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1、英语写作技巧英语写作技巧Lecture of Writing Outline n写作基本要求n过渡语n替换新词,改换句式n写作的“四化”n写作增词的技巧2一、写作基本要求:32. 段落分明2.1 15%的开头,70%的主体,15%的结尾2.2 每段首行缩进4-5个字母4二、过渡语n1.表文章结构顺序,列举:First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/SecondAnd then,Finally,In the end,At lastn2.表并列补充关系的,另外:What is more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,In additionn
2、3.表转折对比关系的:However,Although +clause(从句), On one handOn the other hand;5n4.表因果关系的:Because,Thus,Therefore,As a resultn5.表换一种方式表达:In other wordsn6.表进行举例说明:For example,句子; For instance,句子; such as+n/doingn7.表陈述事实:In fact, as a matter of factn8.表达自己观点:As far as I know,In my opinionn9.表总结:In short,In a wo
3、rd,In conclusion,In summary67三、替换旧词,改变句式许多考生的作文错误倒不多,相当符合语法要求,但用词贫乏,过多许多考生的作文错误倒不多,相当符合语法要求,但用词贫乏,过多使用如使用如more and more, I think, as you knowmore and more, I think, as you know等表达,并且句子结构等表达,并且句子结构过于简单。过于简单。统计结果表明,统计结果表明,差的作文中简单句多,而好的作文简单句少差的作文中简单句多,而好的作文简单句少;差的作差的作文从句、连词、分词结构出现的频率大大低于好的作文文从句、连词、分词结构
4、出现的频率大大低于好的作文;差的作文中差的作文中关键词和同义表达出现的频率低于好的作文关键词和同义表达出现的频率低于好的作文。用词的丰富和句式的多。用词的丰富和句式的多样应该主要通过多看好文章,仔细琢磨好文章中的用词和句子来提高。样应该主要通过多看好文章,仔细琢磨好文章中的用词和句子来提高。换句话说,也就是要从阅读中学习写作。换句话说,也就是要从阅读中学习写作。8在措词方面存在的问题:在措词方面存在的问题:1 1、可供、可供“调遣调遣”的词汇量贫乏,局限于中学词汇。的词汇量贫乏,局限于中学词汇。比如,我们一提到比如,我们一提到“重要的重要的”大多数同学首先会想到大多数同学首先会想到“impor
5、tantimportant”这个单词这个单词它的如下同义词:它的如下同义词:significant, vital, crucial, significant, vital, crucial, criticalcritical, etcetc92 2、表达相近意义时,常重复用一个词,用词单调。、表达相近意义时,常重复用一个词,用词单调。比如,我们一提到比如,我们一提到“大大” 大多数同学首先会想到大多数同学首先会想到“bigbig”这个单词这个单词 它的如下同义词:它的如下同义词:great, large, huge, vast, great, large, huge, vast, enormo
6、us enormous etc.在措词方面存在的问题:在措词方面存在的问题:10应对之策应对之策 1 1、调动大学期间学过的更生动,更丰富的词汇。、调动大学期间学过的更生动,更丰富的词汇。Eg. Eg. 引起、导致引起、导致 Cause, lead to, result in, bring about, Cause, lead to, result in, bring about, give rise/birth togive rise/birth to112 2、用具体,生动,有针对性的词语。、用具体,生动,有针对性的词语。Eg. Eg. 利用利用 Use, make use of, Use
7、, make use of, make (good, effective, wide, wise, full) make (good, effective, wide, wise, full) use of sth, use of sth, take (full) advantage oftake (full) advantage of 123 3、文中如需要多次表达同一词义时,以同义词,、文中如需要多次表达同一词义时,以同义词,近义词等避免重复使用同一词。近义词等避免重复使用同一词。Eg. Eg. 适应适应Adapt to, adjust to, makefit, get used Adap
8、t to, adjust to, makefit, get used to, be accustomed toto, be accustomed to 13少用老掉牙词汇少用老掉牙词汇n垃圾词汇垃圾词汇: helpful helpful 典型例句典型例句:Sth is helpful (to sb)n替代语替代语 conducive有助于有助于 e.g Sth is conducive to sbn垃圾词汇垃圾词汇:thinkthink 典型例句典型例句:i think - -n替代语替代语deem, harbor the idea that n垃圾词汇垃圾词汇: because becaus
9、e 典型例句典型例句:xxx because xxxn替代语替代语 in that/in as much asn垃圾词汇垃圾词汇: aboutabout 典型例句典型例句:it is about 250 times of thatn替代语替代语 it is approximately -n垃圾词汇垃圾词汇: if ifn替代语替代语provided,supposingn1. people, persons的替换词的替换词: individuals, characters, folks n2. good的替换词的替换词: positive, favorable, rosy (美好美好的的),pr
10、omising (有希望的有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstandingn3. bad的替换词的替换词: dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的有害的) 如果如果 bad 做表语,可以有做表语,可以有 be less impressive 代替代替 24个经典替换词个经典替换词24个经典替换词个经典替换词n4. many的替换词的替换词: an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of , many if not most. nEg. Many
11、individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.n 5. some的替换词的替换词: a slice of, quiet a few , severaln 6. thing的替换词的替换词: affair, business ,matter16n7. think的替换词的替换词: harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged thatn8. commo
12、n的替换词的替换词: sharedn9. get much benefit的替换词的替换词: reap huge fruitsn10. in my opinion的替换词的替换词: for my part ,from my own perspective 24个经典替换词个经典替换词n11. more and more的替换词的替换词: increasingly, growing 当修饰名词时用当修饰名词时用 increasing/growing. n修饰形容词,副词用修饰形容词,副词用 increasingly n注意没有注意没有growingly 这种形式这种形式. nEg. sth ha
13、s gained growing popularity. n sth is increasingly popular. n12 helpful的替换词的替换词:benefitial rewardingn13. very的替换词的替换词: exceedingly,extremely24个经典替换词个经典替换词n14. cause的替换词的替换词: give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger n15. reasons for sth的替换词的替换词: there are several reasons behind sthn16. want 的替换词的替换词
14、: desiren17. pay attention to的替换词的替换词: pour attention inton18. remember的替换词的替换词: bear in mind that24个经典替换词个经典替换词19n19. sb be interested in sth的替换词的替换词: sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb n20. attract ones attention的替换词的替换词: capture ones attentionn21. have的替换词的替换词: enjoy, po
