2021届高考英语二轮复习好题专题06书面表达-读后续写或概要写作第04期含解析

1、2021届高考英语二轮复习好题专题06书面表达_读后续写或概要写作第04期含解析2021届高考英语二轮复习好题专题06书面表达_读后续写或概要写作第04期含解析2021届高考英语二轮复习好题专题06书面表达_读后续写或概要写作第04期含解析书读后续写或概要写作【2021届广东省仲元中学、中山一中等七校联合体高三上学期第一次联考】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要.Haagen-Dazs （哈根达斯雪糕) from Europe started in 1989 and is 510 times more expensive than regular ice cream. Ther

2、e is no real advantage。 However， it adopted a unique marketing strategy, and quickly occupied the market as a top ice cream brand。HaagenDazs did not set up shops in ordinary supermarkets or grocery stores. Haggen-Dazs leisure fashion shops are located in busy sections of malls。 The layout is careful

3、ly planned to create an elegant atmosphere， and sometimes， a flagship （旗舰） store will cost several million dollars.Compared to other ice cream brands， HaagenDazs consumers are tightly grouped。 It is understood that HaagenDazs seldom does television advertising。 The majority of ads have the highly vi

4、sual impact of the print medium。 In particular many advertisements look for those pyramid tip consumers. Moreover， as long as the consumer who spends 500 Yuan to fill in a small form can become their members, these members will be regularly sent advertisements by direct mail. Praise of customers is

5、a powerful weapon for Haagen Dazs.There is always much creative ingenuity （独出心裁) in Haagen-Dazs advertising, so it is remembered by the public。 Initial advertisements such as： Delicious HaagenDazs, like 24K gold, Kobe beef from Japan， original palm oil， mushroom truffles and Chinese ceramics and Lov

6、e her， let her eat HaagenDazs. attracted numerous HaagenDazs lovers who became regulars.Today， Haggen Dazs has about 700 stores in 55 countries with annual sales of more than 1 billion US dollars. HaagenDazs has become the worlds most popular ice cream brand. In the United States， its market share i

7、s 6.1%, 1 in France, 4。6% in Japan, 4 in Singapore， and 5 in Hong Kong.Determined to win the majority of wealthy customers, they combined positioning in the marketplace with dedicated brand goals. This is the real secret of success.【答案】Haagen-Dazs has become the most popular ice cream for its distin

8、ctive marketing strategy. (要点1）One reason is that its shops are often situated in busy malls。 (要点2)Another factor lies in its print advertisements with an excellent visual effect especially targeting consumers with great purchasing power. （要点3)Besides, the creativity in the advertisements also creat

9、es an impressive image. (要点4）In a word, adopting a unique marketing strategy has contributed to the brands worldwide popularity。 (要点5）【解析】这是一篇概要写作。文章主要介绍了哈根达斯成为最受欢迎的冰激凌的市场策略。通读全文可知,本文是总分总结构，可以从以下五点进行总结：因为独特的市场策略哈根达斯成为最受欢迎的冰激凌;原因之一是它的商店都开在繁忙的商场;原因之二是它的广告极具视觉效应，可以吸引顾客购买；原因之三是具有创造力的广告令人印象深刻；总的来说，独特的市场策

10、略是这个品牌受到全世界欢迎的原因。即：Haagen-Dazs has become the most popular ice cream for its distinctive marketing strategy. (要点1)One reason is that its shops are often situated in busy malls. （要点2)Another factor lies in its print advertisements with an excellent visual effect especially targeting consumers with gr

11、eat purchasing power. (要点3)Besides, the creativity in the advertisements also creates an impressive image。 （要点4)In a word， adopting a unique marketing strategy has contributed to the brands worldwide popularity。 （要点5）【2021届湖北省荆门市龙泉中学高三8月月考】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数为150词左右.As the mot

12、her of an eleven-yearold girl， I have read several books that tell parents how to bring up a girl to be beautiful， elegant， confident， and rich。 However, I have always believed that girls need to be brave above all else, but this is easier said than done。I still remember I couldnt see the screen dir

13、ectly when my daughter switched to the animal channel， which was broadcasting a show about snakes. I stood as far away from the TV as possible， too scared to open my eyes. However， my little angel was not scared of the snakes. In fact， she watched the show with a keen interest。 I was relieved that m

14、y daughter didnt get too many genetic phobias(遗传恐惧症). Even to this day， she is still obsessed with challenging herself with new things.This year, I got a chance to study in Singapore for six months. After the novelty of the first few days had gone， I found myself missing my family。 With the summer v

15、acation approaching, my husband agreed to make good use of the fact that I was staying in Singapore。 He brought our daughter out to visit me and to enjoy the new experience in a new country。 The reunion day finally came。 My husband and my daughter arrived in the second week of July. I was so looking

16、 forward to seeing them. I had made many preparations for their visit. On the first day, I arranged for us to see Gardens by the Bay。 When we walked out of the MRT station, we were amazed by the sight of the Super Trees. When my daughter saw lots of people walking on the Skyway， she couldnt help sho

17、uting excitedly that she wanted to have a try. The Skyway is a 22meterhigh suspension bridge from which you can enjoy a birds eye view。 Last time I came here with my friends, I firmly rejected their repeated attempts to challenge me to go up there. It was like the day with the snakes all over again.

