北京高考作文立意谋篇学案

1、 18.暑期能力-英语-北京-高中作文立意谋篇开放作文学员编号： 学员姓名：年 级：课时数：辅导科目：英语学科教师：授课类型TCT开放作文教学目标.掌握开放作文的写作思路；.学会怎样描图、立意和联系实际；.掌握常用的描图、立意和联系实际的句式。星级授课日期及时段T能力-作文立意、试题情况和评分原则北京卷开放作文以单幅漫画式图片呈现题目要求：请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the p

2、icture and explain how you understand it.开放作文评分原则：.本题总分为15分，按4个档次给分。.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整 档次，最后给分。.评分时应考虑：文章是否扣题，结构是否完整，内容是否充实、健康，思维是否活跃，逻辑是否清 晰，语言是否规范，交际是否得体。.拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接 受。.词数少于 50,从总分中减去 1分庭二、写作须知文体：议论文结构：describe the picture描述图片（三分之一篇幅）；expl

3、ain how you understand it 对于图片的理解和自己的观点（三分之二篇幅）时态：一般现在时、现在进行时、一般讲来时等，忌用过去时人称：描图：第三人称议图：联系实际最好用第一人称Notes：State the implied meaning立意（多为第二段的首句）5分。Relate it to the daily life联系生活（和立意组成文章的第二段即主体部分）Solve the problem2.现场观摩解决图中所体现的问题 升华（文章的第三段或者第二段末尾）Analyze the picture（解图）Obviously, the man cares too much

4、 about his dog.State the implied meaning（立意）Surprisingly, many parents also do the same thing: they spoil their children.Relate it to the daily life（联系生活）They tend to satisfy every need of their children and make everything well prepared for them. However, too much love may do harm to children as we

5、ll as parents.Solve the problem（解决图中所体现的问题一升华）As a result, it is a must for us to learn a lesson from the silly man and express our love and care in a proper way.四、写作练兵 解图立意：注意抓住漫画所表达的主要矛盾，要有的放矢、中心突出；观点能够自圆其说。立意最好用简单句直接阐述。立意要求：Reasonable （合理）Positive （积极向上）Convincing（有说服力的）图1其他可接受的立意：People should h

6、ave a proper attitude towards their pets.Parents shouldn t spoil their children.X Children shouldn t take parents love for granted.图2:可接受的立意：X 11 s not the size but the quality that we should focus on.An old and worn-out thing can also have its value.Multi-protections guarantee safety.We should make

7、 use of everything available to achieve our goal.可接受立意：it is important to build a solid foundation if we want to succeed ;Take actions only after having a clear understanding of surroundings ;Proper way determines whether we will succeed or fail.。掌握引出立意的常用句式:The picture indicates thatThe picture rem

8、inds us thatThis picture reflects the fact thatThe picture conveys that .6.The picture, in fact, wants to tell usI think this picture tries to tell us thatThe picture reflects a phenomenon thaL .ies a very important rule of doing things7.Seeingthe picture, I think；9.Q10.The picture tries to convey t

9、heNote:that ,具体要采用哪个还要考虑到个人描图”以及 联系实际”的难易。描图建基图中的主要物象及相互之间的关系看似简单，但是，描图的主要目的是要为立意服务，立意要从图中得出，所以，针对同一幅图，不同的立意意味着描图的不同。图1立意： Surprisingly, many parents also do the same thing: they spoil their children.相应的描图：As we can see in the picture, a man is trying his best to hold up an umbrella for his pet whil

10、e he himself is suffering from the heavy rain.立意： Children shouldn t take parents love for granted.相应的描图：In the picture, a pet dog is standing comfortably and happily under an umbrella held by a man, giving no regards of the man in the heavy rain.图2立意：It s not the size but the quality that we should

11、 focus on.相应的描图：As we can see from the picture, it is raining hard, and there, under the big broken umbrella, stands a man holdinga small but good umbrella in his hand.立意： Multi-protections guarantee safety.相应的描图：As we can see from the picture, a big broken umbrella is preventing the man from the he

12、avy rain mainly.Meanwhile, the man is holding a small but good umbrella under the big to keep himself dry.图3立意：it is important to build a solid foundation if we want to succeed相应的描图：In the picture, a man is rowing a boat with great difficulty. However, the water in the river is too shallow for the b

13、oat to move on. Obviously, it is difficult to move the boat no matter how hard he tries.。掌握描图的常用句式： TOC o 1-5 h z In the picture, we can seeAs the picture shows / tells / presentsAs can be see in the picture,.联系实际开放作文的联系实际往往只是指出现实生活中的相关现象或问题，并不是像语文作文那样要进行多种举例论证。图2As we can see from the picture, it i

14、s raining hard, and there, under the broken umbrella, stands a man holding a small but good umbrella in his hand.In my opinion, the picture tries to tell us that it s not the size but the quality th at联eshould focus on.际） When it is raining cats and dogs, the large one ca nnot prevent you from being

15、 showered, or it doesn t work or function as it should, because it is broken or of poor quality, while the other one, small as it is, can protect you from the rain.图3In the picture, a man is rowing a boat with great difficulty. However, the water in the river is too shallow for theboat to move on. O

16、bviously, it is difficult to move the boat no matter how hard he tries.The picture tries to convey the message that it is important to build a solid foundation if we want to succeed.（联系实际） We can learn this lesson in real life. Take study for example. If we don t have basic knowledge aessential abil

17、ity, we may fail to achieve our goals even if we work hard. Just like the man in the picture, he canmove forward as expected because water is not deep enough for the boat.（四）最后升华开放作文的最后一段即升华部分要言简意赅，但同时要承接上文的联系实际部分，明确地表明正确的做 法是什么。也可以说，升华部分是用不同的表达方式再次表明立意。图2:In my opinion, the picture tries to tell us

18、 that it s not the size but the quality that we should focus on.is raining cats and dogs, the large one cannot prevent you from being showered, or it doesn t wcshould, because it is broken or of poor quality, while the other one, small as it is, can protect you from the rain.（升华）In our daily life, sometimes we pay too much attention to the size or appearance. In fact, what weshould concentrate on is the quality. Only in this way can we benefit from what we have.图3:The picture tries to convey the message that it is important to build a so