高中英语短文改错公开课

1、 How to do Proof-reading短文改错Class 8 Senior 1Miss Fang In our everyday lives, if we make In our everyday lives, if we make some mistakes, we should correct them, some mistakes, we should correct them, and then we are still a good fellow.and then we are still a good fellow. Chairman Maos words Objecti

2、ves（考 查 目 标）1 1）识别错误）识别错误 并正确校正语篇的能力并正确校正语篇的能力2 2）综合运用英语知识的能力）综合运用英语知识的能力3 3）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻辑的能力辑的能力 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误； 2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 3.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。1. I c

3、an go to home now.2. I like history of China.3. I am fond at English.theWrong wordMissing wordofUnnecessary word高考短文改错的考察方式高考短文改错的考察方式 A Limerick (/limrik/打油诗）打油诗）请先念一遍请先念一遍“咒语咒语”吧吧动词形，名词数动词形，名词数还要注意还要注意形和副形和副代词代词格，细领悟格，细领悟介词介词短语须关注短语须关注习惯用法习惯用法要记住要记住冠词连词冠词连词常光顾常光顾谓语谓语非谓语非谓语 动词动词语态语态donetodo主谓一致主谓一致

4、时态时态doing一、动词一、动词形形一、动词一、动词形形1. However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday. (2011 全国）全国）2. I stayed there for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl were all right. (2009 全国卷全国卷2) 3. Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.4.To

5、oursurprise,themanwasturnedoutathief flewwasvisited_1.动词的动词的时态时态错误错误. .2.主、谓不一致主、谓不一致的错误的错误3.andbutso等连词等连词前后动词时态不一致前后动词时态不一致4.主动语态和被动语态主动语态和被动语态的错用的错用谓语谓语5 5.非谓语动词非谓语动词 错误高考链接高考链接: : I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.（2011新课标全国卷）新课标全国卷）buying I was really disappointing

6、and about to leave when he walked out of a building. (2011陕西卷陕西卷)disappointed4. He used to getting up early to take physical exercise. werelikes excitingget1.Not only the students but also the teacher like the film. 2. They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions. 3. I fo

7、und the game excited and my dad explained the rules. Practice二、名词二、名词数数 指指名词单、复数形式名词单、复数形式的用法错误。的用法错误。高考链接：高考链接：It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.（2011新课标全国卷）新课标全国卷）luggage In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady, around three per weeks.(2011辽宁卷）辽宁卷）week根据名词前

8、的根据名词前的修饰语或谓语动词的单复数修饰语或谓语动词的单复数来判断来判断1.Dont lose hearts, youll be successful in time. 2.I need some more informations. 3.These machines look the same,but they are of different kind. heartinformationkinds不可数名词不可数名词progress, furniture, weather, fun, news, information, advicePractice三、还要注意三、还要注意形形和和副副

9、1. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.（2011 浙江卷）浙江卷）slowly2.The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.(2009陕西）陕西）faster3. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from mine. . .形容词形容词修饰名词，修饰名词，bebe动词，系动词后要用动词，系动词后要用形容词形容词. .副词副词修

10、饰动词，形容词，过去分词，整个句修饰动词，形容词，过去分词，整个句子子. .比较级比较级和和最高级最高级的使用的使用 clear 高考链接：高考链接： 1. He asked angry if we had finished the work. 2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from mine. 3. His father looks much more happier today.angrily clear 4. So I grateful accepted the offer.

11、 gratefullypracticePractice四四、 代词代词格，格，细领悟细领悟3. it3. it作形主、形宾作形主、形宾、指代时有缺漏指代时有缺漏 (make, find, think)或固定搭配或固定搭配. .高考链接：高考链接：1.With the help of Katia, a roommate of me (2011 重庆卷）重庆卷）mine2.It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I began to understand (2010 辽宁卷）辽宁卷）3.He found diffi

12、cult to learn math well.ourit1. 1. 人称代词，反身代词，不定代词人称代词，反身代词，不定代词2. 2. 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误. .2. I was learning to express me in simple English. 3. I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 4. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. myself

13、everythingit1. Some students may also save up for our college or future use .theirPractice五、五、介词短语介词短语须关注须关注，习惯用法习惯用法要记住要记住 1. 1.主要考查主要考查固定短语，固定介词固定短语，固定介词的搭配。的搭配。2.2.介词的介词的多用，漏用多用，漏用和和误用误用3 3.时间状语前有指示代词时间状语前有指示代词this, thatthis, that或或one, one, next,lastnext,last等修饰时不用介词等修饰时不用介词. . 高考链接：高考链接： 1.Two

14、years before, I travelled to Brazil and I rented for a car.(2012 浙浙 江卷江卷)2.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. withpractice1. Im sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. 2. At last we reached to the village at the foot of the hill.3. When a young man starts to earn hi

15、s own living, he can no longer expect others to pay his food .4. The gentleman insisted at my receiving the money.atforonPractice连词连词butbut，andand，or, soor, so和和althoughalthough的逻的逻辑性用法错误辑性用法错误高考链接：高考链接：六六 、冠词连词冠词连词常光顾常光顾1. He was right here in the front of me. (2011陕西卷）2. I bought my ticket but tur

16、ned around to pick up my bag from the floor. . . 冠词冠词a, ana, an和和thethe的用法错误的用法错误and1. I came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light.2. He will stay there one and two days.3. Every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying. 4. The driver put th

17、e window down and offered us a umbrella. andoran The smaller piece is that you want, right ?It is known to us all, all efforts will be paid. Practice makes perfect, that is very important for us .七七、复杂句子复杂句子不放过不放过 what Aswhich1.单词拼写不改单词拼写不改.2.大小写不改大小写不改.3.词序不改词序不改.4.标点符号不改标点符号不改.5.原意不改原意不改.五不改原则五不改原

18、则解题步骤解题步骤1. 通读全文，掌握大意通读全文，掌握大意2.整句理解，上下兼顾整句理解，上下兼顾3.复读全文，复读全文，检查验证检查验证再叮嘱几句：再叮嘱几句：1.单词拼写不改单词拼写不改.2.大小写不改大小写不改.3.词序不改词序不改.4.标点符号不改标点符号不改.5.原意不改原意不改.解题步骤解题步骤1.1.通读全文，掌握大意通读全文，掌握大意2.2.整句理解，上下兼顾整句理解，上下兼顾3.3.复读全文，检查验证复读全文，检查验证五不改原则五不改原则At Christmas Eve, Jim went with hisfather to choose a Christmas tree.

19、 They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!They put them in the corner of the sittingroom. Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room lookedreally beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmastree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily.At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his1._father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose 2._a bi