高三英语基础写作-人物描写备课讲稿

1、第一页，共27页。课型课型:写作课写作课教学目标教学目标:通过这节的讲授通过这节的讲授,让学生掌握如何用英让学生掌握如何用英语介绍人物语介绍人物.重点重点:讲授描写人物的常用句型和步骤讲授描写人物的常用句型和步骤.难点难点:灵活运用所学词汇及句型写一篇短文灵活运用所学词汇及句型写一篇短文.教学方法教学方法: 顺序法，归纳演绎法顺序法，归纳演绎法授课时间授课时间: 星期一星期一 (1课时课时)授课教师授课教师(jiosh)：廖夏露：廖夏露授课班级授课班级:高三（高三（8）班）班第二页，共27页。Basic Writing-Character introduction (人物人物(rnw)介绍）介

2、绍）- 常用句子结构常用句子结构第三页，共27页。人物简介的一般人物简介的一般(ybn)步骤步骤 the right order(1)概况概况age, sex, birth-place, background(2)外貌性格外貌性格appearance ,character(3)教育教育education (4)生平生平(shngpng)big events in his or her life ( in the order of time )(5)评价评价evaluation第四页，共27页。【Useful words and expressions】年龄、出生年龄、出生(chshng)1）二

3、十岁的时候）二十岁的时候_2）于）于1987年年5月生在北京月生在北京 _at the age of 20be born in Beijing in May 1987第五页，共27页。【Useful words and expressions】2. 外貌、性格特征：外貌、性格特征：1）漂亮）漂亮(pio ling)_2）1.80米高米高_3）勤奋的）勤奋的_beautiful/pretty/handsome/good-looking1.80 meters tall/ in heightdiligent/ hardworkingambitious, competent, confident, c

4、onsiderate, creative, outspoken, devoted, energetic, humorous, independent第六页，共27页。3. 教育：教育：1）努力学习）努力学习_2）获得）获得(hud)硕士学位硕士学位_3）毕业）毕业_work hard at his studiesreceive/get a masters degreegraduate from第七页，共27页。4. 经历经历(jngl)：1）致力于）致力于_2）有）有天赋天赋_devote oneself tohave a gift/ talent for5. 评价评价(pngji)：做出了做

5、出了贡献贡献_ 对对的评价的评价(pngji)很高很高_make great contributions tospeak/think highly of 第八页，共27页。 Lets do a fast reading: Just guess the person who is described by the following sentences.第九页，共27页。u 1.Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, he was brought up by his mother and was shy and quiet during his

6、childhood. u 2. Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. u 3. When his first album(唱片唱片(chngpin) lbm ） was released in 2000, he got the worlds attention.u 4. He becomes very popular with the young, and has received many awards for his songs. u 5. His own unique

7、 Chinese R&B style is unparalleled （无法匹敌的）（无法匹敌的） by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes a chance on trying new things.第十页，共27页。Jay Chou(周杰伦周杰伦)第十一页，共27页。How to translate the sentence lets analyze the sentences in the passage.第十二页，共27页。 Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in

8、Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was brought up by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. 分词分词(fn c)结构结构 同位语同位语身份身份(shn fen)与与概况概况尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章(wnzhng)简洁，简洁，通顺通顺第十三页，共27页。 Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. When Jays

9、 first album(唱片(chngpin)） was released（发行） in 2000, he got the worlds attention. He becomes very popular with the young, which allowed him to received many awards for his songs. 经历经历(jngl)分词分词(fn c)结构结构状语从句状语从句定语从句定语从句注意尽量用非谓语动词注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼使文章精炼尽量用复合句尽量用复合句,如定语从句等，润色文章如定语从句等，润色文章第十四页，共27页。 His

10、own unique His own unique（独特的）（独特的） Chinese Chinese R&B style is unparalleledR&B style is unparalleled（无法匹敌（无法匹敌的）的） by others and he continues to by others and he continues to make breakthroughs make breakthroughs （突破（突破(tp)(tp)）as as he takes a chancehe takes a chance（冒险）（冒险）on on tryingin

11、g new things.tryinging new things.评价评价(pngji)evaluation注意注意(zh y)运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组组第十五页，共27页。A.A.巧用同位语结构巧用同位语结构, , 使文章简洁，通顺使文章简洁，通顺1)1)钟南山钟南山19411941年出生年出生(chshng)(chshng)在广州，他是中在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一。国最伟大的医生之一。Zhong Zhong NanshaNanshan, n, , was born in Guangzhou in 1941., was born in Guang

12、zhou in 1941.2 2）为人自信乐观的男孩刘翔）为人自信乐观的男孩刘翔, , 出生出生(chshng)(chshng)在在19831983年的上海年的上海. .Liu Xiang, _ , was Liu Xiang, _ , was born in Shanghai in 1983.born in Shanghai in 1983.* 语法语法(yf)，句法高分，句法高分tipsone of the greatest doctors in Chinaa confident and optimistic boy第十六页，共27页。B.B.巧用分词结构，使文章精炼巧用分词结构，使文章精

