【课件】2022届高三写作研讨课：五一劳动节课件

1、From Plain to Brilliant以劳动为主题的写作提质指导以劳动为主题的写作提质指导Step I Preparation你校正在组织以劳动为主题的英语作文比赛，你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1. 你参加过什么劳动； 2. 劳动带给了你什么。注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 题目自拟。TitlesPlanting trees Learning from laborSowing seeds for my life Playing the melody of laborLabor brings happiness Honor belongs to laborers 标题即主题，标题即

2、主线，标题即主旨Step II PresentationStep III Process Grade a composition and state reasons.12档次特征描述第五档( 13-15分) 很好地完成了试题规定的任务覆盖所有内容要点、内容充实；表达流畅，语法结构多样，词汇丰富，显示出很强的语言运用能力；个别语言使用小错误，但不影响意思表达；衔接连贯，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；卷面整洁，书法工整。第四档(10-12分)完全完成了试题规定的任务基本覆盖所有内容要点、内容较为充实；表达较为流畅，使用的语法结构和词汇能满足要求且使用准确；些许错误但基本不影响表达；

3、衔接较为连贯，应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。Step IV Production Task 1 Improve the sentences by applying diverse grammatical structures.1. Last week witnessed my unforgettable labor experience on a farm. I gained hands-on experience and deeper insights into labor spirits there. Last week witnessed my unforgettable

4、labor experience on a farm where I gained hands-on experience and deeper insights into labor spirits. 运用定语从句Task 1 Improve the sentences by applying diverse grammatical structures.2. We arrived at the destination. We were divided into two groups. The moment we arrived at the destination, we were div

5、ided into two groups. 运用状语从句Upon arriving at the destination, we were divided into two groups. 运用介词短语Task 1 Improve the sentences by applying diverse grammatical structures.3. We worked in the field without breeze, and we we were soaked with sweat. Working in the field without breeze, we were soaked

6、 with sweat. We worked in the field without breeze, soaked with sweat.运用非谓语动词Task 1 Improve the sentences by applying diversegrammatical structures.4. Salty sweat landed on my lips. I savored the bitter-sweet fruit of labor.With salty sweat landing on my lips, I savored the bitter-sweet fruit of lab

7、or. 运用with复合结构Task 1 Improve the sentences by applying diverse grammatical structures.5. I looked at the green trees framed against the blue sky. A strong sense of pride welled up. I looked at the green trees framed against the blue sky, a strong sense of pride welling up. 运用独立主格Task 1 Improve the s

8、entences by applying diverse grammatical structures.6. Although I was exhausted, I obtained an authentic feeling of satisfaction.Exhausted as I was, I obtained an authentic feeling of satisfaction.运用倒装句Task 1 Improve the sentences by applying diverse grammatical structures.7. Through this experience

9、, I realized that the value of labor lies in the hard work you put in it and the sense of fulfillment you gain from it. It was through this experience that I realized that the value of labor lies in the hard work you put in it and the sense of fulfillment you gain from it. 运用强调结构1. Last week witness

10、ed my unforgettable labor experience on a farm where I gained hands-on experience and deeper insights into labor spirits. 3. Working in the field without breeze, we were soaked with sweat.2. The moment we arrived at the destination, we were divided into two groups. 4. With salty sweat landing on my

11、lips, I savored the bitter-sweet fruit of labor. 5. I looked at the green trees framed against the blue sky, a strong sense of pride welling up. 6. Exhausted as I was, I obtained an authentic feeling of satisfaction.7. It was through this experience that I realized that the value of labor lies in th

12、e hard work you put in it and the sense of fulfillment you gain from it. Task 2 Enrich the content 1. We arrived at the foot of Bogu mountain ( (环境描写）环境描写） 2. Planting trees was difficult and tiring (动作描写动作描写)3. All the trees were planted (心理描写心理描写)A polished version Labor Brings Happiness Last Mond

13、ay witnessed my incredible experience of labor, from which I gained a new perception of planting seedlings. Upon arriving at the foot of Bogu mountain, the scent of wild flowers entered my nostrils, waking up every cell of my body. (环境描写) We couldnt wait to dive right in planting work, some digging holes, others settling seedlings and still others fetching water. (动作描写) A polished version At the sight of the green seedlings framed against the pure blue sky, a sense of happiness and achievement welled up. (心理描写) T