中考英语作文突破指导作文模板的课件

1、中考书面表达突破中考英语作文题型模板阐述主题型 解决方法型 说明利弊型不同观点型 人物介绍型 开放型一、阐述主题型 要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述。 1阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义。 2分析并举例使其更充实。 模板：The good old proverb -（名言或谚语）reminds us that -(解释). First of all/,-(理由一). For example, -(举例说明). Secondly,-(理由二). Another case is that/for instance -(举例说明). Furthermore , -(理由三) In my

2、opinion, -(我的观点) 【例1】（2010重庆）在和谐社会里，人与人之间的互帮互助已构成我们生活中的重要组成部分。下周英国友好学校将来你校访问，你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以“Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如李智要参加演讲比赛，请你以“李智”的名义用英语写一篇讲稿。内容要点提示： ?帮助同学-友谊; ?帮助老人-幸福; ?帮助病人-快乐; ?帮助别人体会 Helping Each Other Makes the World WonderfulThe good old proverb “giving is

3、receiving ”reminds us of that we should always try to help others . First of all ,helping others make us understand the meaning of friendship.For example ,we always feel good after helping our classmates with their studies .Secondly ,we will gain pleasure when we give a hand to the old people .Furth

4、ermore , patients need help the most and happiness will come to us when we help them. In my opinion, helping others is especially important in our life and we can surely learn a lot when we help the people around us. 二、解决问题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径1问题现状 2怎样解决 模板： In recent days, we have to face the problem

5、-A which is becoming more and more serious. Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, - (解决方法一), For another - (解决方法二). Finally, - (解决方法三). In a word. I believe that a bright future is awaiting us because-(带来的好处). 【例3】（2008青岛）暑假即将来临，某

6、校学生会打算在假期期间为贫困地区和受灾地区（disaster area）的孩子奉献爱心的活动，请你用英语写一封倡议书，号召同学们用力所能及的方式伸出援助之手，奉献自己的爱心。要求：文章应包括：至少两种帮助方法，这样做的目的和意义字数80-100，短文的开头已给，不计入总词数 As students ,we should take some serious effective measures to cope with the situation . For one thing , we can go to the disaster areas to be a volunteer teacher

7、 .Therefore, we can help those children with their studies .For another, we can mail our old clothes to the children in disaster areas to make them warm in winter. Finally ,we can also donate some money ,even it is just one Yuan. It means a lot for the people there . In a word ,I believe that a brig

8、ht future is awaiting us, because the world will be a better place if we all give a helping hand . 三、说明利弊型1说明事物现状 2事物本身的优缺点（或一方面） 3你对现状（或前景）的看法 模板： Nowadays many people prefer (A) ,but is it really necessary ? Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First - (优点一). Besides (优点二）. But every

9、coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that - (缺点一)To make matters worse,- (缺点二) Through the above analysis, I think I would like to - (看法),because-(原因) 【例5】（2010哈尔滨） 练习是学习中的一个重要环节，通过英语练习，我们可以查缺补漏，拓展知识，提高成绩，但是有人认为做大量的英语练习增加负担。浪费时间，使人疲劳请你围绕九年

10、级学生是否应该做大量的英语练习这一话题展开思路谈谈你的感想。_ _ Should ninth grade students do lots of English exercise？Nowadays ,many ninth grade students prefer doing lots of English exercise, but is it really necessary ?Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. To start with , they can find out their mistakes though e

11、xercise. In addition，exercise help increase their knowledge. Finally ,doing lots of exercise will definitely improve their scores. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. First, it makes student very tired. To make it worse , doing a lot of exercise is not only boring a

12、nd tiring ,but also a waste of time. Through the above analysis, I believe I would like to do lots of exercise because it makes us learn English better 四、不同观点型1列举不同的观点2写出自己的想法 模板： It is well known that there are many differences between A and B . As features are as follows: to begin with, -(特点一),fur

