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1、2015 高考英语冲刺阶段-高分作文库【作文怎么得高分】1、 卷面：clean & clear 辉体字（大小一致，落上，避免毛刺）2、 内容：尽量简单+覆盖全面（写你会写的内容，越简单越好）注意：不会写的句子一定能找到简单的方法来表达！3、 分段：尽量分三段，每段一个大要点（每段只说一件事儿）！每段写成“总-分”结构；每个拓展句前用过渡词引导；4、过渡词：最好每句都有！【九种最基本段落结构】(1)展句 2.(2)句. For one thing, + 拓展句 1. For another, 拓句. On the one hand, + 拓展句 1. On the otherhand,(3)拓展

2、句 2.句.and foremost,拓展句 1. Additionally,拓展句 2. Last but not least, 拓展句 3.(4)句. To begin with,拓展句 1. Besides,拓展句 2.Whats more, 拓展句 3. Finally, 拓展句 4.(5)【描述经历】Take one of my own experienfort, y,.exle.Lastmonth,Then,AfterUnfortunay/Fortunay, However, ImmediaFinally, The next day, Earlyhe morning, Latehe

3、 afternoon, Two hours later,(6)【解释观点】From my,观点. As forand foremost, 理由一. Additionally,the reasons,理由二. Last but not least, 理由三.(7)【描述原因】There are three main reasons for this.and foremost, 原因一. Additionally, 原因二.Last but not least, 原因三.(8)【建议措施】Herearesomesuggestions(foryou).andforemost, 建议一. Additi

4、onally, 建议二. Last but notleast, 建议三.【建议措施升级版】实际且有效的措施必须立刻实行以改善当前状况。Practical and effective measures must beput opractice immediay to improve the current situation.and foremost, 建议一. Additionally, 建议二.Last but not least, 建议三. (9)【万能结尾句】我希望 Hopefully, sb would do sth.我相信 I have the confidencet sb will

5、 do sth.感谢你summer.nks for reading my letter in such a hot请回信 I am looking forward to your earst reply.只有才 Only in this way/by ng so can you have thechance of achieving your dreams/living a better life.难避免 With these suggestions carried out, a muchbrighter futurewill benot onlysiblebut alsoinevitable

6、(不可避免). 伴随着这些建议被实行，一个更加光明的未来将不但是可能的而且是不可避免的。Eg：There are many ways to master English.andEnglishforemost,newspyouaresupedtoreadsomers. Additionally, it will be wise of you to watchsome English movies. Last but not least, why not talk with native speakers?5、遣词造句：换词（把常用黯然低分词，换成巨牛闪光高分词）should sb had bet

7、ter do sth建议sb ought to do sthsb be suped to do sthWhy not do sth?It will be wise of you to do sth.做某事的话你将是很聪明的It will be benefil for you to do sth.对你来说做某事有益。【虚拟】If I were you, I would do sth.如果我是你的话，我就会做某事。【虚拟】It is high timet you did sth.真的到了你该做某事的时间了。likeng sth 喜欢sb + be fond of + sth/ng sth 酷爱sb

8、 + be crazy about + sth/ng sth 爱上sb + have fallen in love with + sth/I have a lot of hobbies.and foremost, I am fond ofswimming,hat I like water. Additionally, I am crazyabout reading, which is not only meaningful but alsoentertaining. Last but not least, I have fallen in love with guitar for many y

9、ears.think I harbor the ideat.我怀有这个观点，那就是 I take the attitudet.我持有这个态度，那就是ve I have the confidence我有信心，那就是betI hope Hopefully, sb would do sth.Sb remember sth. Sb ken mind sth.want sb + would like + to do sth. 想要做某事sb + desire to do sth 渴望做某事sb+ have a great desire to do sth 非常渴望sb+ plan to do sth.计

10、划做某事I want to do a lot of thingsy university. and foremost, I would like to travel around China during mysummer and wer vacations, which will be not onlymeaningful but also entertaining. Additionally, I have agreat desire to learn to swim,hat I like water. Last but not least, I plan to do some part

11、time jobs, sot I canimprove myersonal skills.learn pick up 偶然学到、顺便学到master 掌握important essential 必要的significant的的vital常见结构：It is essential/significant/vital for sb to do sth.ng sth is essential/significant/vital for sb.I take the attitudet there are many important thingsin our life.our family,and fo

12、remost, it is essential for us to lovehat it is the source of love. Additionally,reading book is significant for us, which is not onlymeaningful but also entertaining. Last but not least, it is vital for us to keep healthy.difficult challenging 有性的very 地extremelysurprisingly 令人惊讶地good excellent 优秀的