13、炼eg.3eg.3岁时，对音乐表现岁时，对音乐表现(bioxin)(bioxin)出浓厚兴趣，周出浓厚兴趣，周杰伦开始学习弹钢琴。杰伦开始学习弹钢琴。Jay Chou showed great interest in music at the Jay Chou showed great interest in music at the age of 3. He began learning to play the piano.age of 3. He began learning to play the piano.1 1）获得中山大学硕士学位后，她出国升造。）获得中山大学硕士学位后，她出国升

14、造。_ from _ from Zhongshan University, she went abroad to Zhongshan University, she went abroad to further her study. further her study. 2 2）姚明）姚明19801980年出生于上海，是世界著名篮球运动员。年出生于上海，是世界著名篮球运动员。Yao Ming, _, is a world Yao Ming, _, is a world famous basketball player. (famous basketball player. (定语定语) )Ha

15、ving received a masters degreeborn in Shanghai in 1980Showing great interest in music, Jay Chou began learning to play the piano at the age of 3.第十七页，共27页。C 巧用巧用with结构，作定语结构，作定语(dngy)/状语状语 with + n.1)历史老师是个漂亮女人，长着两只大眼睛历史老师是个漂亮女人，长着两只大眼睛(yn jing)，留长发，留长发.My history teacher is a beautiful woman _ . 2)

16、他高鼻子，大嘴巴，看起来像个外国人。他高鼻子，大嘴巴，看起来像个外国人。_, he looks like a foreigner.3) 他带了一个大包，上车很困难。他带了一个大包，上车很困难。He had difficulty getting on the bus _. with +O +Oc (非谓语非谓语/介短介短)1）他看到一个抱着婴儿的女人站在那里。）他看到一个抱着婴儿的女人站在那里。He saw a woman _ standing there.2）他双手反绑，被带了进来。）他双手反绑，被带了进来。He was brought in, _.With a big nose and a

17、big mouthwith two big eyes and long hairwith a baby in her armswith his hands tied behindwith a big bag第十八页，共27页。D D 恰当使用定语从句、状语从句等复合句，润色文恰当使用定语从句、状语从句等复合句，润色文章章(wnzhng)(wnzhng)1 1）叶诗文获得两枚奥运金牌，这使她闻名于世界。）叶诗文获得两枚奥运金牌，这使她闻名于世界。Ye Shiwen won two gold medals in London Ye Shiwen won two gold medals in Lon

18、don Olympic Games , _.Olympic Games , _.2) 20022) 2002年，他去了上海，在那里他赚了一大笔钱。年，他去了上海，在那里他赚了一大笔钱。In 2002, he went to Shanghai, In 2002, he went to Shanghai, _._.3 3）她决心成为一名歌手，无论遇到什么困难。）她决心成为一名歌手，无论遇到什么困难。 She decided to be a singer She decided to be a singer _she might come across. _she might come across

19、. which made her world-famouswhere he madea lot of moneyno matter what difficulty/whatever difficulty第十九页，共27页。 你是李华， 今年毕业要申请到国外留学，对方要求你用英语写一篇短文介绍自己的 基本情况， 请你根据以下情况作自我介绍。只能使用5个句子表达(biod)全部内容。内容包括：牛刀小试牛刀小试(ni do xio sh): Now its your turn!第二十页，共27页。姓名姓名李华李华出生年月出生年月1993年年5月月出生地出生地广东海丰广东海丰学历学历2000-2006

20、 海城小学海城小学 2006-2012 彭湃中学彭湃中学所学课程所学课程语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑特长特长英语、电脑（去年在全校电脑竞赛中获得英语、电脑（去年在全校电脑竞赛中获得第一名）第一名）业余爱好业余爱好游泳、打篮球游泳、打篮球个人个人(grn)概括概括第二十一页，共27页。 1. 1993年年5月，李华出生于广东省海丰县月，李华出生于广东省海丰县 2. 她于她于2000-2006年就读于海城小学，之年就读于海城小学，之后后2006-2012年就读于彭湃中学。年就读于彭湃中学。 3. 主要所学课程有语文，数学、英语、物主要所学课程有语文，数学、英

21、语、物理理(wl)、化学和电脑。、化学和电脑。 4. 李华擅长英语和电脑，而且去年在全校李华擅长英语和电脑，而且去年在全校电脑竞赛中获得第一名。电脑竞赛中获得第一名。 5. 在业余时间，喜欢打篮球和游泳。在业余时间，喜欢打篮球和游泳。第二十二页，共27页。 Person Person （人称（人称(rnchng)(rnchng)） Tense Tense （时态）（时态）Attention第二十三页，共27页。Your turn! Finish the composition with the help of the writing tips above.第二十四页，共27页。生词生词(shngc)大扫荡大扫荡 小学小学 primary school 科目科目 subject 化学化学 chemistry 物理物理(wl) physics 竞赛竞赛 competition 一等奖一等奖 the first prise第二十五页，共27页。Sample writing Born in May 1993, I am Li Hua , a student from Haifeng, Guangdong Province. I studied in Haicheng Primary School from 2000 to 2006 and aft