(完整版)高中英语短文改错专项训练

1、1短文改错专项训练短文改错专项训练下面短文中每篇各有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（人），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分Passage1Itwas7:15inthemorningofFebruary8,2007IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhileanoldmancameoutoftheparkontheothersidesofthestr

2、eetThenIsawayellowcardriveupThirdStreetandmadearightturnintoParkRoadThenextmomentthecarhitthemanwhileshewascrossingtheroadHefellwithacry ThecardidntstopanddriveoffatfullspeedheadingwestInoticedthedriverwasyoungwomanworeapairofglassesandtheplatenumberwasAC864Aftertwominuteslater,Istoppedapassedcarand

3、tooktheoldmantothenearesthospitalPassage2IoftenquarrelaboutmymotheroverwhetherIcanwatchTVafterschool.Sheholdsviewthatseniorthreestudentshavetomakefullyuseofeveryminutetoworkhardattheirlessons.ItseemstomethatonceIamallowedtodothat,Illunabletocontrolmyselfandforgetallaboutmystudy.Shealsothinksitisbadf

4、ormyeye.ButIreallycantacceptherideas.Inmyopinion,watchTVcansetmymindatrestafteradayshardworks.Besides,itisimportantforustoknowwhathadhappenedathomeandatabroad.Thus,weshouldntbeforbiddentowatchTV.Passage3Dearsir,LastyearIbuyarefrigeratorinyourstoreonChangAnroad.Wealllikeshapeoftherefrigerator.Andrece

5、ntlyIfindsomethingiswrongwithit.Itbeginstomakenoisewhenitturnedon.Atfirstitislowbutgraduallyitbecomelouderandlouder.Tomakethematterworse,itevenstopsworkingsometimes.Weallfeeldisappointing.Iamwritingyoutoaskforhelp.Wouldyoupleasesendapeopletorepairit?Iwillathomethisweekend.Pleasecallmebeforeyoucometo

6、here.Mytelephonenumberis6606.5531.Thanksyouverymuch.CustomerLiMing2Passage4IfirstmetLiMingatafriendbirthdaypartyfiveyearsago.ThenIinvitedLiMingoverinmyplace.WelistentomyCDstogetherandsoonbecomebestfriends.Threeyearsago,LiMingsparentsinvitedItospendtwowonderfulweekinQingdaowiththemduringthesummerholi

7、day.LiMingandIlovedwalkingalongthebeautifullybeachesthere.LastyearIwasillbuthadtostayinhospitalforaweek.LiMingcameseemeeveryday.Thenhisfatherhaschangedjobsandtheymovedtoanothercity.Sincethenwehaventseeeachothermuch.Butwevekeptwritingtoeachother.Passage5Ifeelquitesurethechemistrytestthatweregoingtoha

8、vetomorrow.TheteacherhasalreadytoldusexactwhattostudyandIthinkmygradesonhomeworkhasbeengoodInafact,IthinkchemistryhasalwaysbeenoneofthesubjectsthatIenjoyitmost.SusanandIhadalreadyspenttwohoursreviewpages115-140tonight.Wearegoingtodevoteanotherhourtopractisewithsomeofthesample（实例）problem.ThenIwillrea

9、dyforthetest.Passage6DearSusan,ImverygladlytohearyouarecomingtovisitmethenextFriday.Unfortunately,IwontbeabletomeetyouattheairportalthoughIhaveclassesintheafternoon.Youwontfinddifficulttogettothecitycenter.Theairportbusleavesevery30minuteandwilltakeyourightlytotheFriendshipHotel.Myclasseswillbeoverb

10、ythenorIwillpickyouupthere.Iwilltakeyoutogethertoahotpotrestaurantfordinnerandwelltalkwithourplanfortheweekendoverdinner.HavingapleasanttripandseeyouFriday.Yours,ZhangMingPassage7SomedayIhappenedtofindachattingroominmyQQ,therepeoplewerechattinginEnglish.Itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.Tomysurprised,Ifoun

11、dtheoralEnglishofsomejuniorstudentswerebetterthanme.IaskedthemforadviceandtheytoldmetopractisemoreonQQ.ButeverydayafterthatIwouldspendonehourpractisemyoralEnglishonQQ.DaybydayIlearnedfrommanyusefulwordsandexpressions.Withtimewentby,IfoundthatIcouldevencommunicatesomecollegestudentsfreely.Passage8IfI

12、havethehonortobechosetoworkforthe29thOlympicGames,IwillatfirstimprovemyEnglishsothatIcantalkeasilyaboutforeignvisitors.Second,IwilllearnmoreabouthistoryoftheOlympicsasmuchasthe2008OlympicGames.Third,sinceIwasfamiliarwithBeijing,Icanhelpvisitorsfindtheirwaysinthecity.Finally,Ishouldbeabletotellvisito

