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1、高考英语基础写作复习系列 图表类说明文下图为某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长示意图。根据所给图表，简要描述某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长情况，并试分析其增长原因。审题：文字信息+图表数据人称: 时态: 要点:第三人称一般过去时 现在完成时概述增长现象 具体数据变化 原因outline: introduction: facts ： reasons： conclusion：近年越来越多的人使用手机 描述1997-2004数据增长的对比、差异 科技，收入，方便联系你的观点1.The graph/chart/table above shows/describes/ reflects.2. From th

2、e above graph/chart, it can be seen that./we can see that .3.As is shown in the graph, .4.According to the table/chart /graph, .第一步： 图表类说明文的写作步骤开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题, 即Introduction常用句型：According to the above chart, we know more and more people have owned mobile phones in recent years.99 00 01 02 03 04 05

3、 06 07 08 09 As can be seen from the graph, great changes in car ownership have taken place in China in the past ten years.某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长示意图。ownership第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及变化趋势，抓重点抓特征抓规律，不能事无巨细，一一列出. 主体部分往往包含 facts and reasons（ Facts）一，描述变化趋势1.The number of private cars increased /rose suddenly/rapidly/sh

4、arply/dramatically(急剧）/considerably（大量）/slowly/gradually/slightly（轻微） (from to)2.The number of private cars increased by 10% in 1999, reaching 20000.3.The number dropped/decreased/declined/went down slightly from 38%in 2005 to 31% in 20064.The number remained steady/stable/constant betweenand从到期间，数量

5、保持稳定！(facts) 二，描述数据差异1 The number of people having cars accountsfor/makesup 60%2.Onthetopofthelistis,whichaccountsfor60%. 占比重高的是，占60%。3.Atthebottomis ，makingup20%. 占最低比重的是，占20%。4.AissecondtoB. A仅次于B。5.Aisranked/ratedfirst,followedbyBat30%andCat25%. A占的比重最高，紧随其后的是占30%的B和占25%的C6.The number of doubled

6、compared with that of last year7. The number ofis four times as big as 8. The number of is almost the same as 某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长示意图。根据所给图表，简要描述某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长情况，并分析其增长原因。In 1997, only ten people in a hundred had mobile phones in the cityIn 1999, the number doubled , reaching 20 in 100. The people ownin

7、g mobile phones in 2001 were 5 times as many as those in 1997. Three years later, the number of the citizens owning the magic tools increased rapidly, making up 80 percent .Reasons:1. The reason why/foris that2. It is because /because of that 3. We may consider the change as a result of.4.is the key

8、 factor (因素) contributing to5.The reasons why .are as follows. / There are plenty of reasons for the change. Firstly, secondly, Thirdly.3.Reasons There are some reasons for the rise in the number of people with mobile phones. Firstly, the technology of making mobile phones is changing rapidly, which

9、 leads to the drop in the prices. Secondly, peoples income has been increasing . As a consequence, they have more options. Thirdly, being useful in daily life, mobile phones make peoples communication easy and convenient .1.In a word,/ In short,/In conclusion, /In summary, we can say /conclude/predi

10、ct that2.As far as Im concerned,/ As for me,/ For my part,/ From my point of view,/ in my opinion, I think it necessary to.3. From what has been discussed above, we can draw a conclusion/ it can be concluded (得出结论）that第三步 总结归纳 From what has been disscussed above, it can be estimatedthat the number o

11、f the mobile phone holders will reach a new height with the further advance of science and technology.第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。第一步 点明主题According to the above chart, we know more and more people have mobile phones in recent years.第二步 阐明图表数据 说明原因 In 1997, only ten people in a hundred had mobile phones in some ci

12、ty. In 1999, the number doubled , reaching 20 in 100. The people owning mobile phones in 2001 were 5 times as many as those in 1997.Three yearslater, 80 percent of the citizens had the magic tools. There are some reasons for the rise in the number of people with mobile phones. Firstly, the technolog

13、y of making mobile phones is changing rapidly, which leads to the drop in the prices. Secondly, peoples incomehas been increasing . As a consequence, they have more options. Thirdly, being useful in daily life, mobile phones make peoples communication easy and convenient .第三步 总结归纳 From what has been

14、 discussed above, it can be estimated(估计）that the number of the mobile phone holders will reach a new height with the further advance of science and technology. What Jobs Do College Students Want to Do目前学生择业状况男女学生就业选择的区别我的观点What Jobs Do College Students Want to Do It goes without saying that college

15、 students have a clear idea about their future occupation. Boys are to some extend different from girls in their choice .As can be seen from the picture, the most striking contrast is in the occupation of teaching: 45% of girls students would like to do the job. What boys like to do most is to becom

16、e managers (40%) and the second largest group is to be businessmen (30%). Girls also like to pursue these two professions, with a percentage of 15% and 25% respectively choosing these two jobs. 15% of boys want to become lawyers while 10% of girls preferring this professions. It can be easily proved

