how to polish up your writing

1、How to polish up writing? What makes a good writing?_ your readers and what they want_your writingOrganize your ideas into paragraphs, with _ idea one main paragraph.Cut _ words and sentencesPlanoneunnecessaryUnderstandA good writingstructureseveral partstopic sentencecontentall points coveredlangua

2、ge wordsphrasessentencesvariationFresh and not overused words我们需要比从前更意识到解决这个问题的迫切性。1. We need to wake up to the urgency to address this issue more than ever before. 2. We need to realize the importance to deal with this problem more than ever before.Highlight 1 1.“表明，论证用_ 替换show/indicate【秒杀】”他真的热爱这份

3、工作”不仅仅表明了他对于职责的奉献还有他对于祖国的忠诚。(扬州2017一模作文）“He really loves his job”demonstrates not only his devotion to his duties but his loyalty to our country as well.Fresh and not overused wordsPracticedemonstrate 2.“阻止某人做某事”用_替换prevent sb from【秒杀】不要让对于失败的恐惧阻止你追求你的梦想。(苏锡常镇2017三模作文）Dont let the fear of failure ho

4、ld you back from pursuing your dream.Fresh and not overused wordsPracticehold sb. back from 3.“面对，面临”用_ 替换face sth./be faced with【秒杀】面对不断的让人倍感压力的考试，我们身心俱疲，焦躁不安。(南京、盐城2017二模作文）Confronted with constant stressful exams, we seniors are suffering from extreme tiredness and severe anxiety.Fresh and not ov

5、erused wordsPracticebe confronted with 4.“不知道”用_替换dont know/have no idea【秒杀】另外，如果没有它的话，我们也许就不知道要做什么以至于最后一事无成。(苏北四市2017一模作文）Moreover, without it, we might be in the dark about what to do, thus achieving nothing in the end.Fresh and not overused wordsPracticein the dark/at a lossIt can be difficult to

6、 figure out what to save and what to toss. It can be _ to figure out what to save and what to toss. It can be _ _ to figure out what to save and what to toss.challenging astruggleIt can be _ _ _ to figure out what to save and what to toss. aHerculean taskFresh and not overused wordsPractice2. It is

7、classmates encouragement and love that help me go through this period of difficult time.(南京、盐城2017二模作文）3. It is everyones duty to obey the regulations to keep our society in order and going on the right track. (2015江苏卷作文） inspirationaffectiontoughobserve/submit toFresh and not overused wordsPractice

8、4. On-line voting becomes more and more popular , and many competitions have people take part in it . (2016江苏卷作文）5. It is important that tourists should behave well when overseas. enjoys great popularityessentialbehave themselvesget people involved in it.Fresh and not overused wordsPracticee.g. He i

9、gnored what had happened to his friends, which made them upset. He turned a blind eye to what had happened to his friends, which made them upset.e.g. We try our best to promote the traditional friendship between us. We spare no efforts to promote the traditional friendship between us.Phrases come fi

10、rstHighlight 21. Your fluency in English makes you better than the other candidates for the job. Your fluency in English gives you _ _ _ the other candidates for the job.2. We should remember that everyone is the master of his own fate. We should _ _ _ that everyone is the master of his own fate.ana

11、dvantageoverbearinmindPhrases come firstPracticee.g. Trevor puts his genius idea into action by doing a favor for three people. He also appeals to the recipients of favor to pay the favor forward.(苏州2017一模）Not only does Trevor put his genius idea into action by doing a favor for three people but he

12、also appeals to the recipients of favor to pay the favor forward.Tip: transitional wordsVariation of sentencesHighlight 3When people talk about success, they often fix their mind on success itself and ignore some hidden factors. (镇江2017一模）When talking about success, they often fix their mind on succ

13、ess itself ignoring some hidden factors. If you see it and use it more frequently, it can be better remembered. (常州2017一模）The more frequently you see it and use it, the better it can be remembered.Tip: non-finite verbTip: inversionVariation of sentencesPracticeFrom my perspective, such an initiative

14、 and behavior should be encouraged.(苏锡常镇2017二模）Such an initiative and behavior，from my perspective, should be encouraged.Tip: change the word orderVariation of sentencesPracticeBecause there is no enough relevant regulations, some uncivilized people deliberately damage shared bikes. They throw them

15、into rivers or pile them up randomly.(南京、淮安2017三模作文）Tip: use the phrases to replace sentencesFor lack of relevant regulations, some uncivilized people deliberately damage shared bikes throwing them into rivers or piling them up randomly.Variation of sentencesPractice1. We can feast our eyes on the f

16、lowers in the wild.2. We can feast our eyes on the delicate flowers in the wild in various colors and gestures.Enrich your expressionsHighlight 4For the benefit of the future generation, it is our duty to seek a/an_ economic development.high-quality/high-speed/eco-friendly /thriving/stable/sustainab

17、le/healthy/steady/constant/ lasting/balancedEnrich your expressionsPractice_ laws and regulations (v.)observe/obey/break/violate/enforce/strengthen/ launch/ issue/exert issue _ laws and regulations (adj.)effective/ relevant/ strict/precisely-targeted/specific concerning/ regarding/ with regard to /i

18、ssue effective laws and regulations _the adoption of childrenEnrich your expressionsPracticeChecklistStructureContent LanguageSummary:Is the writing divided into parts? Are there any topic sentences?Are all the points clearly stated?Are there any mistakes?Does the writer use any transitional words? Is there a variation of words and phrases?Are various sentence patterns u