高日作业指导

1、Writing FundamentalsEnglish in Daily Life1AgendaThe first assignment The second assignment2The deadline高级日常英语 作业01(第1-4单元) 高级日常英语 作业02(朗读题) 3My Routine TripInstructions:Following the example in Unit 4, Activity 6, Task 2, write a brief account (120-150 words) describing your routine trip to a work p

2、lace or to a study place. 4p.189Now I study at the university, which is in the town centre. My home is on the outskirts of the town, about one and a half miles from the university. There is a regular busservice between the two but I prefer to walk when the weathers fine. It is a pleasant walk, downh

3、ill all the way! It takes me about forty minutes and I spend the time enjoying the peace and quiet of the early morning and thinking about the day ahead. I pass a lovely old church on the way and have to cross the river. Sometimes, if I have time, I stop to chat to one or two people on the way. If i

4、t is raining, I have to take the bus. The bus journey itself is quick but its a long walk from my house to the bus stop and then from the bus stop to the university. So it is actually quicker to do the whole journey on foot! It is cheaper too. The bus costs 54 pence, which is quite expensive for suc

5、h a short distance5Some helpful wordsSubway /underground地铁Taxi/bus/ bike/bicycle/motorbikehitchhiking 搭便车Long-distance bus 长途客车Regular bus 班车Shuttle bus 往返巴士6Marking criteria本课程作业为短文写作，满分为100分，分为语言（50分），内容（40分）、和结构或格式（10分）三部分，三部分分值相加即为作文的总分。 7语言50分用词巧妙，词汇丰富，表达手法灵活多变，写作技巧精湛，明显超出普通水平。语法结构严谨。 40分 用词正确，

6、能灵活运用多种表达手法，偶有选词错误。语法结构一般。 30分（及格） 用词能力稍差，表达手法单一，选词有较明显错误。语法结构需较多改进。 20分 用词较差，表达手法单一。文中时用汉语词汇或拼音。选词有明显错误。语法结构急需改进。 8Example 1 I usually leave my home to my working place at about 7:40 am. It is not a short distance between my home and working place. I need take overground and underground tube to my

7、office. Batong Line is the overground one and air conditioned. It runs every 3 minutes at peak time and have an average journey time of 30 minutes with passengers packed like sardines. After getting off the Batong Line I changed to the Line 1 tube which is the underground tube. Some of the train in

8、Line 1 are not air conditioned, it is so terrible in these hot days. I found a lady beside me fainted because of the heat after twenty minites journy. I companied her got off the carriage and asked the tube staff take care of her. For no time admit, I continued my journey. When I got to my office, I

9、 thought is it so expensive of the time to survive in this big city.9Example 1 I usually leave my home to my working place at about 7:40 am. It is not a short distance between my home and working place. I need take overground and underground tube to my office. Batong Line is the overground one and a

10、ir conditioned. It runs every 3 minutes at peak time and have an average journey time of 30 minutes with passengers packed like sardines. After getting off the Batong Line I changed to the Line 1 tube which is the underground tube. Some of the train in Line 1 are not air conditioned, it is so terrib

11、le in these hot days. I found a lady beside me fainted because of the heat after twenty minites journy. I companied her got off the carriage and asked the tube staff take care of her. For no time admit, I continued my journey. When I got to my office, I thought is it so expensive of the time to surv

12、ive in this big city.10Example 2 I walked joyfully along the path that was lit up by the golden rays of the morning sun. Beautiful flowers of many colors were blooming. How fragrant they smelled! Little birds were singing in the trees, as if greeting me “good morning! good morning!”.my heart was bur

13、sting with happiness. . 我愉快的走在小路上，金色的朝阳洒满大地，盛开的花朵五彩缤纷，香气袭人，小鸟在树上歌唱，好像在向我道早安，我幸福的心花怒放 11Main Differences between English and Chinese1.narration and description in Chinese seem to be a bit more ornate or “flowery” than in English 122. Chinese and English-speaking people seem to look differently on the

14、 use of set phrases and expressions. Good English writing encourages originality and discourages “clichs” e.g.千方百计，七嘴八舌，三令五申 as cold as a cucumber 13 3. English-speaking writers tend to be less militant in tone and language than most Chinese .The idea is to “let the facts speak for themselves”. 144T

15、hey havedifferent meanings of words Read 读书 cook 做饭 drive 开车 X Lets go and eat our meals XHe sang songs at the concert X I dont smoke cigarettes or drink wine.155 They have differentword formations Suffix: er: work-worker write-writer 员: 教员,学员,演员 ly：beautifully,greatly, wonderfully 地:完美地,高兴地,匆忙地 166

16、 They differ ingrammar: Number of nouns e.g.One book, two books 一本书,两本书 们: 人们,同志们,朋友们 X 猴子们,书们 X 三个人们177 They differ in Tense and aspect: Work, worked, will work (现在)工作,(过去)工作,(将来)工作 progressive:正在 They are having lunch。 perfect:已经187 They have differentword orders毛主席 Chairman Mao劳动模范 Model worker东北

17、 Northeast衣食住 Food, clothing, and housing196) Use of verb我有点累了 I am a bit tired他的眼睛是蓝的 He has blue eyes.208 Different ways of thinking and association of thought and different cultural background.You have my sympathy. 我很同情你 (x你有我的同情)他老婆跑了.His wife abandoned him. (X His wife ran away.)21Exercise:够意思!