13、thermore , - (特点二). Finally，-(特点三) However , B is nothing like A, on one hand， -(特点一). On the other hand, -(特点二). Besides，-(特点三) As far as I am concerned, I firmly support A 或 B , because I am sure that the more _, the more_ 【例7】（2009浙江绍兴）你和Eric的交流中了解到中美两国课堂的各种不同的特点，请你根据下表简要的描述这些特点，并就此谈谈你的想法 中国课堂：不称

14、呼老师名字；仔细听讲，做笔记 美国课堂：学生面对面就座；比较放松，可以喝饮料；自由谈论 你的想法： There are some differences between a Chinese class and an American class ,lets have a look .in china_ There are some differences between a Chinese class and an American class ,lets have a look .in china. First of all, students call their teachers “Mr

15、”or “Miss”. Second, in class they always listen to the teacher and take notes carefully .Finally, if students want to explain their ideas, they have to raise their hands . However, American class are nothing like Chinese class , on one hand ，the students sit around the desks, face to face; on the ot

16、her hand ,they can even drink coffee or juice during the classes. Whats more, they can speak freely in class. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the American class ,because the more freely we can speak in class ,the more progress we will make. 五、人物介绍型包含题目所给的全部人物特征 模板 He is a -(国籍)，he is -(年龄

17、)，he has a happy family with three people in it .he is -(性格)，in his free time， he is fond of (活动)， he is-(职业)，he is kind-hearted and always help others in his job. Many people love him because he is not only a good -(职业）but also a good friend. 【例9】（2010武汉）假设你是li ming请给你的美国朋友Tom写一封Email，介绍你的英语老师Mr.Le

18、e。要点如下：他40岁，有一个幸福的家庭性格外向，与学生相处很好他的课堂很有趣，课后帮我们学英语不抽烟，非常喜欢运动，擅长下棋写一至两点其他同学对他的看法_ _ Dear Tom: How are you recently? I am writing to tell you something about my English teacher Mr Lee Mr. Lee is forty years old . he has a happy family with three people in it .he is very outgoing ,and he gets along well

19、with us students .He doesnt smoke. In his free time ,he is fond of sports ,and he is especially good at playing chess. He is a very experienced teacher and his class is always very fun.After the class he always help us with our English .many of my classmates love him ,they think he is not only a goo

20、d teacher ,but also a good friend. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours Li Ming 六、开放型作文没有给出过多提示的作文列出自己的提示根据文章来写出相应的开头和结尾中间运用连接词to start with, next, in addition, finally等来组织，结构要清晰 【例11】（2009重庆）难忘的初中生活就要结束了。假如你是韩梅，即将迎来全新的高中生活，为了尽快适应新的环境，你打算在英语俱乐部的QQ群里面留言，谈一谈自己在高中学习、生活和与人相处等方面可能遇到的问题，并向大家寻求帮助。_ _提

21、示： 1. 可能会落后，尤其是数学 2. 不善交流，交朋友会有问题 3不能照顾自己，新学校饭吃不惯 Hi，everybody，hows it going？I will become a senior high school student this September. I am very happy，but I am afraid that I will meet some difficulties in new school .to start with , maybe I cant keep up with my classmates ,especially in maths. Besi

22、des I am not sure if I can make some friends with others because I am not good at communicating. Finally ,I dont know how to take good care of myself. I might not get used to the food in the new school . I am so worried and I really need some help 三、中考评分标准：作文一律按档给分，与错误个数无直接关系。第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语

23、言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（1-3分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。 四、做题步骤：1 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节；找出文章要表达的中心。2 列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容；3 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；4 复查：2遍1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；

24、5 誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。*总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称；三思：词汇短语句式；三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。五、作文一般框架： 文章分3段：（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；（2）正文主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。关联词1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor;2.表示选择: or, eitheror;3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after al

25、l, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore5.表示条件: if , unless6.表示对比: instead, notbut, on the one handon the other hand;7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words;8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the

26、end;9.表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, 八、常见的作文类型模板：1 书信Dear ., Im glad to receive your letter - Best wishes! Yours, Lucy a书信开头常用语 I am very glad to receive your letter (hear form you). Hello, Jane. Is everything going

