中考英语作文高分探秘

1、真诚为您提供优质参考资料，若有不当之处，请指正。一、总述人称时态，逻辑清楚； 关键词汇，动词第一；组词成句，结构完整； 组句成文，连词增色；此路不通，绕道迂回； 字迹工整，留好印象；从句适量，总体把握； 要点齐全，高分有望。二、写作步骤 1. 认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。 2. 确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料；同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。 3. 写完要点，但不随意发挥。 4. 先草稿，后抄写。三、习作点评 2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组 (14分) Choose o

2、ne of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. tell the magazine readers. what exactly your hobby is; when and how you became interested in this hobby; why you enjoy your hobby; about your hopes and plans for the future. 写作要求： 1. 根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。 2. 条理清楚，

3、语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。 3. 词数60-80学生习作a My hobby is read books. when i was seven years old . I became interested in reading books. I like needing books 。Because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me 。how to be a good person . Books even c

4、an solve many 。problems for me . I will read more good books to improve myself. 改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。 also的位置应放在can之后。 点评：档次9-11分。 要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。 句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述 问题。 有少量错误。 学生习作b My hobby is reading .reading books is very enjoyable . When I was young, my mothe

5、r used to tell me a story before I went to bed every night .the stories were so interesting that I always felt they werent enough . So I began to read books by myself .little by little I became interested in reading . I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world .when I

6、read books , I can enjoy the beautiful sentences . At the same time I can improve my writing . I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true . 开门见山、点题。 真情流露，理由充分。 文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、 巧妙使用句型以表决心。 点评：档次13-14分。 清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。 语言表达灵活多样，字里行

7、间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。 恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。 高分突破 文体：记叙文。 要点：what when how why hope and plan for the future。 时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。 内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学b灵活使用连词sothat， so， little by little， when， so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to，

8、became interested in， come true等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学a也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。 四、培养途径 1. 根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。 2. 与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。 3. 找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。 4. 自己纠错，写下反思。 五、备考演练 a 缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。 写作要求： 1. 词

9、数在100左右。 2. 条理清楚，语句通顺。 3. 开头已写好，但不计入总词数。 Jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest b 阅读电视广告词：“if we dont save water ， the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。 提示： 1. 生活离不开水。 2. 可饮用水在减少。 3. 水污染严重。 4. 应保护水源，再利用水。 a. 思路点拨： 文体：记叙文。 时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。 写作目的：告诉读者保

10、护环境的重要性。 Jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest. Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. but a few years ago，some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment. they threw their rubbish，such as plastic bags，fruit skins and waste paper on the ground. sometimes they

11、 broke trees，picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food. How dangerous it was. luckily， great changes have taken place here. tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins， and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well. They brin

12、g their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains. All these changes make us very happy. b. 思路点拨： 夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。 时态：一般现在时态。 广告词的含义水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。 Water is very important to humans. we cant live without water. The water we can drink is falling. but some peo

13、ple dont seem to care about it. They waste a lot of water. They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes. Water pollution is getting more and more serious. So we must do something to stop the pollution. We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it. if we dont do this， the last drop of

14、water will be a tear-drop. 考场英语作文“三不八要”三不：切忌蜘蛛文，英语词句写的像蜘蛛爬，使改卷老师难于辨认，有此类毛病者多为男生或英语基础相对薄弱的男同学；不写蚂蚁文，词小得像蚂蚁，阅读起来颇费力，这种文章多出自女生之首；坚决摒弃作战地图文！这里特别提醒书写习惯欠佳的同学，不能在书面表达过程中胡涂乱改瞎划。改进的办法是事先打草稿。用78分钟打草稿，搭个架子，然后再润色。八要一、细读提示明白要你写什么，用哪种文体，都有什么具体要求， 二、写全要点表格类文一个不能少，图画类要看说明，如天津根据三幅画写日记，在记叙中不能丢到重要环节。三、卷面干净下文就没做到卷面干净。（

15、高考作文实样）四、书写认真这篇书写就很认真。（高考作文实样见图三）五、详略适度看图写故事当中存在详写与略写，请考生注意。六、亮点突出 再以2008年北京文为例：Our Spring OutingLast week, our class organized a spring outing. To make this memorable activity more wonderful, we discussed the destination carefully and finally decided to go mountain-climbing instead of other choices

16、 like playing in an amusement park and going boating.With high spirits, we started our spring outing on a fine day. Flowers presented us with their sweetest smiles and we were soaked up in the warm sunshine. However, we were shocked when we reached the top of the mountain. Waste bottles and used pac

17、kages were thrown everywhere which totally ruined the beauty of the nature. Feeling a great pity for the tourists, we picked up the rubbish and carefully divided them into two groups: the recycle ones and the non-recycle ones. After that we put the rubbish into the bin differently.We call on awarene

18、ss on protecting our environment which is of great importance. Though clearing up the rubbish was a tough task, our hearts were filled with joy and we will remember this outing for ever.上文中斜体部分就很能catch the teachers eye, 为文章增色。七、承上启下上文中Whats worse, we和Thanks to the compass, we 就很好地起到了承接上文并导出下文的作用。八、层次分明高考写文虽不长，但还是有层次的，建议同学门分成三段为好，让人一目了然。英语作文题目历来都是“情理之中，意料之外”。情理之中，是说英语写作永远都是“学生话题、现实生活话题” 意料之外，是说英语作文题目经常与考生直接关心的社会热点话题无直接联系，但仔细琢磨，又会发现一些联系，就是说“热点归热点，关键找角度”。在最后时刻，为考生精心“圈点”英语作文几点重要原则。1。智者利用押题，傻子依赖押题！ 2。书面表达整篇背诵绝无必要，可以以看读为主，关键是从该讲义中汲取一些自己认为常用的积极词汇和表达，并能得