空巢老人作文

1、Teaching aims Students are able to analyze and expand the given information reasonably. Rewrite the passage. We have a dream今日事今日毕。今日事今日毕。 Today must borrow nothing of tomorrow. As for the first reason, what should you do? (We should) _what your gift is, and use it to _ and the lives of those around

2、 you. Take the first step and your dreams will come true. All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to _them. go for/pursuefigure out exactlybetter your life 某英文报社就某英文报社就“关爱空巢老人关爱空巢老人”这一话题这一话题进行征文。请你根据所给提示写一篇英语进行征文。请你根据所给提示写一篇英语短文投稿。内容主要包括短文投稿。内容主要包括: : 1. 1. 空巢老人越来越多的原因；空巢老人越来越多的原因； 2. 2

3、. 他们面临的问题；他们面临的问题； 3. 3. 如何帮助他们。如何帮助他们。 优点：审题、分段、时态优点：审题、分段、时态 缺点：缺点：书写、卷面书写、卷面 基础表达基础表达 展开短文要点（啰嗦，展开短文要点（啰嗦，Chinglish） 随着经济的发展随着经济的发展 忙于忙于(做做)某事某事 是时候该做某事了是时候该做某事了 呼吁某人做某事呼吁某人做某事 拿出时间做某事拿出时间做某事 .Because with the development of economy be busy with sth. be busy (in) doing sth. Its time that sb. did/

4、should do sth. appeal to sb. to do sth. spare time to do sth. , because Zooming 1 Para.1 Para.1 空巢老人越来越多的原因；空巢老人越来越多的原因； With the development of economy, more and more people choose to leave their homeland to find the chance to have a better job. (李晓红李晓红) With the development of economy and society,

5、 the number of people who bury themselves in working and studying is on the increase. (姜丽姜丽) With the development of society, more and more adult have to make great efforts to earn money for the purpose of supporting the family. (门晓菲门晓菲) There are no alternative route open to them to pay all their a

6、ttention to both family and work.(宋晓松宋晓松) As a result, they have less time to accompany their elderly parents. (门晓菲门晓菲)外出务工背井离乡外出务工背井离乡Zooming 2 Para. 2 面临的问题面临的问题 总述总述 Its unavoidable to meet with difficulties facing loneliness. /These elderly are faced with many difficulties without their relative

7、s company.(张雅俊张雅俊) 具体问题：具体问题： The empty-nest elderly cant manage things that require much manual labor. The most important problem they face is that they are too old to care for themselves.(金迎迎金迎迎 孙忠源孙忠源) When they are ill, their family members cant appear in time. (张琳张琳) Because of long-term loneli

8、ness, they may have mental problems like depression. Its natural for them the empty-nest elderly to feel alone, so most of them are in thirst of their childrens company. (姜丽姜丽)生活无人帮助生活无人帮助生病无人照顾生病无人照顾缺少陪伴，感到孤缺少陪伴，感到孤独独Zooming 3 Para. 3 如何帮助他们如何帮助他们 We can help them clean the house, buy household ite

9、ms or carry heavy things upstairs. We may volunteer to visit the empty-nest elderly in vacations, during which we can bring joy to them and help them with housework. (包光琛包光琛) The government should spend more money providing places for the elderly to be entertained and communicate. Its a good choice

10、for them to be actively involved in community service (邢思田邢思田), which has much significance not only in enrich the life, but in keeping them healthy. (门晓菲门晓菲)做家务做家务提供机会多参加活动提供机会多参加活动结尾结尾( (总结性话语总结性话语) ) Its high time that we do our little part to provide help for them.(张琳张琳) Helping elderly is a traditional virtue of China. We sho