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1、10钱汪海环球雅思原创写作VIP内部讲义(2009.1.10) Bar ChartSome people believe that the range of tech no logies available to in dividuals will in crease the gap between the rich and the poor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(科技类)【In today ' world, the gap between the rich and the poor has an increasing tr

2、end. Some people believe that tech no logy available to in dividuals is the cause of it. And to some degree, I also agree with this idea.】【Today, the phenomenon that the gap between the poor and the rich is widening has captured wide concern. Some people hold the belief that it is the tech no logy a

3、vailable that leads to the in equality of econo mic status. I thi nk this view is to some degree oversimplified. /I hold con servative attitude toward this view. / I thin k, it is superficial that tech no logy is the culprit of the social imbalanee.】Questio n: whether the developme nt of tech no log

4、ies can wide n in come gap?(1) 技术的发展对于人的教育水平提出了很高的要求。处于教育资源匮乏地区的人很难掌握新的科技，因而无法从事要求较高的工作，带来收入的减少。相反，教育资源丰富的人容易掌握高科技，提高收入。从这个角度来说，科技在一定程度上扩大了收入差距。Tech no logical progress has imposed a higher sta ndard for educati on because many jobs only n eed people with qualificati ons or releva nt work ing skills

5、. Un fortun ately, people from regi ons without adequate educatio n resources find it hard to lear n new tech no logies, thus un able to en gage in hi-tech work. In this knowledge-driven society, possibilities of high payment are very rare for those less educated. By contrast, qualified people can f

6、ind hi-tech work with decent pay. In this sen se, we may suggest that tech no logyis one of the con tributi ng factors to the wide ning ofin come gap.(2) 但是从另外一个角度来说，科技发展提高了工作效率，能够在更短时间内，创造更多 的社会财富。同时创造了更多的工作岗位，让更多的人有工作，有收入。因此科技发展并非 是造成贫富差距的根本原因。However, facts show that the developme nt of tech no l

7、ogies has enhanced worki ng efficie ncy. Thus more social fortune is created in shorter time period, which will be distributed to people. Objectively, if the distributi on is tran spare nt, in dividuals"wealth will in crease. In the mean time,tech no logies will create many in dustries and job

8、opport un ities. So more people will be employed and paid. From this, we can find tech no logy is, at least, not the direct and basic factor beh ind in come gap.(3) 从上面分析可以看出来，造成贫富差距的根本原因在于资源分配的不公平，尤其是教 育资源的分配。其次，税收政策，社会保障缺乏，都是导致贫富不均的重要原因。As has suggested above, the un derly ing cause of in come gap

9、 lies in in equality of distributi on of resources, in particular the accessibility of educati on resources. And other factors such as the lack of social security and the imbala nee of tax policies also play a part. Therefore, the tech no logical progress is not to blame for the gap betwee n haves a

10、nd have-no ts.(2009.1.15)流程图Some people believe that stude nts at schools and uni versities can lear n more from teachers tha n from the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（教育类 + 科技类）Stepping into new century, we find that internet has become an integral part of our life ; education i

11、s no exception. There is a perception that teachers remain the main source of knowledge for students rather than the internet. As for me, it is of some truth though we cannot deny the adva ntages of the intern et.注意区别“因特网（远程教育）是否可以取代传统课堂教育）”。Body 1:（采取让步论证）因特网的普及和发展，给我们的生活带来了各种巨大的改变。我们 可以通过因特网去沟通交流，

12、甚至进行贸易交易。在教育领域，我们可以通过因特网查阅信 息，及时了解这个世界。比如我们可以通过GOOGLE迅速的搜索我们所需要了解的作家，或者书籍。也可以随时查阅到我们所需要的数据。但是因特网在目前并不能成为我们学习的主要渠道。主要原因在于，首先，因特网的信息量虽然庞大，但是不成体系。其次，因特网 信息良莠不齐，青少年往往无法区分。再次，因特网学习无法给学生培养道德品质，审美能力。The developme nt and prevale nee of the Internet ren der us imme nse cha nges. In doma in of education, stud

13、ents can browse abundant information via the internet so as to widen their horizon. Specifically, we can search out the information about the authors or their works. And also we can download the data that we need or even borrow the books from online libraries. Despite all these advantages, the inter

14、net cannot become the main channel of study, at least in present time. At first, the in formati on from the internet is not systematic. And youn gsters cannot disti nguish whether the information is beneficial or harmful. Furthermore, students' virtues as well as values cannot be cultivated in t

