2022-2023学年新教材高中英语Unit2Besportybehealthy写作指导写一封鼓励朋友体育锻炼的邮件课件牛津译林版必修第二册

1、写一封鼓励朋友体育锻炼的邮件 英 语Unit 6SurvivalUnit 2Be sporty,be healthy内容索引感知文体常识牢记写作素材示例写作步骤感知文体常识本单元的写作话题涉及运动锻炼和健康方面的内容,对应了课程标准中“人与自我”这一主题语境,要求考生能够就“运动和锻炼”表达自己的想法。体裁可以是应用文、议论文等。牢记写作素材(一)增色词汇1.regularly adv.定期地2.routine n.惯例,常规3.physical adj.身体的4.energetic adj.精力充沛的5.work out锻炼6.of great benefit有益的7.build up on

2、es body强健身体8.in good health健康状况良好(二)精彩句型1.It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on.能为你提供关于的一些建议是我的荣幸。2.I am writing to express my views concerning.我写信是想表达我对的观点。3.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following steps.在我看来,采取以下措施是明智的。4.I think it would be more helpful/beneficial if you could

3、.我认为,如果你能可能会更有帮助/更有益。5.It might be a good idea to find a partner with whom you can exercise.找一个可以和你一起锻炼的搭档或许是个好主意。6.I suggest that you should choose an activity that you like.我建议你选择一个你喜欢的活动。7.I hope you will consider my suggestions.我希望你会考虑我的建议。8.I will appreciate your consideration of my advice/sugg

4、estions/tips.如果你能考虑我的建议,我会很感激。示例写作步骤【写作要求】假定你是李华。你的笔友林涛来信说,因学习忙、锻炼少,他最近经常生病,这也影响了他的学习。请根据提示写一封英文回信。要点包括:1.锻炼的重要性;2.提出锻炼建议。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好。【审题谋篇】 体裁应用文人称第一人称时态一般现在时话题提出健康方面的建议框架第一段写信的目的第二段具体建议:每天锻炼一小时,参加俱乐部,用app监测自己第三段表达期望【遣词造句】1.词汇(1)under the weather略有不适,不舒服(2)ease v.减轻,

5、放松(3)in good health健康状况良好(4)efficiency n.效率(5)make a detailed schedule制定详细的进度表(6)stick with持续,坚持(7)routine n.常规,惯例(8)last but not least最后但同样重要的是2.句式(1)要点翻译我了解到你身体不适好几天了。I have known that you have been for days.我写信给你一些建议。I am writing to .你只有在健康的时候才能继续学习并提高学习效率。You can only and when you are .参加你学校里的健身

6、俱乐部可能是个好主意。 might be a good idea .under the weather give you some advice carry on studying increase your study efficiency in good health It to join a sports club in your school (2)句式升级用非谓语动词和非限制性定语从句合并句和句_用倒装句改写句_Having known that you have been sick/under the weather for days,I am writing to give yo

7、u some advice.Only when you are in good health,can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency. 【妙笔成篇】Dear Lin Tao,_Having known that you have been under the weather for days,I am writing to give you some advice.Exercise can improve your physical conditions and ease your mind.Only when

8、you are in good health,can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency.First of all,I suggest that you take at least one hours exercise every day,and make a detailed schedule for your exercise,which can help you stick with an exercise routine.Besides,it might be a good idea to join a sp

9、orts club in your school,which costs little or none.Last but not least,you_Sincerely yours,Li Huacan download an app to monitor your exercise.I hope you will find the advice helpful.I would be very pleased to see you have a stronger body.针对训练假定你是李华,你的美国朋友James由于不爱运动、吃垃圾食品上瘾等原因陷入了肥胖的困扰。请你通过电子邮件给他提一些建

10、议,帮助他减肥。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear James, _I have received your email telling me that you are not interested in taking exercise and that you are addicted to eating junk food.Now you are worried about gaining weight.If you want to lose weight,what you should first do is to find out why you are overweight.From your email,it seems that there are two reasons for being fat:a lack of exercise and an unbalanced diet.I have two suggestions.First,set aside some time to exercise