2014加来高中作文模板第6类（漫画型）打印版

1、Email:nkjlgz海南农垦加来高级中学2014届加来高中高考英语写作高分突破特别指导6第五类: 漫画议论文类 先描述图画 再发表自己看法漫画类作文常用表达方式有：1）. 开头：1、Look at this picture. 2、The picture shows that 3、From this picture, we can see2）衔接句：1. As we all know, 2. As is well-known, 3. It is well known that4. This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.第一段:

2、 描写漫画万能首句1：As can be seen, the picture(s) is very vivid and interesting. Let us take a closer look at it. 万能首句2：As can be seen, the picture(s) is very surprising. Let us take a closer look at it.As is described in the picture(s), + 描写漫画. we can see clearly that this picture tell us_. 褒义漫画用 / (或we ca

3、n see clearly that this picture criticize the phenomenon that_ 贬义漫画用.)第二段：说明原因（需说原因时用上，否则不用）There is no doubt that the message conveyed in the picture is meaningful 主题句：Some factors can help to explain the phenomenon. 扩展句：1、First of all, _ 扩展句：2、What is more, _ 第三段：提出解决办法或个人看法 褒义漫画结尾:主题句：From my poi

4、nt of view (或As far as I am concerned或personally speaking或in my view) , I think _.（我的观点）扩展句：1、The reason is that _.  (原因)扩展句：2、Only in this way, I think, will our society be more beautiful.贬义漫画结尾主题句：From my point of view (或As far as I am concerned或personally speaking或in my view) , I think _.（我的

5、观点）Therefore, some measures should be taken to solve the problem.扩展句：1、To begin with, the government should make laws to .扩展句：2、Besides, people should be educated to . 扩展句：3、Only in this way, I think, will our society be more beautiful. 成篇范文供背诵篇1 阅读下面漫画，先对漫画的内容进行描述，然后对这一现象发表自己的看法。（100词左右）参考词汇： 西瓜：wa

6、ter-melon清洁工人：dustman垃圾箱：dustbinAs is described in the picture，the boy and the girl in the picture sat on a bench talking merrily while eating a water-melon. When they went away they left the melons skin on the bench, making it very dirty. They didnt want to take any trouble throwing it into the dus

7、tbin although it was very near where they were sitting. Instead, they said that there would be someone who should clean the rubbish.As far as I am concerned, what they did violate（违背） public morality. If everyone behaves in this way, the world will be a big rubbish dump with flies flying round and p

8、eople will live in a world of diseases. Besides, dustmen will have a very, very hard job to clean the world we live in.成篇范文供背诵篇2 根据图画内容，以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter”题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包括以下要点，不得逐条翻译。1.简单描述漫画的内容；2.作业负担过重；3.精讲精练；4.参加体育锻炼和社会活动。We Want Our Schoolbags LighterThe picture shows that a

9、 girl is wearing a pair of glasses and carrying a big heavy schoolbag, and a woman is doing some exercise. The girl says to the woman, “If you carry the schoolbag for me, Im sure you will lose some weight.”As is well-known, we Chinese students are overburdened with lessons and homework which our tea

10、chers have given us. All that we do everyday is to listen to our teachers lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless. We do hope our teachers will help us get more knowledge with fewer lectures, exercises and less homework. Only in this way will we have spare time to do more phys

11、ical exercise and make us stronger, and we will have more spare time to take part in some social activities, which makes us all mentally and physically healthier.2014届加来高中高考英语写作高分突破特别指导7第六类：路线的描述/地理方位的介绍一、表出发或到达某地 When you come out of 当你走出; When you come to. 当你来到; When you get to / reach当你到达; When y

12、ou get out of.当你走出。二、行走路线(一)表示行走路线的句型：Go straight (on to). 一直朝前走(到)。Go down the street/road.沿着街道/马路走。Turn right/left at the first crossing在第一个十字路口向右/左转。Take the first turning on the left在第一个拐角处向左拐。Keep walking/going along/down.继续向前走。 (二)常用的表达方式： Go straight on to the second traffic lights and then t