15、he right way by intern et.Body 3:传统的老师课堂教育有着不可替代的方面。一方面，老师传授的知识比较系统，而 且详尽。其次，老师传授知识的过程可以互动，解释，答疑。再次，老师不仅仅是个学生理 论知识的辅导，更重要的是教会学生判断是非。而且，老师教学有利于提高学生的品德。Teachers play a dominant role in students 'earning at universities and schools, which cannot be replaced by the internet. For one thing, the knowl

16、edge from teachers is more systematic and detailed. And the n teach ing in classes is a process of in teract ion betwee n teachers and stude nts by means of explaining and questioning. Moreover, the teachers are not only responsible for academic kno wledge cram ming, but also for the cultivati on of

17、 values.Therefore, at schools and uni versities stude nts lear n more from teachers. They can not on ly learn theoretical knowledge, but also form personality and virtues. Internet, as a new means of in formatio n cha nn el, will be helpful for stude nts 'lear ning.（2009.1.17） Line GraphNowadays

18、, people in some coun tries can choose to live and work any where they want because of the improveme nt of the tran sportati on and com mun icati on tech no logies. Discuss the ben efits and the drawbacks of the phenomenon.（社会现象类 ）The modern age is characterized by the increasing social mobility . P

19、eople today change their jobs periodically and move from one place to ano ther casually. The effects of this phe nomenon, both n egative and positive, are subjected to discussi on.stBody 1: advantage of living wherever they want. 1.21century is characterized by social mobility,which enables people t

20、o find more opportunities and proper jobs. And also this practice stre ngthe ns the com muni cati on of tale nts and in tellige nee. 2. This en courages the developme nt of com muni catio n and economy. 3. This gives a full play to pers onal freedom.Body 1: In the past, people were confined in certa

21、in area due to the underdevelopment of transportation and communication means. But today people can change their jobs and find the place suitable for them without con sideri ng too much.Adva ntages are obvious. This mobility canbring people more opport un ities and more choices. New places and new w

22、ork can offer people more chances to know more, thus widening their vision. In addition, people can enjoy more freedom and exercise their ability. Without restrict ions, they can choose wherever they feel fully relaxed and comfortable. Their imagination and creativity can find the right vent out.Bod

23、y 2: However, this practice may cause some n egative effects. The most no teworthy one is that quick mobility will lead to the imbalance of regional development. Naturally, talents and funds will surely flow into those developed areas, which may cause the un derdeveloped area to be even worse. What

24、'more, if this phe nomenon con ti nues in the long run, there will arise some problems much more serious. For example, the frequent migration of people will lead to the loss of some com mun ity traditi ons, cultural ide ntity and local conven ti ons. This, to some degree, is the cause of today&#

25、39;s segregati on of social groups and loose ning social relatio nships.In con clusi on, social mobility is an in evitable trend due to the developme nt of society and tech no logy. Of course, people can enjoy more freedom and opport un ities. But its n egative effects such as regi onal imbala nce a

26、nd loss of cultural traditi ons cannot be n eglected.（2009.2.7） Bar ChartSome people believe that rich coun tries provide poorer coun tries with other types of help rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（政府决策类 ）主题分析：金钱援助的弊端，有一些贫穷国家之所以贫穷是因为缺乏技术，缺乏资源；另外一方面，也因为这些国家存在一定的腐败现象

27、，如果给予金钱，往往被贪污。金钱援助具有 不可持续性，往往造成被援助国的懒惰，不思进取，只会造成更加贫困。金钱援助由于缺乏监管，往往被用作其他途径，而不能到达民众手中，或者无法到达所指定的用途。但是财政援助也有好处，更直接，效率更高，技术援助的周期太长，不可预料因素过多。（授之以鱼，不如授之以渔的道理。结合剑4阅读small enterprise credit.）第一段：在某些不发达国家，猖獗的腐败使得经济援助无法真正得到使用。因此有些人提出，发达国家对贫穷国家的援助应该转向技术，知识和教育的援助。这种看法在目前有很好的实践意义，但是不能完全否认金钱援助的效用。In some underdev

28、eloped countries, rampant corruption and embezzlement render financial aid unable to reach targeted victims and fulfill its original purposes. So some people put forward that rich coun tries' aid should shift to the in troduct ion of tech no logy, kno wledge and educati on. Though this suggestio

29、n is feasible and practicable, the effects of traditional financial aid cannot be denied completely.Body 1: why the shift is necessary at present?Considerable evidenee has indicated that there are numerous loopholes and defects of sheer financial aid. In some underdeveloped countries, corruption is

30、really a headache and a large amount of funds from don ati on has bee n embezzled. The fund fails to reach people in poverty and difficulty; and public facilities are out of repair due to the lack of money. In these coun tries, the lack of lawful supervision renders the financial aid an appetizing m

