初三英语写作训练讲解人教版(新目标)

1、初三初三英语英语写作训练讲解写作训练讲解人教版（新目标）人教版（新目标）【本讲教育信息本讲教育信息】一. 教学内容： 写作训练讲解话题（一） 家庭，朋友与周围的人（Family, friends and people around） 根据题目可涉及到的内容包括：关系、外貌、性格、工作、爱好、变化和理想等。 A. 重点句型（Target language） 1. Whats he like? 2. Hes very funny/ calm. He has shorter hair than Sam. 3. Hes short/ tall/ medium height. 4. She has cu

2、rly/ straight/ . hair. 5. You used to be quiet. 6. He didnt use to like tests. 7. My life has changed a lot in the last few years. 8. You used to play the guitar, didnt you? No, I played the piano. 9. People sure change. 10. What does he do? He is a waiter. 11. Where does she work? She works at a ba

3、nk. 12. What does she want to be? She wants to be a bank clerk. 13. What is he going to be when he grows up? 14. Hes going to be a computer programmer 15. How is he going to do that? 16. Hes going to study computer science. 17. What does he like? He likes collecting stamps. B. Text（Unit 6, Book 3） S

4、ome friends have opposite views and interests, and some like the same things. What is your opinion? Should friends be different or the same? We asked some people what they think and this is what they said. “I like to have friends who are like me. Im quieter than most of the kids in my class, and so

5、is my best friend Loretta. There are some differences, though. Im more intellectual than Loretta. Shes more athletic.”Dave Morrison “I like to have friends who are different from me. My best friend Ruben is taller and more outing than me. We both like sports, but Ruben is more athletic than me. Also

6、, Im quieter than he is.”Lyle Huang 写作任务： 在班里谁是你最好的朋友？给大家全面介绍一下他/她，并比较一下你们俩在性格、外貌、兴趣爱好方面有什么相同和不同之处，以及你们三年初中生活的变化。话题（二）兴趣和爱好（Interests and hobbies） A. Target language（重点句型） 1. I want to join the music club. 2. I like action movies and thrillers, but I dont like romances. 3. What kind of music do you

7、like? 4. I like music that I can dance to. 5. Rosa likes music thats quiet and gentle. 6. We prefer music that has great lyrics. 7. How long have you been skating? 8. I have been skating since nine oclock. 写作任务： 人们说一个人的爱好反映了一个人的性格。你喜欢的东西是什么？先完成表格，再给大家介绍一下你自己。 （字数 6080） 参考句式：My favorite., I love.best

8、. Im interested in., I prefer. （可适当使用时间状语从句、原因状语从句和定语从句）My favorite name or kind Reason singer/ group movie sports hobby color subject thing to do 话题（三）日常活动（Daily routines）一. 常用词组： （1）日常学习与生活： get up, take a shower, go to school, have meals, do homework, watch TV, do sports, go to bed, do chores. （2

9、）Some vacation activities: stay at home, go to the beach/ mountains., go to the summer camp, go fishing and boating, go hiking/ skating/ swimming, visit the Summer Palace., have a picnic, play computer games/ soccer, visit some museums.二. 参考句型： My hobby is swimming, so I often go swimming on weekend

10、s. my hobbies are collecting stamps and watching TV, so I always go shopping to look for special stamps and watch programs about it. Im interested in/ good at playing the piano because I think its good for me to study well. （It can make me happy and relaxed.） I really enjoy going hiking, but I have

11、a lot of homework. so I have to spend much time doing my homework and reading some books. Every Saturday, Im willing to help my mother do some cleaning. I really feel very tired, but its good for me to understand my parents. I used to play basketball with my good friends after class twice a week, bu

12、t now I hardly ever play basketball or do other sports. My parents think my hobby takes me a lot of time. 任务： 以下是 Lily 的作息时间表，请根据表格内容写一篇英语小短文。7:00起床 7:15早餐 4:20 活动（打篮球、踢足球） 5:00 回家 7:30去学校 8:00上课 5:30 晚餐 6:00 做作业 11:30 午餐（在学校） 4:00 放学 8:00 看电视 9:00 睡觉 话题（四）饮食与健康（Food, drink and health） 写作参考句型： Its i

13、mportant to exercise three times a week because. Its necessary to keep a balanced diet and be in a good mood. Its important to have enough sleep hours. Good food and exercise help me to study better. A lot of vegetables help you to keep in good health. My healthy lifestyle helps me get good grades.