27、 (on) well? /How is everything going (on)? Im writing to you for some advice on how to Im writing to ask if you can . How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met. Thank you for inviting me to . b 书信结尾常用语 Best wishes (to/for you). Wish you good luck. (I am) looking forward to hearing f

28、rom you.八、常见的作文类型提纲模板：2 图表、数字比例型（提出讨论或调查的事实）Last week, our class had a class meeting on (how to) Here are the results. （表达出不同看法或观点）Most students think While 20% of them choose to. Another 15 believe There are also some saying that （表达个人看法） As a student, I agree to3 说明利弊型 Nowadays is becoming more an

29、d more popular. It has many advantages . First, 优点1 Besides, 优点2 However, every coin has two sides. It also brings us bad influences. On the one hand, 缺点1 On the other hand, 缺点2 In my opinion,个人观点 4 不同观点型 We made a survey about whether we should 提出矛盾问题. Different people hold different ideas. Some be

30、lieve 正方观点. First, 原因1 Besides, 原因2 While others dont agree. They think反方观点. On the one hand, 原因1 On the other hand, 原因2 As for me,个人观点 5 解决问题型 Recently, the problem has been more and more serious. should do something to solve it. Firstly, 方法1 Secondly, 方法2 Finally, 方法3 I am sure if everyone can mak

31、e a contribution to , the will become better and better. 九、常用过渡性词语叙事文常用的句子间连接词：At first; at last; in the endthen/next/after thatwhen/while/as soon as/not untilat the same time; at times; once in a while;so thatTo ones surprise/joyLuckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunatelyin a word/in all议论文常用连接词表示并

32、列：eitheror; neithernor; bothand; not onlybut also; 表示递进的：besides; whats more; whats worse; (moreover); 表示原因的：because; for; because of; thanks to; (for the reason that);表示结果的：so; as a result; sothat; therefore; 表示目的的：so that; in order that; (in order) to; for; 表示对比的：while; on the one hand + on the ot

33、her hand; Each coin has two sides.; preferto; would rather dothan do;议论文常用连接词表示转折的：however; but; 表示举例的：for example; for instance; such as; like; that is to say表示总结的：in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last; 表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; have

34、great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.; 表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy; be fond of; be interested in; show great interest in; lose oneself in; put ones heart into; be good at; be poor at; be weak in;议论文常用连接词表达个人想法的：I think/believe; (as) for me; in m

35、y opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally; 其他：in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up ones mind to do; in a way; 议论文常用连接词表达个人想法的：I think/believe; (as) for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my

36、 heart; personally; 其他：in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up ones mind to do; in a way; 十、作文万能句式I will work hard to make my dream come true. I hope your dream will come true one day.It takes sb. +时间+to doSb. spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+on sth./ (in)

37、 doing sth.Its important/necessary/useful/useless/common(for sb.) to vIts nice/kind of sb. to v.Its time for sb. to do sth.Its a waste of time toIts years/days since sb. +vedIts great fun to do=sb. have great fun doingIts a pity thatIts an honor to十、作文万能句式Im/Were not allowed to Im afraid of making m

38、istakesThere be doingGreat changes have taken place insth is/are well worth v-ing.It seems/seemed thatIt seems (im)possible to vIt is said thatAs the saying goes, and . are different in many ways.too + adj./adv. to doThere are many differences between and 十、作文万能句式I have made up my mind to I am sure

39、thatI am not sure whether/ifI would rather . than It doesnt matter ifThank you for v-ing.If everyone can make a contribution to the earth/ nature/ society, our life will be better and better.十一、作文万能短语have/look for a chance to dodo outdoor activitiesbe/get used to (doing) sth.learnfrombe proud of/ ta

40、ke pride inplay an important/active part/role in agree with sb. to do sth.with the help of sb.=with ones help (反义：without ones help)be/get ready to do sth.= be/ get ready for sth.pay attention totake good care of make friends withget on/along well with 十一、作文万能短语wish you successful/successas time goes