13、rsaboutourhistoryorcultureandshowthemtheirgreatachievements.Inshort,IwilldomybesttohelpmakingtheGamesasuccess.Passage9DearMary,3IreceiveyourE-mailjustnow.Dontworryaboutme.Imgettingonwellwithmyresearchworkinthelab.ButtomygreatlysurpriseyousayyouwillgiveuplearnEnglish.Thereasonisbecauseyouhavenotdonew

14、ellinitrecentlyandyouhavelostinterests.ImafraidIcouldntagreewithyou.IknowitisdifficultytolearnEnglish,andEnglishiswidelyusedintheworldtoday.Itwillbeimportanttoolinourfuturework.Beside,itisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillbesucceed.Dorememberthatwherethereisawill,there

15、isaway.Imlookingforwardtohearinggoodnewsfromyou.Yours,LiHuaPassage10DearRalph,Iamanuniversitystudent.Ioncethoughtlifeattheuniversitymustbeexcellent,butnowIchangedmymind.Ihavethreeroommates,andIwasthelastonetomoveintothedormitory.Lastterm,Igotalongpeacefullyandhappy.ButIfindtheyarenotwillingtobewithm

16、enow.Theydonttalkwithme,andtheyvebecomecoldtowardme.Manytime,IhavewantedtotalkwiththemabouthowIfeltlike,butIfailedtofindanopening.Whenleavingalone,Ialwaysrecallthissadness.ButIamanhoneststudent.WhydontIwintruefriendship?Passage11WhenIwasinhighschool,mostofmyfriendhadbicycles.IhopedIcouldalsohaveit.O

17、nedayIsawasecond-handbicyclethatwasonlyonehundredyuan.Iaskedmyfatherthemoney.Buthesaidhecouldonlygivemehalfofthemoney.Heshouldfindtheotherhalfmyself.SoIwenttosellnewspapersaftertheschool.MyfatherwaspleasedifIshowedhimthemoneyamonthafter.Hegivesmetheotherwhenfifty.YoucanimaginehowmuchhappyIwaswhenIro

18、detoschoolonmyownbicycle.Passage12Todayisthehappydayinthisholiday.AlthoughIwasverytired,butIfoundmyselfinthesebusydays.Iamafraidoftakenabususually,theawfulsmellofthebusdriveImad,makemefeelcarsick.ButtodayIdidfeelcarsick.Icandefeatcarsicknessfinally.AtnightIwentoutwithanoldfriendwhoIeverlikehim,butal

19、lofuswerebusyintheexaminationatthehighschoolthatwehadntbeentogether.IwassuchsurprisedasIreceivedhiscalling.Atfirst,Ithoughtwewouldnevermeetbeforewegraduated.Thankhimgavemeahappyday!Passage13Dancingismyhobbyandotherwise,whenIheardtherewouldbeaget-togethertocelebratethe60thNationalDayintheeveningofOct

20、ober1st,Isignedupfortheperformance.Luckily,Ibecomeamemberofthedancegroup.Duringthesummervacation,Ipracticedhardwithothersregardlessofthecoldweather.Afterthenewschooltermbegan,whenIcarriedonwiththepracticewhileIwasworkinghardatmystudies.Andfinally,thegreatdaycame.Intheevening,thousandspeoplegatheredi

21、nthesplendidTiananmenSquare.Bythebrightlightsshiningaround,weweredancingtothepleasantmusichappilyandjoyful.Beautifulfireworksi4ntheclearnightskyaddedtomyexcited.Itwasrealtyanunforgettableexperience.Passage14MostfamiliesinChinahopedtheirsinglechildrenwillhaveahappyfuture,sotheyareverystrictintheirchi

22、ldren.Sodoteachersinschool!Manychildrenaregivensomuchhomeworkthattheyhavehardlyanysparetimehavesports.Thechildrenareforbiddentodoanythingbuttostudy.Nowondersuchmanychildrenaretiredoflessons.Someevenattackorkillhisparentsandteachers!Ibelievemanypeoplealreadyreadthiskindofnewsinnewspapersormagazines.S

23、houldntwedrawfromtheaccidents?Nowourgovernmentismakingoutaplantosolvetheeducationproblems.参考答案参考答案Passage1Itwas7:15inthemorningofFebruary8,2007.IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheoneastwhileanoldmancameoutoftheparkontheothersidesofthestreet.ThenIsawawhensideyellowcardriveupThirdStreetandmadearighttur

