小学英语六年级作文范例喜好习惯介绍

1、第 PAGE7 页 共 NUMPAGES7 页小学英语六年级作文范例喜好习惯介绍请写一个你最喜爱的季节，要写出你喜欢的原因。 My favorite season My favorite season is summer.Its hot in summer.There is a summer vacation in summer.I dont go to school.I think many children like this season, because they can eat ice-cream and go swimming.I can go swimming.Sometimes

2、 I go to the beach with my parents.Sometimes I go to the swimming pool with my friends.I usually visit many places in summer vacation.How about you? Whats your favourite food? 【要领点评】 My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心了。 同学们，你一定

3、有很多的爱好，请你写一个你的爱好，字数不少于60个单词。 My hobby My hobby is collecting sts(集邮).There are many sts in my room.I like sts very much.There are many things on the sts.They are colorful and beautiful.After school I usually go to the post office and there are many people there.I learn a lot from collecting sts.I li

4、ke collecting sts very much.My hobby I am Cindy.I am in Nanhai E_perimental Primary School.I am in Class 9, Grade 6.I am tall and thin.I live in Dali.I have many good friends.I often play with them.I have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading books.But I like to read books the be

5、st.Because of reading books is good for my study.I also like riding bikes.Because of it does a lot of good to my body.Whats your hobby? Can you tell me? My Seasons We have four seasons in a year.I can do many interesting things in each season.In spring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites

6、when its wind.And I can go hiking with my family when its sunny and cool.I like hiking.Summer is hot in the north of China, but its not long time.I often go swimming.It can make me healthy and strong.I can also wear my beautiful dresses.Fall is a season with harvest.And I can eat delicious fruits in

7、 this season.I can watch the leaves fall.Winter es, its often snowy in winter in my hometown.When it snows, everything is white.We can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski.And winter is my favourite season, because of the Spring Festival.I love seasons.I love the nature.【要领点评】 写法：这篇短文是描述

8、“我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。 时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。 注意：在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单

9、，因为有四个季节，所以要写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用，如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80个词以内。 【要领点评】 写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄

10、，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。 时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。 注意：在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个季节，所以要写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用，如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80个词以内。 I often go to Zhongshan Park.In the park you can see many trees and flo

11、wers.Some flowers are red, and some are purple.The trees are big and tall.You can see a hill in the park, too.At the foot of the hill, there are several paths.A lot of people in my city like going to the park.Some young people like taking a walk there.Some old people like singing there.Some children

12、 like dancing or playing games there.Zhongshan park is really a good place for rela_ation.www.#zzstep._ 生单词： 1.several:几个 2.rela_ation:放松中国教#育出版网_& 点评：陈祖新小朋友的这篇作文简单明了。首先，作者向大家简单地描绘出了公园的风景：有山有水有花。然后，作者写了人们在公园里的活动：青年人在公园里散步，老年人在公园里唱歌，小孩子在公园里玩游戏，多么快乐的一组画面啊！最后，作者作出总结：中山公园真的是一个放松心情的好地方！Li Ying s Hobby Li

13、 Ying likes English very much.She works hard at it.She reads English every morning.She likes speaking English.She often listens to the radio.She watches TV only on Saturday evening.Does she like dancing? No, she doesnt.But she likes drawing and singing.Her parents love her.And all the teachers and h

14、er friends like her, too.She says her hobbies make her happy.【要领点评】 这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。 小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具体地描绘；二是和上面小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，另处在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“Does she like dancing? No, she doesnt.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。 描写一种你最喜爱的动物，要对它进行外形描写。 My Favorite Animal My favorite animal is rabbit.Its name is Sweet.Sweet