U3 Holiday fun(writing)

1、泰州市胡庄中心小学 王娟Unit 3Holiday funTime tunnel 第一段时光隧道isaredopickgocatchcanseeeatvisithavemakeMeet the black hole如何 脱离 黑洞 呢I _ to Shanghai for the holiday. I _ my aunt. Then, I _ to the Bund and visited the Shanghai Museum. I _ many interesting things. I _ very happy in this holiday.My National Day holida

2、ywentvisitedwentsawwas用时光隧道里的动词过去式帮助Liu Tao和Mike完成假期作文My National Day holidaywentpickedcaughtwentwasFor the holiday, I _ to a farm with my family. The farm is near Star Lake. We _ some oranges and _ fishing.I _ a big fish. It _ great fun. My National Day holidayI went to Shanghai for the holiday. I

3、visited my aunt. Then, I went to the Bund and visited the Shanghai Museum. I saw many interesting things. I was very happy in this holiday.For the holiday, I went to a farm with my family. The farm is near Star Lake. We picked some oranges and went fishing.I caught a big fish. It was great fun.My Na

4、tional Day holidayLiu Tao和Mike是从哪些方面去写他们的假期生活的？HolidayWhere?Who?How?What?How long?（多久）.I go to Guangzhou for the holiday.We have a big dinner.I buy some clothes.I eat a lot of food.It is great fun.Time tunnel 第二段时光隧道Meet the black holeMy winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went ther

5、e with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.用刚刚总结的几个方面分析一下S

6、u Hai的假期生活Where?Who?How long?What?How?细心的你有没有发现刚才隧道里出现的句子就来自这篇文章呢？My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping

7、 centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.Who?How long?What?How?Where?Where?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner

8、 together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my witer holiday. It was great fun.Who?How long?What?How?Where?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with m

9、y family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.How long?What?How?Where

10、?Who?Who?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate

11、 a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.How long?What?How?Where?Who?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I al

12、so went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.What?How?Where?Who?How long?How long?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my un

13、cle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.What?How?Where?Who?How long?stay there for. 在那儿待了. My winter holidayI went t

14、o Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter h

15、oliday. It was great fun.How?Where?Who?How long?What?What?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre.

16、 I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.How?Where?Who?How long?What?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner togethere. I

17、went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.How?Where?Who?How long?What?go to a theme park去一个主题公园 My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I wen

18、t there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food . I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.How?Wher

19、e?Who?How long?What?How?My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner togethere. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring

20、 Festival. I ate a lot of food . I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.Where?Who?How long?What?How?Time tunnel 第三段时光隧道My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went to Guangzhou with my family. We stayed there for 3 days.On the first day, I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the s

21、econd day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of beautiful photos. On the last day（在最后一天）, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. Then, I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.Meet the black holeGood things never come ea

22、sy! 好事多磨！My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of

23、 food. I liked my winter holiday. It was great fun.My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went to Guangzhou with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. On the first day, I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the second day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of beauti

24、ful photos. On the last day, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. Then, I ate a lot of food. I liked my winter holiday. It was great fun.对比苏海的作文，发现有什么相同和不同？哪个更好？My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed ther

25、e for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went to

26、 Guangzhou with my family. We stayed there for 3 days.On the first day, I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the second day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of beautiful photos. On the last day, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Spring F

27、estival. Then, I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.文章结构Title 标题 Beginning开头Main body正文Ending 结尾 Tip1: 一篇完整的文章首先要有标题，然后包含开头、正文、结尾，分段说明会更加清晰，结构就如同语文作文的总分总。注意英语作文顶格写。你能给出其他的开头和结尾吗？My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed th

28、ere for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went

29、to Guangzhou with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. On the first day, I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the second day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of beautiful photos. On the last day, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Sprin

30、g Festival. Then, I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.内容编排Tip2:文章中加入一些时间短语或是表示时间先后的副词，可以使文章表达更加有条理。My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a

31、theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went to Guangzhou with my family. We stayed there for 3 days.On the first day, I vi

32、sited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the second day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of beautiful photos. On the last day, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. Then, I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great f

33、un.句子表达My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a

34、 lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went to Guangzhou with my family. We stayed there for 3 days.On the first day, I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the second day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of b

35、eautiful photos. On the last day, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. Then, I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.句子表达My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I

36、visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went to Guangzhou with

37、my family. We stayed there for 3 days.On the first day, I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the second day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of beautiful photos. On the last day, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. Then, I

38、 ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.句子表达Tip3:巧妙地将两句话合并或使用连词，如and、but等，可以使句子更加完整连贯。My winter holidayI went to Guangzhou for the holiday. I went there with my family. We stayed there for 3 days. I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. I went to a theme park. I took

39、 a lot of photos. I also went to a shopping centre. I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fun.My winter holidayLast winter holiday, I went to Guangzhou with my family. We stayed there for 3 days.On the first day, I visited my uncle. We had a big dinner together. On the second day, I went to an interesting theme park and took a lot of beautiful photos. On the last day, I went to a shopping centre. First, I bought some clothes for Spring Festival. Then, I ate a lot of food. I like my winter holiday. It was great fu