage of the total of 80 fire incidents is given in the following vertical column . Analysis of the Sample Item 1). The main idea of the graph is： Fire caus

16、es 2). From the graph，we know that there are three main causes of fires： aSmokers（nearly50） bDefective insulation（38） cChildren playing with matches（12） 3). Thus，we can，by comparing the above information，make a comment of the main topic，then reach a conclusionModel Essay From the graph above，we can

17、see that fire，one of the most terrible killers in China，is mainly caused by smokers，defective insulations or children playing with matches In 1997，80 fire incidents took place in ChinaWhile nearly 50were caused by smokers，38 were caused by defective insulation，and 12were caused by children playing w

18、ith matchesNo matter what the type of the fire，we can almost be sure that they were caused by carelessness From the graph，we can conclude that smokers are the leading cause of fires，but we also need to educate our children，warning them of the dangers of playing with matches and instruct workers be more careful with insulationHomework请根据下面曲线图（graph）“The number of car accidents in 2001”，写一篇文章。 1描述2001年不同月份汽车事故分布（distribution）及总趋势。 2描述汽车事故的可能原因及对策。 3词数：100左右。 4参考词汇：高峰peak；多雨的日子rainy days。 Main points: Part 1: demonstrate the general si