31、eal for local officials and an airy dream for poor people. On the other hand, the finan cial aid is not susta in able.( 在很难论证 的情况下，可以适当地进行比喻)There are some similarities between financial aid and somemedicines like tranquilizer. Specifically, it can calm the patients down immediately but fails to hea

32、l his or her psychological disorders. Likewise, financial help may solve some problems superficially, but cannot remove poverty completely.Body 2: The effect of financial aid.However, it does not necessarily mean that financial aid is of no redeeming features. When we are aware of the disadvantages

33、of economic assistanee, we should not go to another extreme by stopping it completely. After all, financial aid is more effective and efficient in dealing with some emergencies. And if rightly supervised, it can also avoid the drawbacks mentioned above. (Maybe, we should beware of the possibility th

34、at some people take them as the excuse for cutt ing finan cial help to poorer coun tries.)问题解决：是否应该结合其他援助手段？其他援助手段有哪些。应该明确，要结合其他手段，主要包括赠与技术，免于收取昂贵的技术专利费用；派遣专家团队；派遣医疗和教育队伍进入，从根本改善当地经济状况；同时，对于财政援助，应该有国际监督，或者由国际组织如 红十字会负责资金的流向。(2009.2.12) Line Chart + TableThe developme nt of tech no logies is caus ing

35、 environmen tal problems. Some people believe that the soluti on is for every one to adopt a simpler way of life while others say that tech no logies can solve these problems. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion.( 科技类)Low-carb on lifestyleThese two views are not mutually exclusive.

36、Emissi on, public tran sportati on.Cut unn ecessary travels may reduce emissi on. Refuse to use plastic bags and throwaways.Overall, to lead a simpler way of life means that we should minimize our desires for relaxation and comfort. That is to say, we should be equipped with the aware ness of protec

37、t ing en viro nment. Apart from the environmental awareness, some countermeasures against pollution are in dispe nsable. Tech no logies take the cen ter stage. New engine. Waste water disposal tech no logies etc.低碳环保和技术环保The development of economy may cause the deterioration of environment. Therefor

38、e, some people may suggest the best way to stop en viro nmen tal deterioratio n is to slow dow n econo mic developme nt. What is your opinion?在讨论这个主题的同时，尽量能够把“技术”具体化为：汽车，电子产品，电子设备等等具 体的物件，避免空对空论证。(2009219) Bar ChartToday, most people un dersta nd the importa nee of protect ing the environment, while

39、 some people think individuals are too weak to take aetions and make a differenee. Discuss why do such people hold this opinion and tell what should be done to solve the problem. (Report)首段：Today, the deteriorati ng environment n ecessitates every in dividual ' protect ion. However, some people

40、feel frustrated due to the belief that pers onal stre ngth is too weak to combat the curre nt tendency. But in my view, though in dividual stre ngth is weak, it may be stro ng whe n comb ined together.Body 1:首先针对“个人力量太薄弱，不足以改变”，其原因；批判其不正确之处。原因之一，目前环境污染的规模很大，属于全球问题。第二点，形式很严峻，看起来很难改变这个进程。第三点，全球环保者之间缺乏

41、有效的组织和系统的联系。这三点原因造成了个体的环境保护者觉得力量的渺小和微不足道，甚至失望，挫折。Body 2:如何解决环境保护问题，从个人，政府，等角度出发。NGO(2009.2.28) Line GraphSome people believe that building more sports facilities is beneficial for the public health while some others thi nk the practice has limited effects. Discuss the both viewpoi nts and give your

42、own opin io n.(政府决策类)类似于：junk food. To educate people, but the effect is limited.思考出发点：体育设施，公众健康。Obesity, cardiovascular disease and insomnia are labeled as com mon compla ints suffered by moder n people. And most of them are closely associated with the abse nee of physical activities.Hen ce, it is

43、argued that the establishme nt of more sport facilities will ben efit public health. And I think it is far from eno ugh.It should be no ted that the promoti on of sport aware ness relies on more in vestme nt of sport facilities. Nowadays, despite living standard improvement, our living quality exper

44、iences a surprising deterioration, largely due to the lack of physical exercises. So the advocate of more exercise requires huge investment in building facilities. The wide availability of facilities will definitely ignite public enthusiasm of participation. The sport facilities can be established i

45、n some den sely populated com mun ities, some garde ns and even some comparatively un derdeveloped regi ons. This may ren der every in dividual access sports on a daily basis.The scarcity of facilities may play a part in people 'lack of sport aware ness, but the deep-rooted cause is manifold. Fo