18、 But could I really reject my little angel? Paragraph 1：My daughter was waiting for my reply。 _Paragraph 2：Halfway across the bridge, I had to stop。 _【答案】Possible version one：My daughter was waiting for my reply. I was secretly very worried。 But my daughter kept begging me and I could not bear to re

19、ject her。 Bravery was the most significant quality that I wanted her to possess。 Her curiosity was so strong that I couldnt resist。 I nodded slightly， and my daughters frowning face slowly broke into a smile。 My response surprised my husband, who reacted with the wildest excitement as we walked towa

20、rds the Skyway。 When I stepped on it, I found myself horrified by the height。 I grabbed the railing, almost unable to move.Halfway across the bridge, I had to stop. My heart beat wildly， casting scared glances down the bridge。 My husband and daughter held my hands tightly. I walked as though I were

21、drunk. But their firm gaze built up my confidence and we kept going together。 “Mom， look, its so beautiful。” What I saw there filled my soul with joy. The bay spread out far below me。 Beyond it stood the tall and beautiful skyscrapers. I looked down at my little girl who taught her mother how to be

22、brave, and breathed a sigh of relief.Possible version two: My daughter was waiting for my reply。 I looked at her, then at the Skyway. I felt my heart threatening to burst out from my chest。 My husband, who was used to this kind of situation and understood how scared I was, consoled me. He said he co

23、uld go with our little girl instead. But my daughter wouldnt give up easily and shouted out her own encouragement. I plucked up my courage and took my first step onto the suspension bridge， then another, I inched forward, all the way holding on tight to the handrail. Halfway across the bridge， I had

24、 to stop。 I stood there, and my legs trembled despite my fruitless attempt to stay calm。 Below the bridge， the treetops formed an ocean of green waves that threatened to devour me。 Just then, I heard a familiar voice， and two little hands slipped into my arm. Looking down， I saw my little angels bri

25、ght smile， encouraging me to finish the walk。 Eventually, we reached the end together。 My husband was surprised at my nerve， but I knew the reason I had felt so brave was for my little girl。【解析】本篇书面表达是读后续写.通过阅读所给文章可知,作者认为女孩最重要的品质是勇敢，但是说起来容易做起来难,作者被电视上播放的关于蛇的节目吓得离电视很远,但女儿却不怕，今年作者去新加坡学习,丈夫带着女儿来看她，一家人去

26、滨海湾公园玩,女儿想玩悬索桥的航线，作者却不敢玩,但是她真的会拒绝女儿吗？续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：我的女儿在等着我的答复，所以本段应该写作者做决定的过程和丈夫的反应，着重写作者的心理活动,虽然自己很怕,但是希望女儿勇敢，所以不得不答应，丈夫对这一决定应该很惊讶等内容。第二段开头是:在桥的半道上，我不得不停止本段应该写作者由于太害怕停下来后，丈夫和女儿的反应，他们应是鼓励并帮助作者战胜恐惧，最教会作者勇敢.续写时注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：could not bear to do sth。,burst o

27、ut，pluck up等高级词汇；Bravery was the most significant quality that I wanted her to possess。 中that引导的定语从句，Her curiosity was so strong that I couldnt resist。 中so。.that。引导的状语从句，My husband, who was used to this kind of situation and understood how scared I was, consoled me.中who引导的非限制性定语从句和how引导的宾语从句等高级句式。【2

28、021届湖北襄阳一中高三八月月考】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。A mother is a person who, seeing there are only four pieces of pie for five people, promptly announces she never did care for pie.-Tenneva JordanI knew I was not supposed to be quite so excited。 I was too old for that。 At age eleven， the oldest and my m

29、oms grown up” girl, I had to keep my cool。 I was in middle school after all. But every chance I got， when I was alone, I checked each present under the tree. I read every tag and felt every package， guessing at the contents within. I had examined each gift so often that I could tell which present we

