中考人教版英语写作-话题11-经历与感受课件

1、 分析河南近10年中招真题书面表达可知，“经历与感受”这一话题主要考查：自己的经历与感受，如2017年“I did it！”， 2016年“The biggest personal change Ive ever made”；他人的经历对自己的影响，如2011年通过刘伟的故事得到什么样的启示。命题探索教材链接(2017河南)我们每天都要做很多事情，有些还很棘手。请以“I did it！”为题并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，描述一件你完成的棘手事情。典例剖析审标题：棘手的事情我做到了审文体：记叙文审人称：第一人称审时态：一般过去时一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1.要求：1)你做了什

2、么事情； 2)你是如何做那件事情的； 3)你做完那件事情后的感受。2. 要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2)词数80左右。审时态：一般现在时一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 1. Two years ago, I didnt have the courage to answer questions in class.2. It was that time that I decided to help more people in need.3. My father told me a story on my way home and he helped me to plan

3、 my time properly.1角度介绍经历一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好 句 记 背 4. She encouraged me to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others.5. The young man next to our table spoke and laughed loudly.6. I was about to take a shower when the phone rang last night.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 1. 三年前，我没有勇气承认自己的错误。_2.

4、就是在那个时候我决定努力学习。_3. 在回家的路上，我发现地上有一个钱包。_Three years ago, I didnt have the courage to admit my mistakes.It was that time that I decided to study hard. On my way home, I found a wallet on the ground.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句 子 仿 写 4. 我的老师鼓励我积极参加课外活动。_5. 坐在我旁边的女孩大声说话很长时间。_6. 我正准备打扫教室的时候我的好朋友进来了。_My teacher e

5、ncouraged me to take an active part in afterclass activities. The girl next to me spoke loudly for a long time.I was about to clean the classroom when my best friend came in. 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 1. She lost her favorite notebook.She lost her favorite notebook. How upset she was!2. I could hardly th

6、ink clearly after that terrible earthquake.I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after that terrible earthquake. 八(下)Unit 5 P382角度介绍感受一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好 句 记 背3. I have no idea on how to remember new words quickly.I often feel stressed because I have no idea on how to remember new word

7、s quickly.4. I won the first prize in the reading competition.I won the first prize in the reading competition. I was really happy that day.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 1. I got a better result in the monthly exam. (扩写感受) _2. He didnt know what to say. (扩写感受)_3. I dont want to speak in front of so many peop

8、le.(扩写感受)_I got a better result in the monthly exam. How excited I was！He was so nervous that he didnt know what to say.I feel so worried and afraid because I dont want to speak in front of so many people. 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句 子 扩 写 4. They said there were no tickets left.(扩写感受)_5. I talked back to

9、 my parents yesterday. (扩写感受)_They said there were no tickets left. I was unhappy that day.I talked back to my parents yesterday. I feel regretful now. 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 1. His story taught me not to give up my dream and work hard to make it come true.2. From his experience, I realized that helpi

10、ng others can make the world more beautiful and can let others respect us at the same time.3. His words touched my heart and I would remember them forever.3角度他人经历对自己的影响一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好 句 记 背 1. 这次经历教会我不要小瞧别人。_2. 从她的经历中，我意识到了微笑在日常生活中的重要性。_3. 他温暖的话给了我勇气和自信，我会永远记住他的支持。_This experience taught me no

11、t to look down upon others.From her experience, I realized the importance of smiling in daily life. His warm words gave me courage and confidence and I would remember his support forever. 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句 子 仿 写 Last year, I met a difficult situation. I _(棘手的事情). I didnt know what I should do at

12、 first. And I felt _(对事情的感受)Then I _(应对的办法). failed the exam/ couldnt understand what the teacher said in class/.asked the teacher for help/ reviewed the lessons carefully/.disappointed/ stressed/.经历及感受一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段语段练习1Finally, I _(最后的结果). I _(对结果的感受)was so satisfied/ was excited/. got a

13、high score in the final exam/ made progress in English/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句_(简单描述励志的经历). As a student, Ive learned a lot from his/her story. Liu Wei lost his left arm by accident but he didnt give up his dream of being a pianist/ She/ He failed many times to do the research, but she/ he didnt give

14、up/. 他人经历对自己的影响一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句语段练习2 We may meet a lot of difficulties in our life, but we should _(影响1). No matter how hard life is, _(影响2) believe that our dream will come true by working hard/ never lose confidence in ourselves/. we wont fail unless we give up our hope/ we should keep on goin

15、g/. 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句I did it!How nervous I was when I was told to give a speech in front of my classs! It was my first speech and I didnt know what to do.My teacher encouraged me and gave me some useful advice. After I chose a topic I liked best, I watched videos about how to be a good speaker a

16、nd I learnt a lot of skills. Then I practiced and practiced. Finally, the big day came.I did it! Everyone loved my speech. I was so proud of myself.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章写作练兵写作练兵 人生中有很多第一次做的事，如第一次游泳，第一次赢得比赛你记忆最深的是什么呢？请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。1. 要点：1)这件事情是什么； 2)这件事情发生的过程； 3)你的感受。2. 要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2

17、)词数100左右。2020 新变化_写作练兵As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I climbed the mountain. Three years ago, all students in my class were asked to climb a mountain. It was my first time to do things like this. I felt very excited at first. We set off at 8

18、am. in the morning and I supposed it might be an easy journey. However, as time went by, someone wanted to give up. _写作练兵The teacher encouraged us to reach the top of the mountain. Although in the end we were tired, we were really attracted by the scenery at the top and our feelings cant be expressed by words. From that time, I learned not to give up when facing difficulties. Only when I keep doing it and finish it can I have a sense of achievement. 当不定式(短语)、动名词(短语)或从句在某个句子中作宾语时，为保持句子结构平衡，避免句式结构的混乱，常用it作形式宾语，而将真正的宾语放在句尾，此时it仍只起先行引导作用，本身无词义。巧 用it作形式主语和形式宾语教材链接1. it作形式主语：We should l