17、 that teaching is preferred by females as it provides a more regular and purer life. Womens patience also fits the job well. Boys consider working as scientist, managers, businessmen and lawyers more demanding and stimulating. It is true that more boys want to show their talents in these fields. One

18、 thing worthy of note is that the number of girls wanting to do business is not small. This shows that girls also want to do the challenging and exciting jobs. Nevertheless, it can be easily proved that no matter what job you will chose, it will be more challenge. As for me, I like science and with

19、the development of economy and the progress of society. Science and technology will become more and more important. So I will choose scientist as my career.例题2：根据下面所给两幅图，完成100词左右的一篇短文（首句已给出）。参考词汇：expenses: n. 支出，费用Percentage of Average Family Percentage of Average Family Expenses in 1997 Expenses in

20、 2002 The Average Family Expenses The average family income in the U.S.has increased.第一步：点明本圆形图所表明的主题。 The average family income in the U.S. Has increased. The way the average family spends its income has also changed.第二步：描述两个圆形内数据间的变化。 In 1997, 25%of the income was spent on housing and 18% on food

21、and drink. 57% was used to meet all other expenses. In 2002, 32% was spent on housing, a big increase. Food and drink consumed 22%. The remaining expenses amount to 46%.第三步：总结。 Its clear from the charts that as incomes increase people can afford to live more comfortably and eat more. 上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为

22、题，在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据：写作内容根据以上数据,写一篇短文,包括以下内容:1.调查时间,调查问题,以及调查对象;2.男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异;3.”父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异;4.男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同;5.你的偶像及理由。 1._ Last week，we did a survey among 2,600 students on “Who is your idol”. 2._The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols,while

23、 48% of the boys favor sports stars. 3._ As the data shows, “parents” rank the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. 4._ However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. 5._ As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol, because his inventions hav

24、e greatly changed our life.(Conclusion)(Fact)(Your opinion)(Fact)(Fact)b.数据的表达?a. Conclusion/fact/reason/your opinion?：下图是我国近10年私人汽车拥有情况,反映了人们生活水平的变化.写作内容 请根据以上数据,写一篇短文，包括以下内容: 1. 近10年我国私人汽车拥有量增加了5倍多; 2. 增加的理由是：经济增长快；节约时间。 3. 你对此现象的看法。写作要求 1. 包括全部要点 2. 标题 :Car Ownership in China。实践演练99 00 01 02 03 0

25、4 05 06 07 08 09 99 00 01 02 03 04 05 06 07 08 09 99 00 01 02 03 04 05 06 07 08 09 99 00 01 02 03 04 05 06 07 08 09 99 00 01 02 03 04 05 06 07 08 09 99 00 01 02 03 04 05 06 07 08 09 第三人称现在完成时&一般现在时1.Conclusion2.Facts and reasons3.Your own opinion/ suggestions1. 近10年我国私人汽车拥有量发生了巨变；2. 2009年私人汽车拥有量比199

26、9年增加了5倍多;3. 理由1：经济增长快;4. 理由2：节约时间;5. 你对此现象的看法。时态:人称:要点:篇章结构:写作指导99 00 01 02 03 04 05 06 07 08 09 Try to finish your passage within 10 minutes.checklist1.是否只用了5句?2.要点是否齐全?3.是否符合图表类说明文的篇章结构? 4.有无语法或拼写错误?5.是否用上了高级词汇或高级结构?6.有无过渡性词语,使文章更连贯?Learn by heart the useful expressions we learnt today. HomeworkTh

27、ank you!Possible Version:As can be seen from the graph, great changes in car ownership have taken place in China in the past ten years. The number of private cars increased more than 5 times from nearly 3 million in 1999 to over 15 million in 2009. Its mainly because the economy of China has develop

28、ed so rapidly that many Chinese people want to own private cars. Besides, in modern society, many Chinese need a car to do business so as to save time. In my view, as the car ownership constantly increases year by year, a large number of social problems, such as traffic jams, will turn up in nearly

29、every city throughout China. 受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇100左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种。调查范围：湖北省的10所中学调查对象：高中生调查人数：1000调查方式：访谈调查结果：（见下图）Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students Recently, a survey has been done to find out the reading interests

30、 of senior middle school students. Recently a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. In this survey, one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei Province were interviewed. They were asked which they liked reading most among t

31、he four categories of English articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most. Twenty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their favorite. Only seven percent of the s

32、tudents are most interested in reading articles about learning methods. However, the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most. Twe

33、nty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their favorite. Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods. However, the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods. 例题1：请你根据下表提供的信息写一篇题为：Changes in Chinese Peoples Diet的短文。注意：1、尽可能少引用数据；2、词数100左右。分析：本统计表描述中国人民从1998年至2002年饮食结构的变化。 短文可分为三小节： 1) state the changes in peoples diet in the past five years; 2) give possible reasons for the changes; 3) draw your own