高中英语讲义：Unit+5+THE+VALUE+OF+MONEY+Section+ⅦReading+for+Writing-剧本写作

1、高中英语讲义只要坚持梦想早晚会实现 Section VH Reading for Writing剧本写作本单元的写作任务是戏剧剧本创作。戏剧剧本属于记叙文。在写作形式上以对话为主，应主要包括戏剧人物、人物的语言、舞台说明性文字等。I .Prewriting(I )Learning to write after the modelTHE MILLION POUND BANK NOTEAct 2 , Scene 1Narrator : Henry is walking along the street holding the bank note in his hand.His coat is wo

2、rn in several places.He sees a sign for a tailor s shop.Henry : (entering theshop)I d like to have a suit coat.1st Clerk : (in a rudemanner)See him there.pointing to another clerk)2nd Clerk : Ready made suits? Downstairs.Henry : (after going down somestairs)Can you show me a suit please?3rd Clerk :

3、Yes , I can , sir.This way, please.Ah, here we are the very thing you need.1st Clerk : (pulling the 3rd clerk aside and whispering)Mr Reid says you (better serve him quick and get him out quick!3rd Clerk : I know what I m doing.I ve gchavss t I?Henry : It s a little too brightsn t it?3rd Clerk： (loo

4、king at him with a frown)It s all we have in your size.Henry : Well, I suppose it ought to do for now.I ll take it.3rd Clerk : Good.Shall I put it in a box?Henry ： No.I ll wear it.COhI d rather not pay you now.I d like to pay in a month.Yousee, I don t have any small change.3rd Clerk : (trying not t

5、o shew he s angry) I suppose a gentleman like you only carries very large bills.Henry ： Now, you shouldn t judge people by their clothes.I just don t want to caus(you trouble with a large note.3rd Clerk : It s no trouble at all.,Henry : In that case, there s no probleHe(givesthe clerk the bank note.

6、The clerk drops Henry s coat.Then he folds the bill and slowly unfolds it again, as if looking at somethinghecant believe is there.)Owner: Well, what seems to be the trouble?Henry ： I m just waiting for my change.Owner: Give him his change, Todd.Get going.(after getting the bank note fromTodc)Would

7、it.could it be the one I saw in the papers last week? I remember thinking that never would I hold such a note as this .to Henry)Oh, take off this coat, sir.(to Todc)Go get the others Todd! (to Henry again)Allow me , sir! This way, sir. (in another part of the shop, where there is a wide range of opt

8、ions for Henry to choosefrom)Henry： This is nice, but I really don t need it.Owner: Never mind.(with a broad smile) Oh, it s perfect was made for some kingyoubut he ll just have to wait.Youll need many suits for nsanysoccaswill.Henry : Wait a minute.I only came here to get a suit coat to wear today.

9、I dare not buy all these things.You would have to wait a long time to get paid.Owner: A long time, sir ? Why, you don t have to worry about that!3rd Clerk : Yes, we can wait forever!Henry : Well, all right.I ll take the suit coat for now and get the others later.Owner ： Fine, fine.Your address sir?H

10、enry ： I don t have one.Er.I m moving.Owner: Of course you ard That s very normaA busy man, I m sure.,篇章结构Before showing the bank note： the clerks look down upon Henry and treat him in a rude manner.After showing the bank note： the clerks and owner respect Henry a lot and even try hard to please him

11、.(n reparation for writing words and phrasesa large bank note一张大额支票in a. .manner 以一种方式show. sb sth向某人展示servevt. 服务 supposevt.认为would rather 宁愿pay vt. 支付small change 小额零钱judge.by.通过判断worry about 担心n .While writing根据下面提示，写一篇戏剧，介绍亨利带着100万英镑的钞票去理发的过程。亨 利正走在大街上，看见了一家理发店，决定去理他的长头发；理发匠用粗鲁的态 度接待了他；亨利坐在椅子上等待

12、；理发匠告诉他是否能够担负得起高昂的费用； 理发结束后，亨利出示了百万英镑的钞票；理发匠十分吃惊，告诉他随时光临。Step 1 List the outline of the passage.NarrationThe rude manner _in which _the barber treated HenryPart 3： The_change _of hairdresserattitude_.towards HenryStep 2 List the words , phrases and sentences.Words and phrasesbe doing.when. 正在做就在这时a

13、sign .for. 的标志whenever you like 无论何时你喜欢It_is_one/ s_honour_to do 做是某人的荣幸have one shair cut 理发in a rude manner以一种粗鲁的态度indeed 确实；实在afford支付得起 change 零钱；零头Sentences亨利正在大街上行走，这时他看到一个理发的标志。(when)Henry ,is walking down the .street when he. sees a sign for a pl ace that cuts hair.您能看到我头发太长了。(as)As you can

14、see my _hair is much _too long.无论什么时候，只要您想来就来，即使您仅有很少的头发要理！(even if)Please come here whenever _you like,even_if you only have _tooittle _hair _cut!为您服务是我的荣幸！(it作形式主语)It will be my honourto serve you!Step 3 Draft the passage by using the following words.when, indeed, even if(Henry is walking down the

15、 street when he seesa sign for a place that cuts hair.He decidesto have it cut.)H = Henry B = BarberH: Good afternoon, I d like to have my hair cutif I may.(The barber looks at Henrys hair and continuescutting another mans hair.)Er, Id really like a haircut.As you can seet s much too long.B: (in a r

16、ude manner) Yes, I can see thatlndeed , I can.H： Fine, well, I ll have a seat then.(He sits in oneof thebarbers chairs.The barber turns to look at Henry.)B: It s quite expensive heryaou know! Are you sure you can afford it?H： Yes.I think so.(After his hair is cut, the barber tells Henry how muchhe m

17、ust pay.Henry shows the barber the bank note.)B: Why Mr.(looks shocke。H： Adams.Henry Adams.I m sorry.I don t have any change.B: Please don t worryearing a big smile) Nothing to worry about! Nothing at all ! Please come here whenever you like even if you only have too little hair cut! It will be my h

18、onour to serve you!m .Post writing polishing the passageExchange your passage with your partner and pay attention to the following points.I.Does the writer explain why he/she changed/wanted to change?2.Does the writer tell how the changes have improved or will improve his/her life?3.Is the text well

19、 organised?4.Does the writer use words and expressions to show similarities and differences?5.Are there any grammar or spelling errors?6.Does the writer use correct punctuatio n常用词汇in addition to , besides, both.and., not only.but also., now that, thus, yet, but, however, otherwise, on the contrary,

20、 unlike, instead, although, different from , in spite of, actually, as a matter of fact while , at first, obviously亮点表达The story happened in Guang Dong in the early years of the 20th century. 这个故事发生于20世纪初叶的广东。It is very kind of you , sir, but we are not allowed to accept tips.先生，您真是太好了，但我们不能收小费。Im afraid it ll cost a large amount of money.恐怕这得花费一大笔钱。Well, I wonder if you could permit me to have one day off.嗯，不知你能否允许我请一天