13、urn right.一直朝前走，到第二个交通灯，然后向右拐。 Go down the street and take the second turning on the left. 沿着街道走，在第二个拐角处向左拐。 Go ahead till you come to the next crossing. 一直朝前走，直到下一个十字路口。 Keep walking/going along/down the street. Take the first turning on your left.继续沿街道向前走，在第三个拐角处向左转。 Keep going before you come to

14、a department store.在你到达百货商店之前继续向前走。 Turn right at the end of Bridge Street into Riverside Road. 在桥街的尽头向右拐，进入滨河路。 Cross the street/river and then turn right.穿过这条街道/河流, 接着向右拐。三、方式距离u行走方式的表达： Take the No. 10 Bus to Peace Cinema. You cant miss it. 坐十路公共汽车去和平电影院。不会错过的。 Take a bus and get off at the fourt

15、h stop. 坐公共汽车，在第四个车站下车。 Take Bus No. 3 and it will take you right there. 坐三路车，它会把你送到那儿。 Its too far to walk. Better take a taxi. 步行很远，最好坐出租车。 You must get off at the next stop. 必须在下一个车站下车。v 行走距离的表达： It's about 200 metres away from here. 从这儿大约200米远。 It's ten minutes' ride from here. 从这儿乘车

16、有十分钟的路程。 Its not far from here. It's only about ten minutes' walk. 距这儿不远，大约十分钟步行的路程。 Its about 200 yards down the street.这条街道前方大约200码的路程。四、表目的地 It's just around the corner. 就在拐角处。 It is opposite the post office. 就在邮局对面。 It's next to the book store. 就在书店隔壁。 It's on the fourth floo

17、r.在四楼。 Youll see /find it. 你就会看到它。 It's right there. 就在那儿。 Its just in front of you. 就在你前面。五、描写方位的表达方式：1) 坐落于lie in/ be located in/ be situated in 2). Our school is located at the foot of a green hill.3). In front of the school is a beautiful garden with a library on its left and a laboratory on

18、 its right.4). Behind the garden is the classroom building.5). At the back of the school are the students' dormitory and the dinning-hall, in front of which lies the large sports field.范文:仔细观察下面一幅图画，根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。情景：假定你叫李华，家住香港。你和几个朋友约定星期六在中心公园聚会。现请你写封信邀请Brown女士参加，并根据下图告诉她来中心公园的路线。参考词汇

19、：have a gathering party(聚会)这是一篇图画说明文，根据图画，指明路线，如何到达中心公园。注意观察图画，确定出发点、行走路线、目的地，灵活使用表达路线的表达语。Dear Mrs Brown, We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us. We'll have our gathering party in the Central Park. Maybe you've been there, haven't you?

20、Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and go down the street. Then turn right at the second crossing and you'll find a hospital. Just opposite it is a No. 7 bus stop. Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop. Central Park is just in front of it. We'll have our gathering party i

21、n a boat on the lake. What a funny thing! Do come on time. We'll wait for you at the park gate. Yours, Li Hua第七类：写人物简介（人物简介写作中常用的词组）1. 出 生： was born in ,2. 家庭背景：1) a poor / rich family 2) his (her) family was so poor that，3) his father was very strict with him,4) during his (her) childhood , 5)

22、spend his childhood in, 6) live a happy (hard ) life , 7) a boy of 15 3. 教 育：1) graduate fromdepartment of university , 2) When at college , he majored in,3) receive a doctors degree . 4) get higher education 5) go abroad for further studies4. 主要事迹：1) be interested in , 2) work hard at , 3) devote h

23、is lifetime to ,4) make up ones mind to do sth. 5) do sth. with great determination and perseverance . 6) have a way of doing sth. 7）try ones best to do sth. 8) win a prize in competition . 9) have a gift for5. 评 价：1) set sb a good example . 2) a model teacher . 3) be respected by everyone . 4) his

24、hard work brought him great success . 5) his heroic story spread all over the city . 6) be honored as 7) be regarded as , 8) He became famous for his new theory . 9 The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader . 10) Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit . 写人物简介范文:(91高考书面表达)：:上

