英语中考英语书面表达及答案

1、英语中考英语书面表达及答案一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1.书面表达地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球的环境，不浪费地球的能源，就能够让我们的周围变得更绿，生 活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。内容应该包括以下几 点：.节约用水、用电；2.节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；3.节约粮食，在更多的土地上种树；4.不乱丢杂物，保护环境；要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80词左右提示词：the greenhouse gases lifestyle彳氐碳生活方式 How does our eart

2、h turn better?The earth is our home.If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better. 【答案】How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a m

3、iddle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less

4、trees wont be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Dont throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】 【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如

5、how to do , live in , around us such as as a middle school student ， and so on， close down the water ， turn off the lights， cut down ， make a contribution to our earth ， pollute our environment ， better and better 等。而固定结构 But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle? 和 I think as a middle schoo

6、l student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表 达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适 当引用，使文

7、章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。.书面表达根据以下提示，写一篇介绍我的朋友张阳的短文。基本情况张阳，阳光中学九年级二班学生兴趣爱好.喜欢阅读。每周花七个多小时阅读各种类型的书，因为.喜欢观鸟。每年统计两次鸟儿的数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面 的变化。优秀事迹上个月把零花钱捐给了希望工程木米梦想.希望成为连接家乡到上海路段的高铁总工程师.每个人

8、为保护环境都可以做一些改变。如：.（举1例）要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likesreading. He spends more than seven hours a week

9、reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway conne

10、cting my hometown toShanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn tthrow rubbish everywhere.【解析】【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如like reading , more than , all kinds of, spend time doing , enjoy doing , the number of , twice a year, be the chief eng

11、ineer of 等。而 He spends more than seven hours a week reading allkinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样 化，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不

12、能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。.书面表达初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题，老师要求你在英语课上做一个以“LessPressure Makes Life Better为题的报告，谈谈你的做法，与同学分享经验。请根据以下要求写一份发言稿，内容包括：.普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试.我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习.我成功缓解压力的办法及效果；要求：1.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；.词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, eve

13、ryone!Pressure is a serious problem in today s world. Most students in our class are under too muchpressure.【答案】Hello, my classmates!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while othe

14、rs may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends.I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I f

15、eel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们针对现在同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象，以Less Pressure Makes LifeBetter为题，谈谈自己的看法，和同学们分享一下自己的经验。审题可知，文章中应主要 包括以下几个内容：首先介绍同学们普遍感到压力这种现象；然后讲述自己过去曾面对的 压力；最后介绍自己如何成功缓解压力。题目中只给出了大概的提纲，其中具体的内容应 由学生们自己发

16、挥想象力来补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。学生们可以从自身的经历和 体会出发，选取生活中常见的场景进行介绍。文章应使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意 根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，并变化谓语动词的正确形式。句式结构可以简单句结构 为主，这样的句式表达简洁、明了，易于掌握。但为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列句和 复合句，或使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成 分，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，谈了自己对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现 象的看法，并分享了自己的经历。短文有如下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含了题目 中要求的所有信息，且层次清晰，

17、文章分成了四段，每一段的中心话题也很明确。其次短 文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，谓语动词形式 准确。句式结构以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁。也使用了并列句和复合句的结构，如宾 语从句、状语从句等。短文中使用了丰富的句式，如 Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much. 、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class 、 In this

18、way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies 等等。4.近来，美国总统特朗普的外孙女由于说一口流利的中文而成为网红”。你的美国朋友Sam看过相关报道之后也很想学好中文，但是不知道该怎样做。假如你是大明，请你根据以下提示写一封邮件给他，提一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。要点提示：.课堂上认真听讲，做好笔记；.不要害怕犯错误，与同学们用中文交流；.课下经常阅读中文杂志、报纸等，在网上看一些中文语言类节目；.经常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。注意：.词数 80-100;.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

19、.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；.开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。Dear Sam ,Im happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions.In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming 【答案】Dear Sam,Im happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.

20、Here are some suggestions. First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, its a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And dont be afraid of making mistakes. Third, youd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chines

21、e programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours, Daming 【解析】 【详解】这篇作文要求我们以大明的身份给Sam写一封信，告诉他如何学好汉语，题目中从四个方面提出了

22、建议。通过审题可知，这是要求写一封建议信，内容应包括以下几个方面：首先 应和Sam先做一个交流，然后引出写信的目的；接下来给出具体的建议，依据题目中给出 的这四条，用正确的英语表达出来，还应注意补充一些内容，使文章更加充实；最后写一 个适当的结尾，如希望建议对你有帮助等。文章应使用一般现在时，根据表达需要使用恰 当的人称。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译，写 汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子。如可以较常见的主谓宾结构或 主系表结构为主，简单句的句型可以使文章叙述清楚、简洁。为提升文章档次，可以穿插 使用并列句或复合句以及其他一些复杂句式。语句之

23、间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章意思 连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Sam写了一封信，对他的汉语学习提出了一些好的建议。首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三个部 分：第一段是与 Sam之间的问候以及引出Sam学习汉语这一话题，并介绍写信的目的；第二段中是提出的具体的建议，这是这篇文章的主体，所在篇幅最大。这一段中使用了 First, Second, Third, lastly等词，叙述条理、有层次；最后一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯。语法规范、准 确，用词得体。文章中的语句以简单

24、句结构为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，调整了文章 的结构。文章中使用了较为丰富的短语和句型，如 First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, its a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation 、 In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you