24、nintoParkRoad.Thenextmomentmakethecarhitthemanwhileshewascrossingtheroad.Hefellwithacry.Thecardidntstopheanddriveoffatfullspeedheadingwest.InoticedthedriverwasAyoungwomanAworeapairdroveawho/改为wearingofglassesandtheplatenumberwasAC864.Aftertwominuteslater,Istoppedapassedcarpassingandtooktheoldmantoth

25、enearesthospital.Passage2IoftenquarrelaboutmymotheroverwhetherIcanwatchTVafterwithschool.SheholdsAviewthatseniorthreestudentshavetomakefullyuseofthefulleveryminutetoworkhardattheirlessons.ItseemstomethatonceIamherallowedtodothat,IllAunabletocontrolmyselfandforgetallaboutmybestudy.Shealsothinksitisba

26、dformyeye.ButIreallycantacceptherideas.eyes5Inmyopinion,watchTVcansetmymindatrestafteradayshardworks.watchingBesides,itisimportantforustoknowwhathadhappenedathomeandathas删除atabroad.Thus,weshouldntbeforbiddentowatchTV.Passage3Dearsir,LastyearIbuyarefrigeratorinyourstoreonChangAnroad.WealllikeAshapeof

27、theboughttherefrigerator.AndrecentlyIfindsomethingiswrongwithit.ItbeginstomakenoisewhenitButAturnedon.Atfirstitislowbutgraduallyitbecomelouderandlouder.Tomakethematteris（或去it）becomesworse,itevenstopsworkingsometimes.Weallfeeldisappointing.Iamwritingyoutoaskdisappointedforhelp.Wouldyoupleasesendapeop

28、letorepairit?IwillAathomethisweekend.Pleaseman/personbe/staycallmebeforeyoucometohere.Mytelephonenumberis6606.5531.ThanksyouveryThankmuch.CustomerLiMingPassage4IfirstmetLiMingatafriendbirthdaypartyfiveyearsago.ThenIinvitedLiMingoverinmyfriendstoplace.WelistentomyCDstogetherandsoonbecomebestfriends.T

29、hreeyearsago,LiMingslistenedparentsinvitedItospendtwowonderfulweekinQingdaowiththemduringthesummermeaweeksholiday.LiMingandIlovedwalkingalongthebeautifullybeachesthere.LastyearIwasillbutwork6hadtostayinhospitalforaweek.LiMingcameAseemeeveryday.Thenhisfatherhastochangedjobsandtheymovedtoanothercity.S

30、incethenwehaventseeeachothermuch.butseenwevekeptwritingtoeachother.Passage5IfeelquitesureAthechemistrytestthatweregoingtohavetomorrow.Theteacherabout/ofhasalreadytoldusexactwhattostudyandIthinkmygradesonhomeworkhasbeen、exactlyhavegood.Inafact,IthinkchemistryhasalwaysbeenoneofthesubjectsthatIenjoyikm

31、ost.SusanandIhadalreadyspenttwohoursreviewpages115-140tonight.Wehavereviewingaregoingtodevoteanotherhourtopractisewithsomeofthesample（实例）problem.practicingproblemsThenIwillAreadyforthetest.bePassage6DearSusan,、ImverygladlytohearyouarecomingtovisitmethenextFriday.Unfortunately,Iwontbeablegladtomeetyo

32、uattheairportalthoughIhaveclassesintheafternoon.YouwontfindAdifficulttogetbecause/asittothecitycenter.Theairportbusleavesevery30minuteandwilltakeyourightlytotheminutesrightFriendshipHotel.MyclasseswillbeoverbythenorIwillpickyouupthere.Iwilltakeyoubeautifuland7andertoahotpotrestaurantfordinnerandwell

33、talkwithourplanfortheweekendoverdinner.aboutHavingapleasanttripandseeyouFriday.Yours,ZhangMingPassage7SomedayIhappenedtofindachattingroominmyQQ,therepeoplewerechattinginEnglish.whereItriedtochatwithsomeofthem.Tomysurprised,IfoundtheoralEnglishofsomejuniorsurprisestudentswerebetterthanme.Iaskedthemfo

34、radviceandtheytoldmetopractisemoreonwasmineQQ.ButeverydayafterthatIwouldspendonehourpractisemyoralEnglishonQQ.DaybydaySopractisingIlearnedfrommanyusefulwordsandexpressions.Withtimewentby,IfoundthatIcouldevenAs或went-goingcommunicateAsomecollegestudentsfreely.withPassage8IfIhavethehonortobechosetowork