30、nt to which person without even looking at the tags。It had been a tough year for my family。 Whenever my mom looked over at the tree and scattered（撒） presents， she would sigh and warn us， ”There wont be as much for Christmas this year. Try not to be disappointed.” Christmas had traditionally been a t

31、ime for my parents to spoil us. In years past， the presents would pile up and spill out from under the tree， taking over the living room. I had heard the phrase ”giving is better than receiving, but thought that whoever had said that must have been out of their mind. Getting presents was the whole p

32、oint！ It was the reason I couldnt get to sleep on Christmas Eve。On Christmas morning, we eagerly waited in the hallway until Dad told us everything was ready。 We rushed into the living room and let the wrapping paper fly。 We made weak attempts to wait and watch while other family members opened thei

33、r presents, but as the time passed we lost our self-control。Heres another one for you， said Mom as she handed me a package。 I looked at it， confused。 Having spent so much time examining the presents before Christmas， I recognized this one。 But it had not been mine。 It was my moms。 A new label had be

34、en put on it， with my name written in my mothers handwriting.Mom, I cant。.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2。续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:I was stopped by my mothers eager, joyful look._Paragraph 2:I have always remembered that Christmas fondly. _【答案】Paragraph 1:I was stopped by my mothers eager， joyful loo

35、k。 ”Lets see what it is， honey. Hurry and open it。 It was a blow dryer. Though this may seem but a simple gift, to me it was so much more. Being an eleven-year-old girl, I was stunned。 In my world, where receiving largely outweighed giving， my moms act of selflessness was incomprehensible. It was a

36、huge act. Tears filled my eyes and I thought in disbelief about how much my mom must love me to give up her Christmas so I could have a few more presents.Paragraph 2:I have always remembered that Christmas fondly。 It had such an impact on me。 As an adult with children in my life whom I adore, I can

37、now understand my moms actions。 I see， actually, she was not giving up her Christmas” as I had thought, but was finding an even greater joy in her Christmas because giving truly is better than receiving. My moms simple act meant the world to me。 Whenever I look back on my moms giving， I will choose

38、to give in my life。【解析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生根据阅读内容续写两段,每段第一句已给出。本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知,有一年，作者的家庭经济状况不是很好，因此圣诞节 的礼物没有往年那么多，于是作者的母亲把本来属于自己的圣诞礼物送给了作者。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：看到母亲热切的,高兴的表情,我没再继续说下去。所以接下来应该 写“我”在母亲的劝说下打开礼物，描述礼物及我看到礼物感受，和对于母亲无私的把礼物送给我的感受等。 第二段开头是:我总是深深地记得那个圣诞节。本段应该写母亲在圣诞节那个无私的举动对我的影响，以 及在我长大之后终于明白了母亲当

39、时的行为，感受到母亲对我深深的爱，也理解了我小时候不理解的那句 短语“付岀胜于接受。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要特别熟悉所给划线词语, 恰当的时候加以运用.最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后,记得用下划线标出你 所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，逻辑连贯，故事完整，符合题目要求。使用了一些高级词汇和高级句子供我们学习参 考.如：incomprehensible, in disbelief， fondly，等高级词汇；高级句子：Being an elevenyearold girl， I was stun

40、ned.非谓语动词作状语.As an adult with children in my life whom I adore，”定语从句。Whenever I look back on my moms giving, I will choose to give in my life。让步状语从句等，都为本篇范文增色不少。【2021届湖南省衡阳市一中高三第一次月考】阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整故事.续写的词数应为150词左右。The big Town Hall clock was striking midnight when Frank began to cross th

41、e bridge。 The dark night air was cold and a little wet， and the street lamp gave little light. Frank was anxious to get home and his footsteps rang loudly on the silent night。When he reached the middle of the bridge， he thought he could hear someone coming near behind him. He looked back but could s

42、ee no one. However , the sound continued and Frank began to walk more quickly. Then he slowed down again , thinking there was nothing to fear in a town as quiet as this。Just then ， he heard short ， quick steps closely behind him。 By the time he reached the other side of the bridge ， he could almost

43、feel someone at his heels. He turned round and there stood a man in a large coat。 A hat was pulled down over his eyes and very little of his face could be seen.Frank said something about the weather in an effort to be friendly。 The man did not answer but asked roughly where Oakfield House was. Frank

44、 pointed to a big house in the distance and the stranger continued his way。Then Frank wondered why the stranger had wanted to find Oakfield House at such an hour. He knew that the people who lived there were very rich。 Almost without realizing what he was doing , he began following the stranger quic

45、kly。The man was soon outside the house and Frank saw him look up at the windows. A light was still on and the man waited until it went out。 When about half an hour had passed, Frank saw him climb noiselessly over the wall and heard him drop on the ground at the other side。Paragraph 1：Now Frank knew

