高三写作课件

1、英语备课组1 书面表达的要求2 精准审题3 巧组段，善谋篇4 扮靓文章有啥能力要求？咋评分呢？根据新课标的要求 ，考生应通过获得“整理思路、组织素材、规划文章结构、列出提纲、起草文章、组织语言、遣词造句，修改文章、正确使用标点符号和字母大小写“等方面的基本写作技能，达到”表述事实、观点、情感、想像力，交流信息，培养规范的写作习惯”的目的。根据考试大纲的要求，考生应能准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇、清楚、连贯地表达自己的思想。该部分试题的设置目的就是要测试考生准该部分试题的设置目的就是要测试考生准确使用英语语法、词汇进行书面表达的能确使用英语语法、词汇进行书面表达的能力。在具体表达时，

2、考生要根据图画、表力。在具体表达时，考生要根据图画、表格、提纲等各种形式的提示信息，按照包格、提纲等各种形式的提示信息，按照包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等在内括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等在内的要求，用英语写一篇的要求，用英语写一篇 100 个单词左右个单词左右的短的短文。文。 以以2013年作文为例（满分年作文为例（满分30分）分）假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点：写作要点：1.做家务的理由；做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程；做家务的过程；3.你的感

3、受。你的感受。注意：注意：1.短文词数短文词数不少于不少于100；2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。高考英语作文的判卷标准高考英语作文的判卷标准（一）Iisenglishbad.老师，求求你了，随便给几分吧。就几分！高考不容易，一人也许一辈子只有一次机会。求求你了，我考完试一定好好学习英语！我发誓！高考英语作文的判卷标准（一）0分卷分卷 空白卷 仅有几个单词，而且意思不连接 与作文要求内容无关总结：阅卷老师最喜欢看到的卷子！总结：阅卷老师最喜欢看到的卷子！高考英语作文的判卷标准（二）1-6分卷分卷 明显遗

4、漏主要内容，明显遗漏主要内容，内容完全内容完全/部分无关部分无关 较多严重的语法结构较多严重的语法结构或词汇方面的错误或词汇方面的错误 缺乏语句间的连接成缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。分，内容不连贯。 信息未能传达给读者信息未能传达给读者总结：总结： 一塌糊涂一塌糊涂 I think do homework good.Mom busy and tired everyday. So, I do homework. Sunday, I free, so I do it. It make me happy.高考英语作文的判卷标准（三）7-12分卷分卷 漏掉或未描述清楚一漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内

5、容些主要内容 语法结构单调、词汇语法结构单调、词汇项目有限项目有限 有一些语法结构或词有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误汇方面的错误 较少使用语句间的连较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。贯性。 总结：稀里糊涂总结：稀里糊涂 I think do housework is good. Parents are busy all day, we help them do some work. Last Saturday, I say to my parents, “ go sit, I will cook.” Mom is happy when she heard me. So

6、, I cooked, and parents are happy. At last, we had a good day.高考英语作文的判卷标准（四）13-18分卷分卷 基本完成了试题规定基本完成了试题规定的任务，但覆盖所有的任务，但覆盖所有主要内容主要内容 有一些语法结构或词有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不汇方面的错误，但不影响理解影响理解 应用简单的语句间的应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内连接成分，使全文内容连贯容连贯总结：马马虎虎总结：马马虎虎 Parents always busy with their jobs. Though I am busy, too, but I w

7、ant to help them do some work. Last Sunday, I have some spare time and I said to my mom, “ Mom, can I help you with some housework?” My mom was surprised when she hear me, but she is happy. I helped her cook and mop the floor. At night, I lay on my bed, though I am tired, but I am happy.高考英语作文的判卷标准（

8、五）19-24分卷分卷 完全完成了试题规定的任完全完成了试题规定的任务务 语法结构或词汇方面应用语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致或词汇所致 应用简单的语句间的连接应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑成分，使全文结构紧凑 总结：清清爽爽总结：清清爽爽 I am an 18-year old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeli

9、ng quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping. suddenly got an idea: why not giving the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I w

10、iped the dust (off) all the furnitures. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.

11、Im a 18 years old high school student. Because my homework is always heavily loaded and I have always been busy with it, I fail to help my parents with housework. Also, doing housework can not only relax myself but also enhance my sense of responsibility. Therefore, I plan to start doing some housew

12、ork this week. In the morning, I got up very early. After my breakfast with my parents, I firstly sorted out and washed all my clothes having to be washed. Then I tried to get my room organized, which used to be a mass. After all the things were done, I began to clean all the windows in house. First

13、 I found some old newspaper and then I stepped on a chair to reach the window. I deliberately wiped the dust and dirt off the windows for fear of falling or breaking the glass. After a while, the windows look as transparent as clean water, and the sunshine brightened my face. Even though I got tired

