议论文-Sharing的写法与讲评

1、Sharing民办新复兴初级中学生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的体验，如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法就分享(Sharing)话题，描述一次你与他人分享的经历，并谈谈你的感受。提示词语仅供选用：sharewith; experience; interest; learn; change; encourage; enjoy; happiness; confident【写作指导】“分享(Sharing)”这一话题范围宽泛，不易把握。同学们要关注生活中的细节和发生在自己身边的小事，并能从中以小见大，写作时方能言之有物。审题。本题要写夹叙夹议类文章，描述经历部分是“叙”，而谈感受部分则

2、是“议”。因为讲述经历主要发生在过去，所以时态方面应以一般过去时为主。二列出提纲。整篇文章分三段写较合适。1.总体评价话题同时引出观点：Sharing brings happiness/ friends/ friendship/ love/ confidence.2.谈个人经历，举出的事例要能充分支持观点； 3.升华主题，换种方式表达自己的观点。【范文】Sharing brings me many things. Of all the things it brings, friendship is the most precious.When my family moved, I had to

3、 go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that I failed. I got worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and softly asked if I was OK. After I told him about my problem, he gave me some advice. From then on, we got to know each other

4、 and shared our ideas, problems, and happiness. We became best friends.My life has been changed by sharing. Sharing with friends helps me fit in with others and lead a happy life.Believe it or not, love can be divided into many pieces. Of course, we should share our love. The girl who smiles to me i

5、s still in my mind. She used to be a selfish girl and never cared for others. The first time I saw her, she gave me the cold shoulder and kept herself in her room. I kept patient and smiled to her.Then I started to tell her about my interests, and shared my favourite book with her. Attracted by the

6、book, she began to talk with me about the book and herself. Cold as she was, shes become more active after staying with me. Happiness as well as pride blossomed in my heart. Its sharing that not only makes us closer to each other but also leads us to a new life.Sharing not only helps others, but als

7、o brings me happiness. I still remember what happened during the hot summer holiday. After having a swim with my friend Jane, we went back home. On the way, we were so thirsty that we had to stop to buy some juice. Unfortunately, we didnt have enough money. Jane suggested that we should add up our c

8、oins so that we could share the juice with each other. So we bought one bottle and asked for two straws. We both drank it up happily. That was the most delicious juice in my memory. Sharing doubled our happiness and made our friendship stronger. Sharing makes our life full of love. The more you shar

9、e with others, the happier you are.Sharing brings us happiness, and the taste of sharing is as sweet as honey. Every evening when the sun sets and the lights are on, it is time for dinner. I chat with my parents while eating. I share a lot of interesting experiences about my school life such as the crazy boys and the witty teachers. Whats more, the difficulties I have met during studying some problems on interpersonal relationship are also talked about. It is my parents who listen to me carefully and point out the correct ways where I should go. The shari