高中英语Music Supporting details(sentences)部优课件

1、Supporting sentences/detailsTo make the writing convincing安宁中学戴树媛Beijing Sichuan Tibet Lets go on a trip！Step 1 Lead inI want to go to Beijing/Sichuan/Tibet.Reasons why I want to go to Beijing/Sichuan/Tibet.topic sentenceSupporting details?Step 1 Concept(概念)Topic sentence(主旨句)It is usually placed at

2、 the beginning or the end of a paragraph. It tells the main idea of the paragraph. It also shows the purpose of the paragraph.Supporting details (支持句)Explain what is stated in the topic sentence.Provide further information on the topic sentence.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯Make the writing convincing (有说服力的).suppor

3、ting detailsexamplesreasonsstatisticseffectdescriptionexplanationcomparisonTechniques(方法) in developing supporting detailsParagraph ATopic sentenceSupporting detailsTechniques Read the paragraph A on page 64 and finish exercise of A3.1statisticsexample2-6comparisonWhat should we consider when develo

4、ping supporting details?Step 2 1.Read the following paragraph and you need: find out the topic sentence and supporting details;decide whether these supporting details are good enough to convince(使信服). If yes, what type of technique is used in developing the supporting detail?Fortunately, my parents

5、were very strict with me when I was a child. At that time, it felt like I was in prison. I had to come straight home after school and immediately do my homework. After I finished my homework, I was allowed to watch only one hour of television. While my friends were playing video games or watching ca

6、rtoons, I was usually doing chores around the house to help my mother. Both my parents were doctors. Fortunately, my parents were very strict with me when I was a child. At that time, it felt like I was in prison.I had to come straight home after school and immediately do my homework. After I finish

7、ed my homework, I was allowed to watch only one hour of television. While my friends were playing video games or watching cartoons, I was usually doing chores around the house to help my mother. Both my parents were doctors. TSSSSSMy parents were strict with me.My parents jobsI was doing chores whil

8、e my friends were playing video games or watching cartoons.I was allowed to watch one hour of television.I had to came straight home and immediately did my homework.I felt like in prisondescriptionexampleexampleexample?unrelatedcomparisonHow can we solve it? Delete it.My parents were strict with me.

9、Both of my parents were doctors.They didnt allow me to eat any street food.Find the connection.Improve it.Tip 1: Supporting details should be related to the topic sentence.2.Does the order of supporting details matter?2.The more related/important /powerful, the more forward.Good diet and exercise ar

10、e two major ways to keep healthy.1.First come, first discussed.Tip 2: The order of supporting details also matters. 3.Mind-map Draw a mind map about supporting details.Topic sentenceA paragraphSupporting detailsconceptfunctiontechniques方法tipsconceptpositionPractice writingDesign a poster to tell:1.which place you want to go;2.the reasons why you want to go there.Step 3 1. An