46、what the man wanted to do._Paragraph 2：Frank couldnt just stand in the dark and wait。_【答案】Paragraph 1:Now Frank knew what the man wanted to doEveryone knew that Oakfield House was filled with artwork worth millions of dollars。 It was clear to Frank that the family inside was in danger. Would the man

47、 have a weapon？ Would he be strong enough to overpower him before he could harm the people inside? Franks heart was racing with fear. He reached for his cellphone to call the police, but found it out of power. If only he had charged his phone before leaving the office, but it was too late。 Paragraph

48、 2:Frank couldnt just stand in the dark and wait. He had to do something， even if it meant risking his own life. At his feet he silently found several goodsized stones， and he threw them with all his strength right at the windows of the house。 The clatter woke up the people inside the house and a li

49、ght came on upstairs。 The man froze， not quite knowing what had just happened。 Lights came on everywhere in the house and within a minute the night was filled with sounds of police sirens screaming towards Oakfield House。【解析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。根据所给的两个段首句，来续写一个完整的故事。本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，午夜时分Frank走在路上，总感觉有

50、人跟着自己，他放慢脚步,发现一个身穿大衣，帽檐遮脸的人，Frank与其交谈，试图表现出镇定的样子，而那人并不理睬,只顾着问Oakfield House怎么走。Frank好奇陌生人为什么这么晚要去Oakfield House，并且住在那里的人非常富有。想到这些,Frank决定悄悄跟随谋生人看他到底要做什么，在Oakfield House外，Frank看到陌生人等灯全熄灭后翻墙进入了Oakfield House里面根据段落首句，确定段落走向。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：现在Frank知道这个男人要干什么了。可能Frank猜出这个男子是盗贼。接下来Frank会做什么呢？第二段开头是：Frank不

51、能站在那里干等。他又在等什么呢？很有可能Frank报了案，他认为不能干等着警察来。所以第一段续写Frank报案，第二段Frank接下来采取了什么措施,最后盗贼被擒住。【点睛】本文续写情节合情合理，内容拓展丰富，并且运用了丰富多变的句式:如It was clear to Frank that the family inside was in danger。 此句运用了it做形式主语；If only he had charged his phone before leaving the office， but it was too late。此句运用了虚拟语气;He had to do somet

52、hing， even if it meant risking his own life。此句运用了让步状语从句为文章增色添彩。【2021届重庆市高考第一次预测性考试】请认真阅读下面这幅图片及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。According to a recent survey of 2,020 people done by China Youth Daily, 81.8 percent of the interviewees supported hardship education including experiencing life in poor areas， ou

53、tdoor training， taking part-time jobs， and doing housework。Qiao Yu， from Tianjin Foreign Languages School, also supports the idea Hardship helps us grow and be prepared for the difficulties of society,” said the 18-yearold， who worked in a cake store this summer。But while it contributes to students

54、development， ”hardship education shouldnt be seen as simply making students suffer，” Sun Yunxiao， director of the China Youth and Children Research Center told China Youth Daily。 It should follow teenagers growth。 Sun said that students could also do sports to learn to face difficulties， for doing s

55、ports can greatly strengthen their bodies and minds。(写作内容)（1)以约30个词概括图文的主要内容；（2）以约120个词谈谈你对“吃苦教育的理解和个人看法,并给出23点理由.（写作要求）（1)可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子;(2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称:（3)不必写标题.(评分标准）概括准确，语言规范,内容合适，语篇连贯。【答案】Possible version 1 (支持)：Despite the improvement of our lives， “hardship education in China s

56、till gains widespread recognition， yet it arouses different voices among the public as well according to a recent survey.As is known， hardship education refers to all kinds of activities including community service， social practice, voluntary work and various sports, which allow teenagers to experie

57、nce the difficulties of life and society, thus contributing to their growth。From my perspective, with the fast-paced development of our living standards, hardship education has become more of a must for the contemporary youth。 For one thing， challenging activities in various forms guarantee teenager

58、s access to building up their strength and developing necessary surviving skills. For another, but for hardship education， teenagers could not enhance their overall qualities such as courage and perseverance, sweeping away all the obstacles on the way to success and better preparing themselves for t

59、he future.To sum up， society， schools and families should attach great importance to hardship education for all students.Possible version 2 (反对）：Despite the improvement of our lives， “hardship education” in China still gains widespread recognition， yet it arouses different voices among the public as

60、 well according to a recent survey。While I admit that hardship education is intended to cultivate desirable qualities such as selfsufficiency and perseverance in students, the education process doesnt necessarily involve shortterm physical hardship for students to undergo. Firstly， hardship educatio