城市与家乡主题写作典例课件2021-2022学年人教版英语七年级下册

1、七年级下册写作典例精讲七年级下册写作典例精讲城市与家乡主题城市与家乡主题如何写出高分作文审题列提纲谋篇布局头脑风暴家乡介绍三步走高分写作演练词汇升级结构升级文章升级Step 1审题目审题目+列提纲列提纲假设你是李丽，你的朋友 Alice 下周要来玩，请你向她介绍一下你的家乡。提示词语：building；fresh air；friendly；look forward to提示问题：Where is your hometown?；Whats your favorite place?Dear Alice, I want to tell you something about my hometown.

2、_Yours,Lili审题目要点：人称：时态： 一般将来时第一人称（I, we） 描述家乡列提纲第一段总：开门见山第二段分：家乡具体描述第三段总：发出邀请和期待假设你是李丽，你的朋友 Alice 下周要来玩，请你向她介绍一下你的家乡。提示词语：building；fresh air；friendly；look forward to提示问题：Where is your hometown?；Whats your favorite place?Dear Alice, I want to tell you something about my hometown._Yours,LiliStep 1谋篇布局

3、谋篇布局1. 家乡在哪2. 可以参观什么？4. 为什么去那？3. 对朋友到来的期待介绍家乡些什么介绍家乡些什么Step 2家乡介绍三步走家乡介绍三步走旅行计划如何构思？旅行计划如何构思？Para. 1Para. 2Para. 3诚挚邀请客人诚挚邀请客人开门见山开门见山家乡地理位置、自家乡地理位置、自然环境、人文然环境、人文结构首段总 开门见山第二段分 家乡具体描述第三段总 发出邀请和期待首段总：开门见山 题目已给出 I want to tell you something about my hometown.结构首段总 开门见山第二段分 家乡具体描述第三段总 发出邀请和期待第二段分 1.家乡位

4、置；2.家乡描述：自然 +人文3.你最喜欢的地方。My hometown is in a small town in the north of Wuxi. 距离表达：1）be + 公里数 + away from 离多远Its about 20 kilometres away from the centre of Wuxi. 同义表达：It usually takes us about 40 minutes to reach the centre of Wuxi by bus. 2）It takes sb. some time to do 花费某人多长时间。Step 1家乡位置家乡位置Its v

5、ery beautiful.It is a good place.一星一星 Level 1 简单句型简单句型Step 2家乡样貌描述：自然家乡样貌描述：自然Step 3文章升级文章升级Its very beautiful. 简单描述简单描述There are many mountains and clear water in my hometown.Its _ beautiful _ it is becoming a popular place for traveling. so There be 句型 初二句型：so that如此以至于thatStep 2家乡样貌描述：自然家乡样貌描述：自然

6、It is a good place. 简单描述Its really a good place to live.Its really a good place to live because of the fresh air.初二非谓语 细节补充Step 2家乡样貌描述：自然家乡样貌描述：自然There are also a lot of tall buildings in my town. 这里也有很多建筑。If you go here, you will find it convenient to travel in the town.细节补充Step 2家乡样貌描述：人文家乡样貌描述：人

7、文人们超级热情，而且友好。People here are very good and friendly.人文情况 花式夸奖词汇upPeople here are very warm-hearted and friendly. 句式upPeople here are not only very warm-hearted but also friendly. 夸赞up夸赞再upStep 2家乡样貌描述：自然家乡样貌描述：自然I live in a flat near a park. The park is also my favorite place for fun for the reason

8、that I can play with my friends there.最喜欢的地方 + 原因Step 3你最喜欢的地方你最喜欢的地方My hometown is in a small town in the north of Wuxi. It usually takes us about 40 minutes to reach the centre of Wuxi by bus. _, there are many mountains and clear water in my hometown. Its so beautiful that it is becoming a popula

9、r place for traveling. Its really a good place to live because of the fresh air. _, there are also a lot of tall buildings in my town. If you go here, you will find it convenient to travel in the town. _, people here are not only very warm-hearted but also helpful. I live in a flat near a park. The

10、park is also my favorite place for fun for the reason that I can play with my friends there.C. To begin withB. Last but not leastA. In addition CBA想一想，填一填想一想，填一填look forward to结构首段总 开门见山第二段分 家乡具体描述第三段总 发出邀请和期待I am looking forward to seeing you. Im sure you will have a good time!我很期待见到你。我相信你一定会完得很开心。

11、我很期待见到你。我相信你一定会完得很开心。Step 4高分写作演练高分写作演练Dear Alice, I want to tell you something about my hometown. My hometown is in a small town in the north of Wuxi. It usually takes us about 40 minutes to reach the centre of Wuxi by bus. To begin with, there are many mountains and clear water in my hometown. Its

12、 so beautiful that it is becoming a popular place for traveling. Its really a good place to live because of the fresh air. In addition, there are also a lot of tall buildings in my town. If you go here, you will find it convenient to travel in the town. Last but not least, people here are not only v

13、ery warm-hearted but also friendly. I live in a flat near a park. The park is also my favorite place for fun for the reason that I can play with my friends there. I am looking forward to seeing you. Im sure you will have a good time!Yours, Lili高分范文高分范文亲爱的爱丽丝,我想告诉你一些关于我家乡的事情。我的家乡在无锡北部的一个小镇上。乘公共汽车到无锡市

14、中心通常需要40分钟左右。首先，在我的家乡有许多山和清澈的水。它是如此美丽，正成为一个受欢迎的旅游地方。因为有新鲜的空气，它真的是一个居住的好地方。此外，在我的家乡也有很多高楼大厦。如果你来这里，你会发现在这里旅行很方便。最后重要的一点，这里的人不仅很热心而且很友好。我住在公园附近的一套公寓里。这个公园也是我最喜欢的地方，因为我可以在这里和我的朋友玩。我期待见到你。我相信你一定会玩得很开心的。李丽范文翻译范文翻译写作积累写作积累万能模板万能模板Dear xxx, I want to tell you something about my hometown. My hometown is in

15、a small town in the north of xxx. It usually takes us about 40 minutes to reach the centre of xxx by bus. To begin with, there are many mountains and clear water in my hometown. Its so beautiful that it is becoming a popular place for traveling. Its really a good place to live because of the fresh air. In addition, there are also a lot of tall buildings in my town. If you go here, you will find it convenient to travel in th