13、+ 人/书/电视outstanding 出色的 + 人/书/电视 meaningful 有意义的 + 一件事 educational 有教育意义的 + 一件事ettable 难忘的 + 一件事/人l 有益的+事/物unfbenefibad terrible + 人/事/物tiring 令人疲惫的 annoying 令人烦恼的 boring 令人无聊的【旅行社】假设你是，参加了某某一日游（one day tour）活动，发现导游的介绍很无聊，带你去很多商店购物，而且交通很糟糕，请写信表达你的不满。Yesterday, I took a one day tour, which was terrib

14、le.and foremost, the tour guidesroduction wasboring. It is obvioust he knew little about the place oferest. Additionally, he took us to a lot of shops, whichwas annoying. Last but not least, the bus waold, making me feel tired.rprisingly【把形容词换成“of+名词”结构】difficult of great difficulty 有难度 different of

15、 great difference 有区别 beautiful of great beauty 有美感 useful of great use 有用处helpful of great help 有帮助harmful of grearm 有危害【例】作表语：This book is useful.This book is (of great use).作定语：This is a useful book.This is a book (of great use).高考英语必背超级范文（话题作文）【特点】给出一个事件，让你命题趋势：一般会夹叙夹议！观点，并陈述理由。：讲原因、给建议：讲经历、讲故事（

16、我是谁。某事变糟糕。【套路】第一段：道理+原因第二段：经历第三段：总结+展望谈话。变好）【话题作文 1】请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。The best exbe the sle of universally understood body language may. A scan help us get through difficult situationand find friends in a world of strangers. A sand tear down walls.can open doors议论记叙注意：无须写标题； 内容只需涉

17、及一个方面；词数为150 左右。【必背范文】No one can deny a scan help us through difficultsituations.Thereasonissimple:itisyourfeelingtgenerates your expres, and similarly, it is your exprest influenyour feeling.Take one of my own experienfor exle. As a topstudent in my school, I never fail to get a high score in anyex

18、amination. Unfortunay, lastk, I failed in an importantmathexam(duetoahorriblecold),makingmesad,discouraged, upset and desperate. However, my headmasterhada conversationwithme,lingme to keepas.Immediay,I becamehappy,confidentandbraveagain,making a decit I will do better next time.From this experience

19、, I learnedt, more oftenn not, itis a st helps use any challenges. Hopefully,erful weapon to live a better life.everyone can master this没有人能否认微笑能帮助通过的处境。理由很简单：正是你的感觉情影响了你的感觉。了你的表情，同样的，正是你的表举一个的经历作为例子。作为学校的一个尖中。不幸的中由于一个可，我从来没有失败去得到高分在任何的是，上一周，我失败了在一个的数学怕的感冒，使得我伤心，沮丧，失落，绝望。然而，长有一个交谈和我，告诉我去保持微笑。立刻，我变得校

20、、自信和再一次，做出决定我会做得更好下一次。从这个经历中，我学到，经常，正是一个微笑帮助克服了任何。希望，每个人能掌握这种有力的去生活得更好。【话题作文 2】Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn moreabout teamwork. Teamwork shows us how otheoples rolesfit the pure of the group, and it teaches us to be patientand how to respond to different people.注意：无须写标题，不得照

21、抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；文中不得透漏个人和学校名称；词数为 100 左右。【必背范文】No one can deny teamwork can help difficult situations. The reason is simple: it igenerates strength.us get throughworktTake one of my own experienfor exle. Lastk,school and ouran English play competition was held in ourclass took part

22、 in it. Unfortunay, as Tom speaks English bettern some other classmates, he failed to work together with us. However, as the vice monitor, I had a conversation with him,ling him to be modest and cooperate with us. Immediay, hechanged, helour class wheprize.t, more oftenn not, it any challenge. Hopef

23、ully,From this experience, I learnedis teamworkt helps useeveryone can master thiserful weapon to live a better life.没有人能否认团队工作能帮助通过的处境。理由很简单，正是团队工作的力量产生了力量当追狮子的时候。举一个的经历作为例子。上周，一个英语话剧比赛被举行在学校并且班参加了它。不幸的是，由于Tom 说英语更好比其他同学，他没能跟作为副班长，我有了一次谈话跟他，一起合作。然而，去谦虚并且跟我们合作。立刻，他改变了，帮助班赢得了第一名。从这个经历之中，我学到，经常，正是团队工作

24、帮助我们克服了任何生活得更好。希望，每个人能掌握这个有力的去【话题作文 3】请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。You cannot choose (what you are given), but you can choose how you make use of it.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人词数为 120 左右。和学校名称；【必背范文】No one can deny we are suped to make good use ofwhat we are given. The reason is simple, it is what we havemakes us who we are.tTake one of my own experienfor