46、r example, in some developed areas, the abundance of sport facilities is amaz ing, but they are rarely used. Recen tly con ducted survey in dicates that people may be exhausted after a day'stoil. And quick living tempo spares them little time to consider their health. So the most essential thing

47、 is to give people more time and leisure to participate in activities.In conclusion, the establishment of sport facilities is beneficial for the promotion of health aware ness. However, it should be en sured that people can afford eno ugh to do physical exercise; otherwise, all those facilities will

48、 be reduced to some useless exhibiti on.(2009.3.5) Bar Chart + Pie ChartNewspapers have great in flue nee on people ' opinions and ideas. What are the reasons of the phe nomenon and an alyze the positive and n egative effects of the phe nomenon. (Report)In the age of in formati on explosi on, n

49、ewspapers serve as an in dispe nsable cha nnel for people to know the outside world and make their judgme nt. But its in flue nee may be twofold; n ewspapers may be misleadi ng and exaggerati ng.参考剑桥雅思5文章报纸对于人们思想观念的印象，其原因要从主客观角度来分析。(主观，客观；直接，间接；表面，根本)个人对于世界的看法和判断，基于其所获取的信息，而恰恰报纸是个人获取信息的主要渠道之一。(It is

50、 widely accepted that people 'values and perceptions towards the world is based on the in formatio n in their mi nd, while n ewspapers serve exactly as the main cha nnel of in formati on. Therefore, people's view of the world is largely determined by the media including newspapers.) 报纸业非常发达，

51、无处不在，渗透到生活的方方面面，人们充分暴露在媒体信息的狂轰滥炸之中。(Newspaper has permeated into every facet of our daily life. And people are constantly exposed to the bombardme nt of n ews and in formati on.)主观上，人们喜欢从报纸和媒体上获取自己所需要的信息，来佐证和强化自己的观点； 而报纸也喜欢满足大众的需求，提供公众所需要的信息，如灾难等。(Subjectively, people have theinclination to obtain i

52、nformation they are interested in, so as to certify and intensify their con ceptio ns and opinions. In the mean time, n ewspapers and broadcasters are there to provide what the public wants. That can lead to significant distortions of perception. For example, ) 影响：媒体容易哗众取宠，容易夸大。(Newspapers tend to b

53、e sensational and exaggerating. As for mostof the newspapers, how to win more audiences is what they focus on. So maybe it is justified for them to print some news which is eye-catching and even thrilling. And exaggeration is a freque ntly-used trick for them to capture more atte nti on from the rea

54、ders. However, even though this practice is justifiable for winning more market share, it objectively distorts public attitude and the truth.)媒体容易误导读者观众，容易成为某些利益集团的工具。(2009.3.7) Bar ChartMany people believe that music plays an importa nt role in the society. Others, however, believethat music is sim

55、ply a kind of entertainment for individuals. What扌由象类)s your opinion?(Un doubtedly, music is com mon ly regarded as a means of en terta inment for people from all walks of life. But it is not absolutely restricted to amus ing people. Its fun cti ons and effects are far more than that.(高分开头)经典音乐和流行音乐

56、分野：Beethove n, Bach and Han del are n ot un familiar n ames for most people all over the world. We remember them and love them not as entertainers but great artists and supervisors of our soul. Therefore, their music works are not just to entertain us but plays an important role in cultivating our m

57、ind and eve n boost the adva nceme nt of our society. It should be no ted that most popular music mainly serves as the means of amuseme nt.音乐对于社会的作用，从抽象意义来说：也许和笑一样，音乐通常被看做没有实际效用和生物意义的一种多余的愉悦享受。而实际上任何一个民族都无一例外地拥有自己的音乐，在任何一个社会发展阶段都有着不同的音乐风格和模式。也就是说，音乐是伴随着社会发展的，不可或缺的一个因素。(Music bears somesimilarities t

58、o laughter: Both are defined as a kind of pleasure and amusement of no apparent social effect and biological purpose. And any nation has its own music without exception. Each social period of social development is characterized by various music styles and modes. In other words, music serves as an in

59、 dispe nsable eleme nt in the course social adva nceme nt.)总体而言，音乐是一种社会文化的反应，它是对生活的一种抽象的，形而上的反应。它可以充当一种文化身份认同，可以凝聚一个民族，凝聚公众的力量。(In gen eral, music acts asthe reflect ion of social culture, which is abstract and metaphysical. It also is the cultural ide ntity;for example, whe n we sing the n ati onal an them, we feel un ited and a sense of bel onging to a certain culture. Music in this sense