高考作文的华丽变身-句式

1、湖南师大附中海口中学 熊苗高考作文的华丽变身句式篇 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。(2013届一模)60%的同学认为1、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象40%的同学认为1、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木注意：1、信的开头已为你写好 2、词数：100左右。3、参考词汇：门票：entrance fee Recently, our school has held a discussion. The topic is about

2、 whether the park should charge the entrance fee or not. Sixty percent of the students think the park shouldnt charge the entrance fee. They think the park is a place for the public to relax themselves. And if they charge the fee, they have to built the gates and walls. This is bad for our citys ima

3、ge. The other forty percent of the students think the park should charge the entrance fee but it shouldnt be high. So they can use the money to pay for the workers and buy more new plants.思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文 无遗漏信息点（审题）篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词句式多样地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？ 应收门票，支付工人工资，购置新花木。 The park need prote

4、cting. The entrance fee will pay for the workers and buy some new plants for the park. The park need protecting, so 一、将两个简单句合并为并列句 操作难度 写作效果并列连词（副词）1 表示联合关系：and, neithernor, not onlybut also等。2 表示选择关系：or, either. or, neithernor, otherwise等。3 表示转折关系：but, yet, however, nevertheless, while, whereas等。4

5、表示因果关系：for, so, therefore等。5 表示条件或结果:and, or等。6 表示递进关系：besides, furthermore, moreover等。二、主动句与被动句的互换。 操作难度 写作效果 最近，我们参加了一个英语报社组织的讨论， 讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？ Recently, my classmates and I have taken part in a discussion which is organized by an English newspaper. Our topic is whether the park should charge t

6、he entrance fee. Recently, a discussion on whether parks should charge entrance fees was held by an English newspaper.（宋学敏） 60%的同学认为不应收门票 Sixty percent of the classmates take the view that the park shouldnt charge the entrance fee. Sixty percent of the students hold the view that entrance fees shoul

7、d not be charged (宋学敏)二、主动句与被动句的互换。 操作难度 写作效果 应收门票，支付园林工人工资，购新花木 It is very necessary to charge the entrance fee, because the parks not only have to pay for salary of the workers but also buy some new plants. Not only should the administrators pay the salary of the workers, but they should buy some

8、new plants as well. Thus, it is of vital importance to get some income by entrance fee.(戴伟) Only by charging the entrance fee can the park afford to pay the salary of the worker and buy more new plants.(黄浩南) 三、将陈述句改为倒装句。 操作难度 写作效果 应收门票，支付园林工人工资，购新花木。 It is by charging the entrance fee that the park

9、can afford to pay the workers and buy more plants.（汤力专）四、将简单句改为强调句。 操作难度 写作效果1. 同位语和同位语从句（常用于描述人物、地点等介绍性文段） 60%的人认为不应收门票，公园是公众休闲的地方 Nearly sixty percent of students suppose that the park shouldnt charge the entrance fee. The hold the view that park is a place for the public to relax themselves. Near

10、ly sixty percent of students suppose that the park, _, shouldnt charge the entrance fee.（黄丹蕙）五、将两个简单句合并为复合句。 操作难度写作效果a place for the public to relax themselves2. 主语从句 如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 They worried that if the entrance fee is charged, more gates and walls have to be built, which may have bad effec

11、t on the appearance of the city. _is that if .What worried them 3. 定语从句 （限制性/ 非限制性） 公园是公众休闲的地方 In their view, the park is a place where we can have a rest rather than a money-maker.（陈俊屹） 如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象And if the entrance is taken, parks need to build gates, walls and so on. They may have a bad

12、effect on the image of the city. If parks must charge fees, new gates and walls will be built, which may have a negative effect on our citys appearance. (陈云言) 最近，我们参加了一个英语报社组织的讨论，讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？ Recently, my classmates have attended a debate held by an English newspaper. The theme of the debate is

13、whether the park should charge the entrance fee or not. Recently, my classmates have attended a debate held by an English newspaper， the theme of which/whose them is whether the park should charge the entrance fee or not. 然而40%的同学认为应收门票 while other forty percent of us think that it is necessary to c

14、harge the entrance fee.(钟佳邑) while other forty percent of us think it necessary to charge the entrance fee.六 It作形式主语或形式宾语句型 操作难度写作效果用it做形式主语的常用句型：1. It + 系动词+形容词（necessary/right/likely/unlikely/wrong/important/certain等）+ that2. It + be +名词（短语）（a pity/a shame/no wonder等）+ that3. It +be +过去分词（said/tol

15、d/reported/decided等）+ that4. It + 特殊动词（seem/appear/happen/matter）+ that常接形式宾语的一些动词：1 sb. find/feel/ think/consider/ make/believe+ it +that2 sb. hate/enjoy/like/love/dislike/appreciate/see to/insist on/depend on + it +that 最近我们参加了由你们报社组织的一个讨论。 Recently, our classmates have taken part in a discussion

16、which is organized by your newspaper. Recently, my classmates have taken part in a discussion held by your newspaper.（祝然） 七、非谓语动词充当定语、状语等 操作难度写作效果 应收门票，支付园林工人工资，购新花木。 If they charge the entrance fee, they can have enough money to pay the salary of the workers and purchase more plants. Charging the e

17、ntrance fee,（冷晓乔） 如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象If the entrance fees are taken, the gates and walls will be built, which will do harm to the appearance of the city With the entrance fee charged, .（丁昱丹）八、 with 引导的短语或者复合结构做状语 操作难度 写作效果 Recently, my classmates have attended a discussion held by an English newspap

18、er, whose them is whether the park should charge the entrance fee or not. Sixty percent of the students hold the view that entrance fees should not be charged. In their view, the park is a place where we can have a rest rather than a money-maker. Whats more, if the entrance fees are taken, the gates

19、 and walls will be built, which will do harm to the appearance of the city while other forty percent of us think it necessary to charge the entrance fee. Not only should the administrators pay the salary of the workers, but they should buy some new plants as well. Thus, it is of vital importance to get some income