高中英语书面表达之归纳提炼总结要点练习学案（含答案）

1、PAGE PAGE 14高中英语书面表达之 归纳提炼总结要点练习 列出归纳提炼总结要点，补充成句：把提纲内容按照逻辑（事情发生先后，因果关系等）罗列出来，补上主语等完成基本句子；要点式作文包括要点完整式和要点发展式。要点完整式指书面表达题目要求内容已经相对完整且表述清楚，考生只需要根据要求把内容补充完整清楚并逐一翻译，增加写作的合适开头和结尾就能完成写作任务，；而要点发展式是指题目所给的要点（要求）只是一些笼统的总结的和概括式的内容，并不具体，要求考生根据内容适当发挥拓展出自己的内容。一要点完整式1. 书面表达 假定你是李华，计划去美国学习计算机科学。请给你在美国的朋友Peter写一封电子邮件

2、，询问以下相关信息：1. 需要参加何种英语考试；2. 每学期需修的课程数和学费；3. 食宿费用；4. 合适的学校。注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。归纳提炼总结要点：1我计划去美国学习计算机科学；2对此，我有些信息要向您咨询；3我需要参加何种英语考试；4我每学期需修的课程数和学费；5我在美国的学习期间的食宿费用是多少？；6我想您给我推荐一些合适的学校。根据上下要点逻辑补充合适内容使之连贯：1. _2. _3. _4. _范文1. Dear Peter, How are you? As you know, Im q

3、uite interested in computer science. I plan to go and study it in the United Sates. So Im writing to ask you for some information about the matter. First of all, I want to know how to prepare for that as an international student. For example, what kind of test is required for admission? Second, Im a

4、dmitted to a university, how many courses do I have to take each term and how much do I have to pay a term? Finally, how much should I prepare for food and housing? Since I know very little about American universities, it would be great if you could be kind enough to suggest some universities suitab

5、le for me.Looking forward to your reply!范文2.Dear David, How are you? I meant to write to you for some time. I have planned to go abroad to study computer science in the United States. Computer science is one of the most popular major nowadays. I would like to know some information about the followin

6、g: 1. what required English examination should I take before I enter the university ? 2. how many required courses in my major shall I learn every term and how much .? 3. how much the expenses of bed and board will a student in the university to spent . 4. I want to enter a university where there ar

7、e well staff, enough equipment, and if there is any scholar? Please give me your advice. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much.Yours, Li HuaDear David, How are you? 一书面表达假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“良好饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论。请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。内容要点应包括：部分同学的饮食习惯良好的饮食习惯个人看法不吃早餐爱吃零食偏食饮食过量饮食多样化饮食定时定量有助于身体健

8、康注意：1. 发言稿必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2. 发言稿开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数;3. 词数：100左右；4. 参考词汇: 偏食 be particular about food 零食 snackDear friends, As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, its very important for us to form healthy eating habits. _归纳提炼总结要点：1. 不吃早餐发展成句：_2. 爱吃零食发展成句：_3. 偏食发展成句：_4. 饮食过量发展成句：_5. 饮食多样化饮发展成句：

9、_6. 食定时定量发展成句：_7. 有助于身体健康发展成句：_8. 发展成句：_参与范文1Dear friends,As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, its a very important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have s

10、nacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health. To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, wed be

11、tter have meals regularly.In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.Thats all. Thank you!参与范文2Dear friends,As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, its very important for us to form health

12、y eating habits. Some of us enjoy snacks instead of breakfast. Some are particular about food .They usually overeat what they like to eat. The eating habits mentioned above are bad for our health. Most of the snacks we eat are junk food, which may make us overweight and even suffer from disease.What

13、 are the good eating habits like? First, I think, we should choose healthy diet. Besides, we cant eat too much to be too full. In addition, eating a variety of food and eating food regularly are also important to keep fit.Thats all. Thank you!二书面表达汉语中有句谚语“有志者事竟成:请以此为主题,描写一个有志气的同学。要点如下面表格：姓名陈林性别男年龄18