14、 after I have finished all the housework, I was very happy and thought it was one of the most successful things in my life. Also, doing housework is a good way for me to thank my parents for what they have been done for me, and I should bear more burden for them.高考英语作文的判卷标准（六）25-30分卷分卷 完全完成了试题完全完成了试

15、题规定的任务。规定的任务。 语法结构或词汇语法结构或词汇方面有少量错误，方面有少量错误，但为使用较复杂但为使用较复杂结构或较高级词结构或较高级词汇所致汇所致;具备较强具备较强的语言运用能力的语言运用能力 有效地使用了语有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑使全文结构紧凑总结：漂漂亮亮总结：漂漂亮亮1 按档给分。阅卷老师会先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定书面表达所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量。2 依据“内容和语言”划档。内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。3 书写如果很潦草，以至影响到交际，分数降一个档次。1.审题是关键审题是关键2

16、. 组段，谋篇布局组段，谋篇布局3.应用较多的语法结构和词汇应用较多的语法结构和词汇4.检查至关重要检查至关重要 Tips for writing如何审题（如何审题（1）提纲类提纲类开放类开放类图画类图画类图表类（表格类）图表类（表格类）提纲类开放类图画类图表类记叙文说明文 应用文陕西5124（2009-2014）年陕西高考）年陕西高考作作 文的文的 考查形式和文体分布考查形式和文体分布如何审题（如何审题（2）假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）第一步：定体裁应用文类的书信第二步：定人称和时态第一人称 一般将来

17、时兼顾情态动词第三步：定内容要点plan to do sth attend a summer school learn about a six-week English course When will the course start? Not too many students pay for host family university dormitory第四步：定写作方法应该按照书信的格式和特点：信头、正文、祝愿语或客套语、署名。第五步：定段落Part 1 书信正文：询问有关情况。Part 2 结尾句：表达愿望。Dear Sir/ Madam ， I am a student in C

18、hina and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. Ive seen your ad, and Id like to know something more about your six-week English course. First when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students

19、in a class. Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully,Li, Hua如何审题（如何审题（3）假如你是我市一名高三学生李华，你打算报考一所外语学院。你在网络上看到上海外国语学院的招生信息(admission inf

20、ormation)，并对此非常感兴趣。根据招生要求，你需要用英语撰写一份个人申请报告，内容应包括： 1记述自己的个性特长及取得的成果； 2说明进入大学后的努力方向及设想等。注意：1.词数：不少于120；开头与结尾已经给出，不计人总词数。 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 Dear Sir or Madam,Im writing to apply to study in your university. I read about the admission information while surfing the net the other day. Im really interested i

21、n it.On the one hand, Im an outgoing girl and I can get on well with all my classmates. On the other hand, I do well in most of my subjects, especially in English. I like reading English poems and enjoy English movies. Speeches delivered by famous people like Martin Luther. King, President Bush and

22、so on, are also my favorite. Whats more, I once won the first prize for English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my excellence performances. As we all know, English is a universal language and I like to communicate with different people, so I intend to major in En

23、glish if I am admitted into your university. I want to have a job relating with languages in the future and I believe I can help promote cultural communication between China and the world. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua如何组段，谋篇布局如何组段，谋篇布局1 文章前后的要照应，即文章前后语气要一致，前后内容能自圆其说。2 注

24、意段落展开，巧妙设计开头，努力写好主题句，概括深化结尾句。使文章生动活泼的开头，循序渐进地开展，自然而然地结尾。3 要下确使用过渡性词语能承上启下，使句子的逻辑关系更清楚，从而使整段文字衔接自然、流畅。 段落段落(设计好一个段落设计好一个段落) 一般说来一般说来, 一个段落由三部分组成一个段落由三部分组成: 主题句主题句,扩展句和结论句扩展句和结论句.主题句提出所说的主题主题句提出所说的主题, 扩扩展句利用必要的细节对主题加以说明展句利用必要的细节对主题加以说明,结论结论句总结全文句总结全文,在论证的基础上得出结论在论证的基础上得出结论. 这三这三者是段落的必要成分者是段落的必要成分,他们相辅

25、相成他们相辅相成,构成一构成一个完整的段落个完整的段落. 另外段落之间的过渡句另外段落之间的过渡句,它使它使段与段之间的顺利过渡，而且使文章浑然段与段之间的顺利过渡，而且使文章浑然一体一体. 1.主题句主题句 1) 主题句的位置 : 请找出段落的主题句 Smoking is harmful to your health. Experiment show that smoking can cause cancer. Besides the most serious disease cancer, smoking can also cause other health problems. For

26、example, it gives one a “smokers cough”. Finally, studies have shown it is easy for smokers to catch colds. Whether you get an unimportant cold or the terrible killer, cancer, smoking is harmful. Is it worth it? Albert Einstein, one of the worlds greatest scientists, failed in his university entranc