25、海出版的学生英文报，对象是我国的学生，请用英语为该报写一段人物介绍，介绍少年体育明星孙淑伟。内容要点如下：1）简况：孙淑伟（Sun Shuwei）：男，14岁，广东人（Guangdong）2）训练项目：跳水（diving）3）取得成绩：第十一届亚运会冠军，第六届世界游泳锦标赛冠军（亚运会：the Asia Games 冠军：Champion 游泳锦标赛：Swimming Championships）4）其他情况：从小就喜欢游泳，8岁进广东省跳水队；在学校里认真学习，在跳水队时认真训练，13岁进入国家队，一年后夺得十一届亚运会金牌；今年年初获第六届游泳锦标赛冠军。注意：1）要有标题。2）介绍须包

26、括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。Sun Shuwei - A World Champion in DivingSun Shuwei , a world champion in diving , is a boy of 14 from Guangdong . He loved swimming when he was a small boy and at eight he became a member of the diving team in Guangdong Province. He studied hard at school and trained hard for five y

27、ears before he came to the national team. A year later in 1990, he won a gold medal at the 11th Asia Games and became a world champion at the 6th world Swimming Championships early this years .第八类： 介绍某地:1.对付此类作文的关键是背熟相关的表达方式：如地理位置、人口、文化、风俗习惯、历史、工农业生产、旅游景点、地方特色等2.考虑可能涉及的词汇。如：country国家, population人口,

28、culture文化, custom风俗, agriculture农业, industry工业, a place of interest名胜, mountain山, pollution污染等。3.熟练运用常见句型。介绍地理位置的说明文，它的写作顺序建议如下: 地面气城著(地名)应介绍这个地方的地（地理位置）.面（面积，人口），气（气候状况），城（两个著名城市），著（与众不同之处）写说明文,时态以现在时为主地点表达的常用句型要记好。如：1.地点状语+,+主句 /(历史) (分词结构做状语）Located in, ×××is a citywith a history o

29、f2.面积+人口 （with结构做定语）It covers a total area of with a population of .3.气候特征（注意表示天气变化的形容词）It is warm all the seasons (warm, dry, cold，sunny, rainy)4.历史,文化名城（恰当运用定语从句） ,in which ××× 5.著名特殊之处 注意词组的润色 ××× is famous forThe special character of ××× is attracting

30、 more and more tourists from all over the world. a) Located in, ×××is a city (place, province) with a history ofb) ×××lies in the southwest of .c) It covers/has a total area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of 2.8milliond) It is warm (dry, cold, sunny, r

31、ainy.)e) Because××× is famous for/ is well known for , the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its sceneryf) The special character of ××× is attracting more and more tourists from all over the world.g) It has many world-famous places of interest, such as. and

32、.归属中华人民共和国地理位置中国西南方，被誉为世界屋脊(Roof of the World)人口约2，800，000面积120多万平方公里省会拉萨 (Lhasa)，被誉为世界上最高的城市特征700多年的悠久历史；风景秀丽，有很多享誉海内外的名胜古迹，如布达拉宫。发展1951年5月23日解放以来，西藏在政治、经济(economy)、文化等方面都取得了很大的进步。Useful expressions:1. 位于 ××× lies in / be located in Located in , ×××is one of 2. 属于 belo

33、ng to 3. 有人口 have / with a population of 4. 面积/占地平方公里 It covers/ has a total area of square kilometres. 5. 有年悠久的历史 have / with a long history of 6. 以著名 be famous for 7. 被誉为 be known / honoured as8. 自从解放以来 since the liberation of ××× ; Since ××× was liberated, 9. 在方面取得很大

34、的进步have made great progress in 10. 在方面取得了令人瞩目的进步 have witnessed significant progress谋篇: 用适当的连贯词使文章语篇连贯.1. 归属: 中华人民共和国 地理位置: 中国西南方，被誉为世界屋脊(Roof of the World)Tibet, known as the “Roof of the World”, belongs to the Peoples Republic of China and it is located in the southwest of China. 2. 人口: 约2，800，000