15、ssess24个经典替换词个经典替换词20n22. communication的替换词的替换词: interactionn23. be against, disagree with sth 的替换词:的替换词:frown on sthn24. for example 的替换词:的替换词: to name only a few, as an example24个经典替换词个经典替换词21善用词组善用词组 如果我们能够在单词的基础上,进一步想到与之同义的词组,如果我们能够在单词的基础上,进一步想到与之同义的词组,那么文章就会显得与众不同,更具有英语的味道。那么文章就会显得与众不同,更具有英语的味道
16、。比如上面所说的比如上面所说的“重要的重要的”这个单词,当我们想到这个单词,当我们想到importantimportant的时候,如果从语法角度再稍加考虑一下,我们的时候,如果从语法角度再稍加考虑一下,我们会想到会想到“be of importancebe of importance”。因为,语法中规定:形容词。因为,语法中规定:形容词等于等于ofof加这个形容词的名词形式。加这个形容词的名词形式。如果再提升一步,我们还学过一个常用的词组如果再提升一步,我们还学过一个常用的词组“play an play an important role in-important role in-”-”。22
17、句型多样,制造亮点句型多样,制造亮点简单句,并列句和复合句交替使用,灵活使用各种句简单句,并列句和复合句交替使用,灵活使用各种句子结构如:子结构如:插入语,倒装句,强调句,非谓语动词,插入语,倒装句,强调句,非谓语动词,疑问句疑问句等。等。若要写好作文,要写好句子,首先要掌握句子结构和若要写好作文,要写好句子,首先要掌握句子结构和句式变化及句子类型,可通过对泛读课文经典句子的句式变化及句子类型,可通过对泛读课文经典句子的背诵提高应用语言基本句型的能力。背诵提高应用语言基本句型的能力。Imitation is a good way to learn.Imitation is a good way
18、 to learn.23适当用代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实适当用代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, ,句子开头不要句子开头不要总是用总是用we / I (we / I (比如不用比如不用 we should pay attention we should pay attention toto 而用而用 Attention should be paid to.Attention should be paid to. ) )In a word, the local government should take In a word, the local government should tak
19、e effective measures to solve the problem.effective measures to solve the problem.It is, therefore, high time that some applicable It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the local approaches were implemented by the local government like ernment like t
20、hat. 被动句以及倒装句被动句以及倒装句24四、写作的四、写作的“四化四化”:a. 语言准确化语言准确化 b. 语言多样化语言多样化 c. 结构清晰化结构清晰化 d. 内容简单化内容简单化uRecently, the problem of has aroused peoples concern. uInternet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious proble
21、ms as well. uRecently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of .has been brought into focus. uInflation/Corruption/Social inequality . is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.Beginning 文章开头uPeoples views on vary from person to person. Some hold that .
22、However, others believe that. uAttitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. uThere are different opinions among people as to People may have different opinions on uDifferent people hold different attitudes toward (failure). Different opinions不同意见uAs far as something is concerned, . uIt was
23、obvious that uIt may be true that, but it doesnt mean that uIt is natural to believe that , but we shouldnt ignore that uThere is no evidence to suggest that Incorrect opinionsuFrom my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second. uI cannot entirely agree
24、with the idea that uPersonally, I am standing on the side of uI sincerely believe that uIn my opinion, it is more advisable to do than to do. uFinally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why Your opinionsuThis phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. uWhy did ? For one thing F
25、or another. Perhaps the primary reason is uI quite agree with the statement that the reasons are chiefly as follows. The reasonsuHere are some suggestions for handling uThe best way to solve the troubles is uPeople have figured out many ways to solve this problem. SolutionsuThe primary reason is/ to
26、 begin with/to start with/In the first place ubesides/furthermore/in addition/whats more ulast but not least;uPreviously, simultaneously, eventually;uFor one thing, for anotheruOn one hand, on the other handSequence 顺序uTaking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion
27、that uTaking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that uHence/Therefore, wed better come to the conclusion thatuThere is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits. uAll in all, we cannot live without But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. Conclusion结论uIt is high time that we put an end to the (trend). uIt is time to take the advice of and to put special emphasis on the improvement of uThere is no
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