14、年级高三志向清华大学物理系事迹1. 自幼父母双亡，被叔叔带大，家境贫寒；2. 学习刻苦，成绩一直优秀；3. 今年参加世界中学生物理奥赛，夺得金牌，为祖国争了光。启示注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。归纳提炼总结要点：1陈林的性别、年龄、所读年级发展成句：_2志向，清华大学物理系发展成句：_3自幼父母双亡，被叔叔带大，家境贫寒发展成句：_4学习刻苦，成绩一直优秀发展成句：_5今年参加世界中学生物理奥赛，夺得金牌，为祖国争了光发展成句：_6启示：_参考范文：Where there is will, there is a way“Where there is

15、 will, there is a way.” Do you believe this proverb? Perhaps my classmate Chen Lin, a senior 3 boy of eighteen years old, can prove it through his experiences. Life is very hard for Chen Lin. His parents died when he was only a little child, and he was brought up by his uncle. His living conditions

16、are worse than most of us. He once said, “I want to go to Qinghua University to study physics.” What a great ambition!Encouraged by the great will, he studies very hard. He won the gold medal in the World Olympic Physics Competition this year, winning a great honor for our motherland. Chen Lin has s

17、et a good example for us. I am sure his dream will come true, for “Where there is will, there is a way”.三书面表达假设你是某中学学生会主席李华，你校与本地一所国际学样经常举办联谊活动.你计划在重阳节组织学生到养老院去慰问老人，拟邀请国际学校的学生参加，请你根据以下内容要点给国际学样的学生会主席Tony写一封信.要点：向老人赠送礼物（鲜花、自制贺卡）；为老人提供服务（做清洁、陪老人聊天）；为老人表演节目（唱歌、跳舞）.注意：1、词数为100左右；2、信的开关和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）

18、；3、已给出的信的开关和结尾不得抄入答题卡. （以下所给内容不得抄入答题卡）Dear Tony，Chongyang, the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly, is coming around. We are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day, and we would like to invite students from your school to join us.Look forward to your early reply.You

19、rs, Li Hua归纳提炼总结要点：1. _2. _3. _4. _We have planned several activities. When we get there，we will visit the elderly in their rooms in groups，presenting them with flowers and selfmade cards to show our respect and love. Then we will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses.As

20、some old people feel lonely. We may chat with them about their old days, changes of our city, or anything they are interested in. We may also give them some performances: singing, dancing, and so on.I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in China. If you have any suggestio

21、ns, please let us know.五书面表达2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。教育部倡导学生：每天锻炼一小时健康工作五十年幸福生活一辈子请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。注意：发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：阳光体育活动a national student sports program; 教育部the Mi

22、nistry of EducationGood afternoon, everyone,_Thank you!归纳提炼总结要点：1. _2. _3. _4. _Good afternoon, everyone.On the morning of April 29, 2007, from 10:00 to 11:00, hundreds of millions of students from primary, middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sports program. E

23、leven million students in Jiangsu took an active part in this program.The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day, in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.Personally, I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to

24、 have daily exercise. Although we take an hour a day for exercise, it is well worth it. Taking exercise helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind. Therefore, we can work more efficiently.Thank you! (125词)六书面表达你所在的班级将要举办一次主题为“What Can We Do for Our School?”的英语演讲比赛。请写一篇英语演讲稿，要求从以下四方面中任选一至二个进行阐述

25、，并举例加以说明。1. 关心他人；2. 美化校园；3. 受护学校设施；4. 营造良好的学习氛围。注意：1. 不要在书面表达中出现所在学校的校名和本人姓名，否则本节判为零分；2. 词数：100左右；3. 参考词汇：爱心love and care;校园campus; 设施facilities; 氛围environment4.开头和结尾已经写好，且不记入词数。Hello, everyone. Its nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.Thank you