35、 面积: 120多万平方公里 It has a population of about 2.8 million, covering more than 1.2 million square kilometers. 3. 省会: 拉萨 (Lhasa)，被誉为世界上最高的城市The capital city is Lhasa, which is honoured as “The highest city” in the world. 4. 特征: 700多年的悠久历史；风景秀丽，有很多享誉海内外的名胜古迹，如布达拉宫。 With a long history of more than 700 ye

36、ars, Tibet has a number of world-famous places of interest, such as the Potala Palace. 5. 1951年5月23日解放以来，西藏在政治、经济(economy)、文化等方面都取得了很大的进步。Since The liberation of Tibet on May 23, 1951, it has witnessed significant progress in politics, economy and culture.成篇范文：Tibet, known as the “Roof of the World”

37、, belongs to the Peoples Republic of China and it is located in the southwest of China. It has a population of about 2.8 million, covering more than 1.2 million square kilometers. The capital city is Lhasa, which is honoured as “The highest city” in the world. With a long history of more than 700 ye

38、ars, Tibet has a number of world-famous places of interest, such as the Potala Palace. Since The liberation of Tibet on May 23, 1951, it has witnessed significant progress in politics, economy and culture.成篇范文：2010年,第十六届亚运会将在广州举行.广州亚组委正在为宣传册征集稿件。 请你根据以下信息，用英语写一篇介绍主办城市 -广州市的文章参与投稿。概况: 中国第三大城市；别称：花城；广

39、东省省会，政治，经济，科学，教育，文化中心;全市面积74344平方公里:人口1100多万。 地理: 广东省中部珠江三角洲北缘，珠江从市中心穿过，气候温暖湿润。历史: 2,200多年历史的名城, 历史上海上丝绸之路的始发港。 旅游:凤光旖旎，旅游资源丰富。写作内容 参考词汇: 珠江三角洲 the Pearl River Delta 海上丝绸之路 the Maritime Silk Road 始发港 a starting port Guangzhou, the third largest city in China, also known as City of Flowers, serves as

40、 the capital city of Guangdong and the centre of its political, economic, scientific, educational, and cultural life. Covering an area of 7434.4 square kilometres, it is home to more than 11 million people. Located in the middle of Guangdong, north of the Pearl River Delta with the Pearl River windi

41、ng its way through the city, Guangzhou enjoys a warm and wet climate. Besides, it is a famous city with a history of more than 2,200 years and a starting port of the Maritime Silk Road. With its beautiful scenery, Guangzhou is also abundant in traveling resources.第九类:今昔对比在作今昔对比时，要注意时态的变化。谈到过去的情况要用过去

42、时态（主要是一般过去时），谈到现在的情况要用现在时态（主要是一般现在时）。1. 开头常用句型(1) Great changes have taken place. 发生了巨大变化。 Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five year. Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China. Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in

43、our life.(2) Things have begun to improve since 自从以来，事情有了好转/改善。 Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.2. 对比常用句型(1) used to, but now 过去常但现在 (2) in the past, but now 在过去但现在(3) once, but now 曾经.但现在 (4) Things are different now. 情况已大不同了。(5) But now, everything

44、 has changed. 但是现在全变了。Where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library. I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time.My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now w

45、e call long distance at home. Once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV.When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-roo

46、m apartment.在作对比时，为避免句型重复，可适当变换一些句式，比如：(1) Another change is再有一个变化是 Another big change is in the housing conditions.(2) Whats more, 还有 What's more, I can go to bed earlier than in the past. 3. 结尾常用句型In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.今昔

47、对比范文1:2004年北京春季高考题范文Changes In Our LifeOver the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life(主题句). Take my family for example(过渡句). My parents contacted others mainly by sending their letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home(对比一). And once my parents listened

48、 to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV(对比二). Another big change is in the housing conditions(过渡句). When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new thr

49、ee-room apartment(对比三). In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience(总结).今昔对比范文2：2001年春季高考作文给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening