读写任务概括部分

1、“读写任务读写任务”题要求考生首先阅读一篇大约题要求考生首先阅读一篇大约200词词的短文，再用约的短文，再用约30词概括短文全文或短文某个方词概括短文全文或短文某个方面的内容（满分面的内容（满分5分），然后用约分），然后用约120词就某个主词就某个主题发表观点。发表观点时题中本身有内容要点提题发表观点。发表观点时题中本身有内容要点提示（满分示（满分20分）分） 。该题型中的该题型中的“概括概括”与与“阐述观阐述观点或描写经历点或描写经历”是一个有机的整体。是一个有机的整体。 “读写任务读写任务”型写作对考生的概括能力、逻辑思型写作对考生的概括能力、逻辑思维能力和信息组织能力都提出了较高的要求。

2、维能力和信息组织能力都提出了较高的要求。要求考生首先要读懂阅读材料，并简洁地概括要求考生首先要读懂阅读材料，并简洁地概括材料内容。这一部分对考生而言，材料内容。这一部分对考生而言，找准文章的找准文章的主题句与关键词尤为重要。主题句与关键词尤为重要。第二部分则要求衔第二部分则要求衔接自然，主题明确，观点鲜明，表达连贯，结接自然，主题明确，观点鲜明，表达连贯，结构完整。构完整。 如何以约如何以约30词概括短文的大意？词概括短文的大意？概括短文大意就是概括性转述短文。它要求删去次要的、概括短文大意就是概括性转述短文。它要求删去次要的、解释性的和修饰性的内容，并要求对内容进行必要的抽解释性的和修饰性的

3、内容，并要求对内容进行必要的抽象，象，再用自己的语言加以组织和概括再用自己的语言加以组织和概括，从而使得文章更，从而使得文章更简明，让人们在很短的时间内就知道了文章的主要内容。简明，让人们在很短的时间内就知道了文章的主要内容。分值分值评分标准评分标准5按照要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无按照要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。范。 4基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结

4、构正确，行文规关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。范。 3基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相关基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。比较规范。2不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。 1-0没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相

5、关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。 常用方法：要点合并法，段落大意合并法常用方法：要点合并法，段落大意合并法 常用技巧：重组要点，同义改写常用技巧：重组要点，同义改写能力要求：全面，简明，连贯能力要求：全面，简明，连贯【写作内容【写作内容】 假设你就是信中的假设你就是信中的Ari，父亲在你出生的时候写了这，父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。今天是父亲封信。今天是父亲50岁生日，你准备以写信的方式，岁生日，你准备以写信的方式，祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容 （信的开头和结尾已（信的开头和结尾已经为你

6、写好）：经为你写好）：1. 以约以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；2. 以约以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：1） 读信后的感受；读信后的感受；2） 以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；3） 表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。原文：原文：I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. Thats why your mommy and I h

7、ave named you Ari，which means “lion”. Its our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.同义改写同义改写1： I deeply understand your expectation that I grow strong and brave. You also wanted me to catch every chance to be a successful man and be hel

8、pful to the society. 同义改写同义改写2： You wished me to be strong-minded and successful. You were looking forward to seeing me fight for my future bravely and do well for myself and others.答题步骤答题步骤1.阅读写作内容、主题和要点提示；根据这些阅读写作内容、主题和要点提示；根据这些 提示，阅读语篇找出主题句和关键词。提示，阅读语篇找出主题句和关键词。（2013年高考广东卷）年高考广东卷）以约以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工

9、作的想法，内容包括：个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：（1）描述清洁工工作的艰辛；）描述清洁工工作的艰辛；（2）假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？）假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？（3）你对平凡工作者的看法。）你对平凡工作者的看法。（2013年高考广东卷）年高考广东卷）以约以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：（1）描述清洁工工作的艰辛；）描述清洁工工作的艰辛；（2）假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？）假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？（3）你对平凡工作者的看法。）你对平凡工作者的看法。To many people, even the word “

10、work” soundsunpleasant. These people simply do not enjoy the job they are doing. It does not give them any real satisfaction. It may be quite easy, but it is very boring. No matter how ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. Society cannot function a sin

11、gle day without the “dull and boring” jobs.答题步骤答题步骤2.根据语篇的主题，精兵裁员，削枝叶，保留其根据语篇的主题，精兵裁员，削枝叶，保留其 中最能概括短文内容的语句。中最能概括短文内容的语句。 To many people, even the word “work” soundsunpleasant. These people simply do not enjoy the job they are doing. It does not give them any real satisfaction. It may be quite easy,

12、but it is very boring. No matter how ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. Society cannot function a single day without the “dull and boring” jobs.Many people do not enjoy the job they are doing. It may be quite easy, but it is very boring. No matter h