26、for listening!归纳提炼总结要点：1. _2. _3. _4. _ Hello, everyone. Its nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something. The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful. Every one of us may plant a tree in the school, or organize a thorough cleaning on

27、the campus. We can also form a good habit of putting the rubbish in the trashcan. The second thing we can do is to protect the facilities in our school. When we leave the classroom, we should never forget to turn off the light or close the door. We should not leave the tap water running or waste any

28、 materials in the laboratory class.If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will turn our school into a better place to Study and live in. Thank you for listening!七书面表达大学生活即将开始，你将面对新的学习和生活环境，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你打算如何安排你的大学生活。内容要点应包括：确定新的学习目标改进学习方法学会独立生活参加各种课外活动处理好与同学的关系注意：（1）短文的内容要连贯、完整；（2

29、）短文单词数：100左右（开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数）。归纳提炼总结要点：1. _2. _3. _4. _I will go to college in the near future. After I enter college, I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning. Whats more, as I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some w

30、ashing and cleaning by myself. In my spare time, I will take part in different kinds of school activities, for example, I will often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English. In addition, I need to get along well with my classmates and teaches at college. I think I will have a wonderfu

31、l college life. (102 words)八书面表达假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：1. 年龄；2. 性别；3. 爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。注意：1词数100 左右； 2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3 开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter, I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. Best regards, Li Hua归纳提炼总结要点：1. _2. _3. _4. _Dear Peter

32、, Im writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to hav

33、e a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share with her our traveling experiences, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.I look forward to hearing fro

34、m you soon. Best regards, Li Hua九书面表达假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry 最近来信，询问你高考后的暑期安排。请胸根据以下要点,用英语回一封信,说明你的计划,并简述理由。1休息；2.读书；3.陪伴父母； 4.参加社会活动；注意：1.词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）；2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3. 参考词汇：高考college entrance examination社会活动social activitiesDear Henry, Im glad to receive your letter. Best wishes

35、!Li Hua归纳提炼总结要点：1. _2. _3. _4. _Im glad to receive your letter. Its a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination. First of all, a good rest is needed because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. Of course, Ill do some

36、reading for fun, and for knowledge as well. Ill spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. Theyve done so much for me, you know. If possible, Ill take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society.Best wishes!Li Hua十书面表达据报道，7岁的美国女

37、孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌（lung cancer）后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会（ACS）决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：自我介绍得知的情况表示鼓励打算为她做什么祝她早日康复注意：信的格式已为你写好信中不得出现你的真实情况。词数100左右。请在答题卡上作答。归纳提炼总结要点：1. _2. _3. _4. _Dear Amy, I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of you

38、r present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer. At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to

39、 make it. I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. It will give more courage to live on. May you recover soon. Yours, Li Hua十一书面表达假设你是王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。要点：1. 简要表述李华在你心目中的印象； 2. 用一到两个相关的事例进行具体描述； 3. 对他李华表示美好的的祝愿。

40、 注意：1. 内容积极向上，语意连贯，结构完整。词数120左右。 2. 不能写成诗歌形式；不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。归纳提炼总结要点：1. _2. _3. _4. _Li Hua, Its time to say goodbye. Its time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I nee

41、d. Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. You took good care of me while I was having an injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. Without your help, I would have failed in the examination. I sti

42、ll have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.! Yours, Wang Ping 二要点发展式1. 书面表达假设你是李华。美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下：1表示赞成。2提出你喜欢的栏目。3简要说明理由。

43、注意： 1词数100左右。 2信的开头和结尾已为你写好。 3适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4参考词汇：栏目- column June 8Dear Mr. Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together._ Yours faithfullyLi Hua归纳提炼总结要点：1. 表示赞成发展成句：_2. 提出你喜欢的栏目发展成句：_ 1）_ 补：_ 2）_ 补：_3. 简要说明理由发展成句：_ 1）_ 2）_4. 发表前景看法：_June 8Dear Mr. Green,I am very