18、不过我的意思你还是收下,不要不好意思. How kind you are! But I insist that you should receive it. Dont feel embarrassed. 22Wrap-up本课程作业为短文写作，满分为100分，分为语言（50分），内容（40分）、和结构或格式（10分）三部分，注意汉英差异23内容40分 文章内容切题，内容充实，思维新颖见解独到，思想水平卓越。篇幅适当，行文流畅，有较强的可读性和趣味性。28 文章基本切题，但思想表达能力有限，立意不清。篇幅较短。句子结构一般，有时意思模糊，理解较困难。可读性及趣味性较弱 24 文章大致切题。篇幅不

19、够，句子结构较差 24Example 1 I usually leave my home to my working place at about 7:40 am. It is not a short distance between my home and working place. I need take overground and underground tube to my office. Batong Line is the overground one and air conditioned. It runs every 3 minutes at peak time and h

20、ave an average journey time of 30 minutes with passengers packed like sardines. After getting off the Batong Line I changed to the Line 1 tube which is the underground tube. Some of the train in Line 1 are not air conditioned, it is so terrible in these hot days. I found a lady beside me fainted bec

21、ause of the heat after twenty minites journy. I companied her got off the carriage and asked the tube staff take care of her. For no time admit, I continued my journey. When I got to my office, I thought is it so expensive of the time to survive in this big city.25结构9/10分 文章语篇结构清晰，能够自如使用连接词连接上下文，语篇逻

22、辑关系清晰 6分 文章语篇结构基本清晰，能够使用一些连接词连接上下文，语篇逻辑关系基本清晰； 26ContentsCapitalisationComma vs. periodConnecting sentencesand, so, but, alsoLayout of English passagesIndentationFull-block27CAPITALISATION-1A Report on the Trips“How was your trip?” I asked. He said, “My trip to Yunnan was interesting.”“My trip to Mo

23、unt Tai,” she said, “was rather tiring.”I asked, “Really? Thats funny.”28CAPITALISATION-2First words of sentences (sentence fragments)Key words in titlesNouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, long prepositionsPrepositionsProper namesPeoplePlaces (stars, continents, countries, cities, streets)Languages H

24、olidaysReligionsTitles (Mr. , Ms. , President, Sir, etc.)29CONNECTING SENTENCESand, but, so, oralsoas a result, thereforeWhen, before, after30CONNECTING SENTENCESI realise now that the boys loved me.I was little.I often felt lonely and left out.They were always having fun together.I was too small to

25、 play with them.I suppose I was quite independent.31CONNECTING SENTENCES I realise now that the boys loved me, but when I was little I often felt lonely and left out. They were always having fun together, but I was too small to play with them. As a result, I suppose I was quite independent 32Punctua

26、tion & Basic Sentence Structures33It too far from Beiwai, I think you can change your work to Tianjin.Its too far from Beiwai. I think you can Its too far from Beiwai, but I think you can As it is too far from Beiwai, I think you can Its too far from Beiwai, so I think you can Its too far from Beiwa

27、i; I think you can Its too far from Beiwai, and I think you can Punctuation & Basic Sentence Structures34My brother like seeing films.The man and her daughter is here.It is early in the morning. I got up before my parents and Agreement35COMMA vs. PERIODMaria是北京外国语大学的新生，她今年19岁，来自英国。Maria is a new stu

28、dent at BFSU. She is 19 and is from Britain.36LAYOUT OF PASSAGESIndented styleFull block style37I work at a software company that is located near Fu Xing men, Xicheng district. My home is in Hai-dian District, its about 12 kilometre from my workplace. There are many ways to went from my home to my o

29、ffice. It takes almost one hour by bus to get to my workplace from my home. Although it is long journey, The transport is convenient. There are three direct bus service. No 716, No 732 and No 723 with air-condition, the fee of No 716 is very cheap, only 1 Yuan, but No 732 or No 723 are 2 to 3 Yuans.

30、 I can also choose to take the subway to save time, but it more expensive and I need to take bus to get to the subway station. I take subway only when I got up late. It spends me about 45 minute and 6 Yuan. The most expensive way to go to work is taxi. Its really expensive, but not save me much time

31、 actually. It always cost over 20 Yuan because of the traffic, so I seldom get to work by taxi. If the weather is fine and I am full of energy, I prefer to go to work by bike. On my way to the workplace, I pass many university, the National Library, the Purple Bamboo Park and Diaoyu Tai. It is also

32、a good form of physical exercises for me, too.Can you improve it?I work at a software company that is located near Fuxingmen, Xicheng District. There are many ways to go from my home to my office. It takes almost one732 and No 723 with air-conditioning. The fee of No 716 is very cheap, only 1subway

33、to save time, but it will be more expensive and I need to take a bus toabout 45 minutes and 6 Yuan. The most expensive way to go to work is by taxi. Its really expensive, but not saving me much time actually. It always costs over 20 Yuan because of the traffic, so I seldom get to work by taxi. If th

34、e weather isfine and I am full of energy, I prefer to go to work by bike. On my way to the workplace, I pass many universities, the National Library, the Purple Bamboo Park and Diaoyutai. It is also a good form of physical exercise for me, too.My home is in Haidian District, about 12 kilometres from

35、 my workplace. Yuan, but No 732 or No 723 are 2 to 3 Yuan. I can also choose to take theget to the subway station. I take the subway only when I get up late. It takes mehour by bus to get to my workplace from my home. Although it is a long journeythe transport is convenient. There are three direct b

36、us services No 716, No38AgendaThe first assignment The second assignment39Read the following text, imitating the assignment recording. Please record your own reading and upload it to the platform.I was lucky enough to find a very nice place to live in soon after I arrived. The rents only 45 pounds a week, plus my share of the bills. Its a room in a flat in a high-rise block. There are three other tenants and tho