13、ow ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect.Many people do not enjoy the job they are doing. It may be quite easy, but it is very boring. No matter how ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect.答题步骤答题步骤3.对这些语句进行同义

14、改写，自然衔接，使之成对这些语句进行同义改写，自然衔接，使之成 为一个连贯的语段。为一个连贯的语段。 Many people complain about the job they are doing because they find it easy and boring. However,every ordinary job plays an important part in society so we should show respect for them. (33words)通过这三个步骤之后，可以清晰发现上面这个通过这三个步骤之后，可以清晰发现上面这个语段的内容与短文的内容相一致

15、，符合语段的内容与短文的内容相一致，符合“全面、全面、精炼、准确精炼、准确”的要求。语段中的句子来源于上面的要求。语段中的句子来源于上面的短文，但不是直接引用和抄摘短文中的句子。的短文，但不是直接引用和抄摘短文中的句子。 Many people complain about the job they are doing because they find it easy and boring. However,every ordinary job is an essential part in society sowe should show respect for them. (33word

16、s)（2011年高考广东卷）年高考广东卷）以约以约120个词讲述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的经历，个词讲述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的经历，内容包括：内容包括：时间、地点和起因；时间、地点和起因；想家给学习和生活带来的影响；想家给学习和生活带来的影响；你（或你朋友）是如何应对的。你（或你朋友）是如何应对的。Sam went to a boarding school. He would not be able to go home every weekend. He tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind

17、was at home. He started feeling homesick and wanted to go home as soon as possible. He got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. He could not concentrate in the classroom. Sam went to a boarding school. He would not be able to go home every weekend. He tried as much as he could to fit

18、in but could not because his mind was at home. He started feeling homesick and wanted to go home as soon as possible. He got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. He could not concentrate in the classroom. 精兵裁员后精兵裁员后Sam went to a boarding school. He would not be able to go home every w

19、eekend. He started feeling homesick. He tried as much as he could to fit in butcould not. He got sick soon. He could not concentrate in the classroom. Sam went to a boarding school. He would not be able to go home every weekend. He started feeling homesick. He tried as much as he could to fit in but

20、could not. He got sick soon. He could not concentrate in the classroom. 同义改写后同义改写后 Sam was studying in a boarding school and couldnt go home every weekend, so he began tofeel homesick. Because of homesickness, he fell ill and couldnt concentrate on his studies.(31words)2009年高考广东卷年高考广东卷以约以约120个词就以个词就

21、以“该不该禁止旅客和动物拍照该不该禁止旅客和动物拍照”进行议论，进行议论，内容包括：内容包括：（1） 人们在参观动物时为什么喜欢和动物拍照；人们在参观动物时为什么喜欢和动物拍照；（2）假如你处在动物的处境，你会有什么反应；）假如你处在动物的处境，你会有什么反应；（3）你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。）你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。找出与主题相关的词组和语句。找出与主题相关的词组和语句。All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining. The reason Jackie and her fellow koala are repeatedly

22、 awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged or photographed by tourists. Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make practice illegal.All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining. The reason Jackie and her fellow koala are repeatedly awo

23、ken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged or photographed by tourists. Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make practice illegal.精兵裁员精兵裁员All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining. Jackie and her fellow koala are repeatedly awoken fro

24、m their deep sleep. They can be hugged or photographed by tourists. the Aussie government isnow moving to make practice illegal.All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining. Jackie and her fellow koala are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep. They can be hugged or photographed by tourists. t

25、he Aussie government isnow moving to make practice illegal.同义改写，形成语段同义改写，形成语段Tourists repeatedly awake the koalas in order tohug and photograph them, which make these animals unhappy. Therefore, the Aussie governmentwill put a ban on these practices of the tourists. (31words)2010年年Ethan, was addicte

26、d to TV. Then one day Ethans mother made him an offer in order to draw him back to his school subjects. His mom paid him $200. He went out and bought a TV, the biggest he could find. In recent years, hundreds of schools have carried out experiments with paying kids with each for showing up or gettin

27、g good grades. All school kids admire this trend. But it upsets adults. 2010年年Ethan, was addicted to TV. Then one day Ethans mothermade him an offer in order to draw him back to his schoolsubjects. His mom paid him $200. He went out and boughta TV, the biggest he could find. In recent years, hundred

28、sof schools have carried out experiments with paying kids with cash for showing up or getting good grades. All schoolkids admire this trend. But it upsets adults. 精兵裁员精兵裁员Ethan, was addicted to TV. In order to draw him back to his school subjects, his mom paid him $200. He went outand bought a TV. with paying kids with cash for showingup or getting good grades. All school kids admire this trend. But it upsets adults. 精兵裁员精兵裁员Ethan, was