44、 excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success.I would like the magazine to have three columns: News, Teachers Advice and Students Voice. From the News column we can learn about what is going on in both of our school

45、s. In Teachers Advice, our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom. Students Voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies.I believe that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties, and I am looking forward to read

46、ing it.Yours faithfully,Li Hua2书面表达假定你是李华，最近你班上有很多同学都开通了博客（blog）。很多家长和老师认为开博客浪费时间和精力而持反对意见。请你就此话题给报社的编辑写一封信。内容包括：1. 开博客热潮及其受到的质疑；2表明自己的看法；3. 陈述自己的理由（至少两条）。注意：1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2词数100左右（文章的开头与线束语已为你写好，不计入总词数）。Dear editor, At present, blog has become very popular. _归纳提炼总结要点：1. 开博客热潮: 最近你班上有很多同学都开通了博

47、客（blog）发展成句：_2. 受到的质疑: 很多家长和老师认为开博客浪费时间和精力而持反对意见 发展成句：_ 1）_ 补：_ 2）_ 补：_3. 表明自己的看法发展成句：_ 1）_ 2）_4. 陈述自己的理由（至少两条）_1）_ 2）_范文：Dear editor, At present, blog has become very popular. A lot of students in my class have created their own blogs and often visit others bolgs. Many parents and teachers are stro

48、ngly against it. They think it is a waste of time and energy. However, I love the idea that we students have blogs of our own. Anyone can create his own blog as he wishes. Blogs have no fixed rules and dont call for professional knowledge and skills to manage it. So we can express our inner voice fr

49、eely on the blog and share our thoughts with others. Whats more, blog covers all kinds of topics from daily life to political forums, from individual thoughts to world events. So blogs can also help release our pressure of study and entertain us when we are tired. In short, I am for creating blogs.

50、最近班上有很多同学都开通了博客，但是很多家长和老师认为开博客浪费时间和精力而持反对意见，我认为开通微博是一件好事，因为：1.有了微博可以开阔我们的视野2.劳逸结合3.增长见识所以我认为开通微博是合理的，但应合理使用假设你是李华，你在读美国中学生Jack的博客时了解到他即将作为一名交换生来北京学习，希望能够寄宿在一名擅长英语的中学生家里，以便更好地了解中国文化。请根据以下要点给Jack 写一封电子邮件：1. 欢迎他来中国学习；2. 介绍你的个人情况；3. 邀请他住在你家并表示愿意为他提供帮助。注意：1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2词数100左右（文章的开头与线束语已为你写好，不计入总词

51、数）。DearJack, ImverygladtolearnthatyourecomingtoBeijingasanexchangestudentandwanttostayinalocalhomewithamiddleschoolstudentwhocanspeakexcellentEnglish.Imahighschoolstudent,anditsmysincerehopethatyoucanstaywithme. IamgoodatEnglishandcancommunicatewithforeignersfluently.Besides,Ilikereadingandtraveling

52、inmysparetime, soifyouarewithus,IcantakeyouaroundBeijingandletyouknowmoreaboutourbrilliantChineseculture. BothmyparentsandIarefriendlyandenthusiasticinpersonality.SoIbelievewecanbegoodfriends.Imsure IwilldowhatIcantohelpyouwithyourChinese.Imlookingforwardtoyourcoming. Bestwishes.Yours,Li Hua书面表达假定你是

53、李华，和外籍教师Smith先生预约了昨天下午3点在他办公室请教如何学好英语，但你因故未能赴约。请你给他写一封电子邮件。内容主要包括：1. 为未能赴约致歉；2. 解释未能赴约的具体原因；3. 希望重新预约。注意:1. 词数100左右2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。One possible version:Dear Mr. Smith,Im writing to beg you to excuse me for missing our appointment at 3 yesterday afternoon, when you intended to give me advice on English learning. Im sorry for the inconvenience it caused to you. You may be unwilling to accept an explanation. However, I dont want you to misunderstand me. On my way