25、will learn it well. 等等。.环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以 Change for a better China为主题，结合自己家 乡的变化写一篇英语短文。注意事项：.短文应包括表格中的所有提示内容，条理清楚，作适当发挥。.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名，词数不少于80。状况水污染，大气污染.应对措施立即阻止此类活动，治理环境（至少两条）.感想建议环境能够变得更好.Change for a better China【答案】 We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environm

26、ent well.But some people don t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories ols put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot o

27、f black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in ord

28、er to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【详解】环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写 作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容 上应注意描

29、述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习 惯。【点睛】本文紧扣要求对家乡做了简单介绍，内容完整，用了表格中的信息。2.句式丰富。表述灵活。衔接自然，顺畅。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there aremore cars on the road these days. ； We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy.给文中增色不少。6.书面表达某英文报举办 家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表

30、提示，以“The Changes in MyHometown”为题，用英语写一篇 100词左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻译。过去生活条件差，道路狭窄，房屋破旧。污染严重，垃圾遍地。.（适当发挥一至两点）现在环境：政府米取措施来改善污染，城市变得越来越整洁。生活：住房宽敞明亮；许多人搬进了新公寓。越来越多的人有自己的汽车；生活舒适。交通：新的飞机场已投入使用多年。be in use （投入使用）；旅游：每年启成千上力来自各地的游客。将来布望 （两点）要求：1.短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；.短文必须包括所有内容要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。C

31、hanges my hometownMy hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, 【答案】 My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown. Now

32、the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are t

33、housands of tourists from all over the country every year.I hope my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以 The Changes in My Hometown为题，介绍一下自己的家乡这些年来发 生的变化。题目中用表格的形式，给我们对比的家乡的过去和现在，我们应用正确的英语 将这些内容表达出来，并对将来提出两点希望。审题可知，作文的基本框架和大概内容都 有了，需要注意的是在描写过去的时候，需要适当发挥一到两点；还有对将来的希望也需 要学生自己

34、发挥。这两个地方需要学生们展开想象，合理发挥，注意要与文章的其他部分 能够很好的结合起来，内容也要统一，符合题目要求，合情合理。表达时，需要注意英语 表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译表格中的语句，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰 当的词汇、短语和句型来表达。注意句式的多变，长短句结合、简单句、并列句或复合句 穿插使用，提升文章的档次。语句之间注意使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者按照题目要求，介绍了自己的家乡这些年来的变化。文章 是按照时间的顺序，先介绍了家乡过去的面貌，这一部分使用了过去时态，谓语动词都变 成了过去式，形式准确。然后是家乡现在的样子，这里主要

35、以一般现在时态为主。最后对 家乡的未来表达了自己的愿望。整篇文章内容充实、完整，叙述清晰、条理，结构合理。 文章中语言得体，语句通顺，句式表达符合英语的习惯，语法规范、准确。短文里还使用 了些较好的短语和句型， 如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets werevery narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner、More and more people

36、have their own cars and live a comfortable life 、 There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year. 等等。7.书面表达(本题15分)根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。为了使生活更美好，社会需要正能量( positive energy)。生活中，我们需要他人的帮助， 也要学会帮助他人。请你在网上给What would you do?本期节目留言，内容包括：.你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法；.说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例；.呼吁大家

37、互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量。作文要求：.不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。.语句连贯，词数 80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词 数。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop.【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her

38、because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give

39、others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes,“her hand, the flavor in mine. (113w)”【解析】【详解】本文属于话题作文，描述对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法、发生在你身上正能量的事件以 及鼓励大家相互帮助，并让世界充满正能量。

40、根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上 下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如 be for, adj enough to do, theother day, try one s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one s opinion, be supto, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine 等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下

41、文意思 连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符 合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给 出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中 心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意 使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短

42、文的各种错误外，还 要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词 数是否符合要求等。8.随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。 网购”已成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网 上购物的文章。优点(advantage)1.不需要出门；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累2.价格通常比较便宜3.可供选择的范围广，品种多缺点(disadvantage)1.只看到图片， 看/、到商品本身2.容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费你的观点提示词汇：网购 shopping online;商品goods;导致 cause

43、注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可适当发挥；.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；.词数：100词左右，文章开头已给出，但不计入总数。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.【答案】 With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the

44、group.Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a m ouse, you can buy what you re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose price

45、s are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it s very easy foto buy goods that aren t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That s a waste of money.Al

46、l in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文属于材料作文，主要讲述网购的优点和缺点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如 convenient , disadvantage, ingood quality , figure out , have the chance to do , be attacked by , of course , take care of等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文

47、意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符 合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给 出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中 心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意 使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各

48、种错误外，还 要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词 数是否符合要求等。9 .假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80岁。目前数量在减少，因为: 1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园;2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。要求：1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2） 80词左右。倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：哺乳动物 mammal;象牙ivoryDear classmatesI believe everyones contribution（贡献）can make a

49、 big difference.Yours, Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes

50、. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some

51、 activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.I believe everyones contribution（贡献）can make a big difference.Yours, Lihua 【解析】【详解】本文是一封倡议书 倡议大家保护大象。文章共分为三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所 处的现状，然后说明出现这种状况的原因，最后为了保护的大象我们应该如何去做。时态 主要为一般现在时。提出倡议时可以使用We can/ We should/ Let s/We debe的表示建议的句子。写作时注意不要使用太复杂的句型，以免出现语法错误，为使句子具有连贯性， 可以适当使用连词。本篇文章内容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largestmammals 及 First, we shoul