35、forthe29thOlympicGames,IwillatfirstimprovemychosenEnglishsothatIcantalkeasilyaboutforeignvisitors.Second,IwilllearnmoreaboutAhistoryofwith或tothetheOlympicsasmuchasthe2008OlympicGames.Third,sinceIwasfamiliarwithBeijing,Icanwellamhelpvisitorsfindtheirwaysinthecity.Finally,Ishouldbeabletotellvisitorsab

36、outourhistoryorwayandcultureandshowthemtheirgreatachievements.Inshort,IwilldomybesttohelpmakingthemakeGamesasuccess.HaveOneour8Passage9DearMary,Ireceive(received)yourE-mailjustnow.Dontworryaboutme.ImgettingonwellwithmyresearchworkinthelaB.Buttomygreatly(great)surpriseyousayyouwillgiveuplearn(learnin

37、g)English.Thereasonisbecause(that)youhavenotdonewellinitrecentlyandyouhavelostinterests(interest).ImafraidIcouldnt(cant)agreewithyou.Iknowitisdifficulty(difficult)tolearnEnglish,andEnglishiswidelyusedintheworldtoday.Itwillbe(加an)importanttoolinourfuturework.Beside(Besides),itisbecomingmoreandmoreimp

38、ortantinourdailylife.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillbe(去be)succeed.Dorememberthatwherethereisawillthereisaway.Iamlookingforwardtohearinggoodnewsfromyou.Passage10DearRalph,Iamanuniversitystudent.Ioncethoughtlifeattheuniversitymustbeexcellent,abutnowIAchangedmymind.Ihavethreeroommates,andIwasthelastonehavetomo

39、veintothedormitory.Lastterm,Igotalongpeacefullyandhappy.ButIfindWehappilytheyarenotwillingtobewithmenow.Theydonttalkwithme,andtheyvebecomecoldtowardme.Manytime,!havewantedtotalkwiththemabouthowIcoldertimesfeltlike,butIfailedtofindanopening.Whenleavingalone,Ialwaysrecallthisleftsadness.ButIamanhonest

40、student.WhydontIwintruefriendship?cantPassage111. friend改为friends【解析】考查名词数的变化。Mostof决定了名词必须用复数形式。92. it改为one【解析】考查代词用法。it代替同一个，one指同类里边的一个，此处我希望我也能有一辆，与前面提到的是一类。3. that改为which【解析】考查非限制性定语从句关系词。非限制性定语从句的先行词指物时只能用which不能用that.4. themoney前加for【解析】考查介词用法。此处askmyfather的目的应该是钱。askmyfather与themoney之间需要加表目的

41、的介词。5. He改为I【解析】 考查代词用法。 由前句hesaidhecouldonlygivemehalfofthemoney.和后句的myself.可知此处应该改为I.6. If改为when【解析】考查连词用法。按照句意应该是一个月后，当我给他看钱的时候，可知此处应该用when。7. After改为later【解析】考查副词用法。此处用副词，不能用连词。8. gives改为gave【解析】考查动词时态。按照上下文叙述的都是发生地事情。9.去掉happy前的much.考查副词用法。此处how与happy之间不需要加任何词。Passage121. happy改为happiest【解析】考查形

42、容词。此句意为，今天是假期中最高兴的一天。故将原型happy改为最高级happiest。2.去掉but【解析】考查表转折的连词。因为本句的句首用Although，所以此处不再用but。故将but去掉。3. taken改为taking【解析】考查动词ing的用法，of是介词，其后用动词的ing形式，即动名词形式。4. I改为me【解析】考查动词后宾语的使用形式。此处谓语动词drive后应该用“我”的宾格形式，即me。5. did改为 didnt 或did后加not【解析】上文说到，通常我害怕坐公共汽车，汽车难闻的气味让我发疯，使我感到晕车。且下文说，我最终打败了晕车的习惯。所以上下文表达的是转折

43、的意思。故此处意为“但是今天我不晕车了。”所以加上not。6. like改为liked【解析】考查动词的时态。这句话的意思是，晚上我和一位我曾经喜欢的老朋友一块出去。故将现在时改为一般过去式。7. all改为both【解析】考查代词。我们两个人用both，三人或三人以上用all。8. in改为with【解析】考查固定搭配bebusywithsth忙于做某事。109. as改为that【解析】考查so和such的区别。So后通常接形容词或副词，such后接名词，此处surprised是形容词，意为“惊讶的”。所以将such改为so。10. before改为after【解析】 这句话要表达的意思是“起初， 我以为我们毕业后将不会再见面了”，所以把before改为after。Passage131. otherwise改为therefore【解析】考查副词。这句话的意思是漑舞是我的