27、e exam on his first attempt. William Faulkner, one of Americas famous writers, never finished college because he could not pass his English courses. Sir Winston Churchill, who is considered one of the masters of the English language, was very poor in English during middle school. These few examples

28、show that school does not always predict failure in life. Karaok, which was invented by a Japanese, one of the greatest wonders of modern technology. Needless to say, Karaok is a good way of rest. You can learn a new song easily. Its also a good way to make your friends happy. Nearly every body has

29、a chance to be a singing star. However, everything has two sides, so does Karaok. Its noisy to your neighbors. Besides, if you sing badly, they will feel uncomfortable. In fact, you are sure to make a sound pollution. 单一性单一性: 一个段落只说明一个问题一个段落只说明一个问题, 讲述一件事讲述一件事, 扩扩展句必须紧紧地围绕着主题句展句必须紧紧地围绕着主题句, 不偏离中心思想不

30、偏离中心思想. 通常对扩展句的要求有两个通常对扩展句的要求有两个 : 单一性和连贯性单一性和连贯性 找出一个违背单一性的句子找出一个违背单一性的句子. China has made great progress in reducing its population growth. China has already cut its rate of population growth by about one half since 1970. It is wrong of the western governments to find fault with its policies of eli

31、mination of poverty. China now urges each family to have no more than one child. And it hopes to reach zero population growth, the number of birth equaling the number of death, by the year 2000. 结论句结论句结论句并非必不可少结论句并非必不可少, 但它能起到以下的作用但它能起到以下的作用:(1) 表示段落的结束表示段落的结束(2) 总结要点总结要点,与与主题句主题句相呼应相呼应(3) 对对内容或见解有深

32、刻的印象或进行思考内容或见解有深刻的印象或进行思考 1 In this way,2 Therefore,3 In a word, In short, In conclusion, To sum up4 Only can we5 I hope句子的分类句子的分类简单句简单句: 只包含一个主谓结构的句子只包含一个主谓结构的句子. （五种基本的简单句）（五种基本的简单句）并列句并列句: 句子句子1+ 连词连词(and, but, so, or) +句子句子2 (或更多或更多)复合句复合句: 引导词引导词+主谓结构主谓结构, 主谓结构主谓结构 (从句从句) (主句主句) 主语从句主语从句, , 宾语从

33、句宾语从句, , 表语从句表语从句, , 同位语从同位语从句句, , 定语从句定语从句, , 状语从句等状语从句等.句式结构句式结构句子句子1 and but so or 句子句子2.句子句子1. 句子句子2.句子句子1 ；句子；句子2.主句主句 +从从句句.从句，主句从句，主句.主句的一部分，从句，主句的一部分，从句， 主句的另外一部分主句的另外一部分.句子，句子，+修饰语修饰语.修饰语，修饰语，+ 句子句子.句子句子1，句子，句子2. The professor walked into the classroom, he carried a bag of books with him. 1

34、. The professor walked into the classroom and he carried a bag of books with him.2. The professor walked into the classroom ; he carried a bag of books with him.3. The professor, who carried a bag of books, walked into the classroom .4. The professor walked into the classroom, carrying a bag of book

35、s with him.5. The professor walked into the classroom with a bag of books .（句子，句子（句子，句子2）（wrong）Let me try! 恰当的连接词恰当的连接词 1. 表示递进表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容在同一话题上补充内容 (另外，还有另外，还有) what is more; besides;also; moreover; in addition;2. 表示转折关系，表示转折关系， 一般后面才是作者观点一般后面才是作者观点 但是，但是， 然而，然而， 相反相反however， ontheotherhand de

36、spite ，inspiteof ，though ，although ， but ， onthe contrary，otherwise， yet ， insteadof ， rather ，whereas ，nonetheless， incontrast如何让句子“靓”起来强调句使用倒装句With 结构非谓语动词使用被动句使用感叹句巧妙使复合句插入语独立主格结构名言谚语修辞（比喻、拟人、排比）Let me try!.1比喻The children were as busy as bees, making preparations for the festival. Reading is to

37、the mind what exercise is to the body.2 拟人There goes the bell.His name escaped me .Happiness is raining down on me .The year 2014 saw great events.My watch says five.3 排比The higher you stand, the farther you can see.如何让句子如何让句子“靓靓”起起来来Without the health, you cant enjoy the happy life; without the hea

38、lth, your dream cant be true; without the health, wealth is useless for you. 4委婉He passed away yesterday.I am not quite myself today.5 地道用语She is a stranger in the dark about how this machine works.You cant be too careful in your work.It has been 4 years since I smoked.All his friends did no turn up. My life flashes before my eyes. 6 连词+分词They read while walking or riding on a bus.7 同位语Meimei, a girl of seven, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.8 双重否定表肯定In our global village , we can see that its not uncommon for one language to borrow words from other languages.检查检查1.时态