四级漫画作文写作方法学习教案

1、四级漫画四级漫画(mnhu)作文写作方法作文写作方法第一页，共37页。一是更加重视能力的日积月累；二是引导英语学习的实用性。第1页/共37页第二页，共37页。内容描述评论；二段写对应现象、意义或危害，尾段写看法和建议并展望！第2页/共37页第三页，共37页。第3页/共37页第四页，共37页。words but no more than 180 words.第4页/共37页第五页，共37页。本篇作文体裁明确，话题清晰，内容要求具体，即：简要解释手机的过度(gud)使用并分析其可能产生的后果。可以看出，题目明确要求写的“现象”、“危害”，此外可写的是“建议”。第5页/共37页第六页，共37页。第6

2、页/共37页第七页，共37页。第7页/共37页第八页，共37页。6. . Given is satirical but thought-provoking cartoon: 第8页/共37页第九页，共37页。“Dear Andy, -How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come down-stairs

3、 for something to eat. -Love, Mom and Dad.第9页/共37页第十页，共37页。This simple but thought-provoking cartoon can be naturally associated with the impacts of Internet on interpersonal communication: Internet shortens distance in communication, but it leads interpersonal relationship to be indifferent.The mod

4、ern technology has greatly altered the mode of communication among people. With the help of the Internet, people can easily contact each other anytime anywhere. However, the side effect is that many people have become over-dependent on the Internet and neglected face-to-face communication.第10页/共37页第

5、十一页，共37页。words but no more than 180 words.第11页/共37页第十二页，共37页。第12页/共37页第十三页，共37页。第13页/共37页第十四页，共37页。第14页/共37页第十五页，共37页。“Dear Andy, -How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you co

6、me down-stairs for something to eat. -Love, Mom and Dad.第15页/共37页第十六页，共37页。This simple but thought-provoking cartoon can be naturally associated with the impacts of Internet on interpersonal communication: Internet shortens distance in communication, but it leads interpersonal relationship to be ind

7、ifferent.From my perspective, the electronic contact can/cannot replace face to face communication owing to the following factors. .As far as Im concerned, electronic communication cannot fully replace the direct contact among people. 第16页/共37页第十七页，共37页。From my perspective, the electronic contact ca

8、nnot replace face to face communication owing to the following factors. To begin with, over-reliance on electronic contact will damage the interpersonal relationship, for the cold machine never replaces a warm-hearted greeting face to face（个人关系）（个人关系）. For example, the aged parents would like their

9、only son who works far away home to come back home more often rather than to talk with him on the internet occasionally（例证（例证(lzhng)）. Whats more, face to face communication is preferable because it is beneficial to build a harmonious society（社会层面）（社会层面）, for it attaches more importance on human aff

10、ection and feelings instead of convenience and speed.第17页/共37页第十八页，共37页。words but no more than 180 words.第18页/共37页第十九页，共37页。Judging from the evidence above, certain measures should be taken（建议）（建议）. Firstly, certain institutions in China should launch relevant campaigns to limit the excessive us of

11、cell-phones（社会层面）（社会层面）. Moreover, we ,as college students, should put emphasis on it right from ourselves as a start（个人方面）（个人方面）.建议控制手机建议控制手机(shu j)的使用。的使用。第19页/共37页第二十页，共37页。Personally, in view of the overuse of mobile phones, I hold that we individuals should raise the necessary awareness that go

12、od relationship are reinforced by sincere and face-to-face communication.强调强调(qing dio)面对面交流的重要性。面对面交流的重要性。注：注：face-to-face communication. communicate face to face.第20页/共37页第二十一页，共37页。It is high time that we took effective measures to curb/control this trend. I cherish a belief that cell phones them

13、selves are not good or bad and we can benefit a lot from it as long as we take a good control over them. 态度态度(ti du)中庸，中庸， 强调一定条件下手机的作用。强调一定条件下手机的作用。第21页/共37页第二十二页，共37页。第三段写作建议：第三段写作建议：建议控制网络的使用。建议控制网络的使用。 强调亲情的重要性，建议面对面强调亲情的重要性，建议面对面交流。交流。强调网络的有效性的同时，建议适强调网络的有效性的同时，建议适当使用，可作为当使用，可作为(zuwi)面对面交面对面交流的

14、补充。流的补充。第22页/共37页第二十三页，共37页。第三段写作建议：第三段写作建议：建议控制网络的使用。建议控制网络的使用。 强调亲情强调亲情(qn qn)的重要性，的重要性，建议面对面交流。建议面对面交流。强调网络的有效性的同时，建议强调网络的有效性的同时，建议适当使用适当使用 。第23页/共37页第二十四页，共37页。Hence, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way. After all, Internet is invented to bring conveniences to our life rat

15、her than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach（以网络（以网络(wnglu)的作用作为前提条件，以便提出建议）的作用作为前提条件，以便提出建议）. If we want to keep our interpersonal relationship more effectively, we should spend more time with them face to face in real life（建议）（建议）. Only in this way can we not only make full use of the commun

16、ication tool（替换（替换e-mail,避免重复）避免重复） on the net but also make our relationship tighter. （进一步（进一步强调建议。）强调建议。） 第24页/共37页第二十五页，共37页。Technology development enables us to communication with parents and friend in a brand new and fast way（承认电子交流方式（承认电子交流方式(fngsh)的作的作用）用）, but it is face-to face contact that

17、 deepens the feelings and emotions between people（同时强调（同时强调直接交流的好处）直接交流的好处）. 第25页/共37页第二十六页，共37页。下面提供英语四级写作中常用词的替换词，让你的作文不再平庸。在考前这几天中每天上午看一遍、下午背一遍，晚上(wn shang)再默写一遍，确保熟记于心。大多数人大多数人 most people 2) 经常经常 often 3) 我相信我相信 I believe 4) 必须必须 must5) 知道知道 know 6) 因为因为 because 7) 最后最后(zuhu) at last 8) 然而然而 bu

18、t 9) 如果如果 ifthe majority of the populationfrequentlyfrom my standpointIt is a must for us tobe aware ofin thateventuallyhoweverProvided that第26页/共37页第二十七页，共37页。10,各行各业的人各行各业的人 all kinds of people 11) 引起，导致引起，导致(dozh) lead to 12) 人人 people 13) 好的好的 good 14) 怀的怀的 bad 15) 很多很多many 16) 越来越越来越 more and more 17) 很很 very 18) 方面方面 side 19) 表明表明 showPeople from all walks of lifeContribute toindividualsBeneficial, desirableundesirablenumerousan increasing number ofextremelyaspe