14、You must try to eat less meat. Im unhealthy because I always eat junk food and never exercise, although I have one healthy habit. I try to get up fifteen minutes earlier and walk to school. You should try to have a good balance between study and hobby. You should make time to exercise. For example,

15、You can walk to school and enjoy the fresh air. 任务：书面表达。 假如你的朋友埃米经常生病，你写一封信给她，告诉她应该怎样注意保养自己。词数：60 词左右。 take more exercise play sports like running, swimming, climbing have healthy food have more fruit and vegetables drink more water and milk get enough sleep stay happy 写作任务： 你楼上的人家把音响开得很大（play their

16、 stereo too loud） ，而且经常持续到半夜（often last into midnight） ，使得你睡不好（cant sleep well） 。而且他们的女儿早上早早地就开始练习唱歌（practice singing in the early morning） 。请写一封礼貌的抱怨信给你楼上的邻居。 范文：Dear Neighbor: I am writing to tell you that your family really bother me these days. Since you moved upstairs, you have always played th

17、e stereo so loud that I hardly fall asleep, I have to eat sleeping pills in order to sleep well. Would you mind turning down your stereo? In addition, your daughter begins to practice singing in the early morning, you know, Im in GradeThree and I am busying studying all day, so it makes me feel exha

18、usted. I really hope you can accept my advice and also I believe we can get on well with each other in the future.Yours, Lucy话题（五）业余活动（Spare time activities） Travel Target language: 1. What did you do over the weekend? 2. On Saturday evening I went to the movies. 3. On Saturday morning I cleaned my

19、room 4. How was your weekend? 5. It was great. 6. What did she do over the weekend? 7. She played tennis. 8. Where did you go on vacation? 9. We went to New York. 10. Did you go to Central Park? 11. Yes, I did. 12. How was the weather? 13. It was humid. 14. Where did she go on vacation? 15. She visi

20、ted her uncle. 写作任务： 你一定去过不少地方吧。你能谈一谈你曾去过的最有趣的地方吗？在那里，你感到最有趣的东西是什么？如果有机会，你还想再去那里吗？ 范文： I had a wonderful time. I used to be interested in Beijing and I often dreamed of visiting Beijing some day. Last weekend my dream came true. My parents took me to Beijing for a one-day trip. In the morning, we vi

21、sited the Palace Museum. I was surprised at the great buildings because I had never seen such a great museum and it reminded me of the soap opera Huan Zhu Ge Ge. At noon we had lunch at Quanjude, the famous restaurant in Beijing. And of course we ate Beijing Duck. It was great, too. In the afternoon

22、, we visited the Summer Palace and then went shopping. I found that Beijing was quite an expensive city. But the clothes and the food were wonderful. In the evening, we went to Chao Yang Music Hall to watch Beijing Opera. My father fell in love with it. Although I had to be honest to say that I dont

23、 like Beijing Opera, it was a wonderful trip. I think I will never forget the day when I visited Beijing. I love Beijing, the capital of China.图表类写作一. 基本句型及重点词汇 1. all, most, some, a few 的用法 2. We can learn from the chart that. 3. Most students agree/disagree that. 4. Only a few students agree/disag

24、ree to do. 5. I believe that. 6. Some students think that. 7. We can / should. 8. We are supposed to do. 9. We should be allowed to. 10. In my opinion 11. Firstly, secondly. 12. also, besides, whats more 13. On the other hand 14. In a word, All in all二. 重点句式汉译英 1. 大多数学生认为学生应该被允许带手机到学校来。 _ 2. 而且，几乎所有

25、的学生都相信学习方法很重要。 _ 3. 在我看来，我不同意花费太多的时间上网。 _ 4. 总之，我们的生活需要规则。 _ 5. 实际上，很多学生愿意穿自己的衣服来上学。 _ 6. 另一方面，多读书也是一个很好的方法。 _三. 写作要求及注意事项： 1. 认真审题，确定内容要点和大体结构 2. 注意分段写作，先描述图表信息，再说明自己的观点及原因，最后总结。 3. 注意行文的连贯和开头、结尾的呼应。 4. 避免句式单一和低级的语法错误。 写作任务： 下面是对一所学校初三年级的一百名学生进行的一次有关校规家规的一次问卷调查，请你任选两个进行描述，然后就其中的一个观点说说自己的看法和理由。 1. a

26、gree to wear our own clothes to school 2. agree to bring mobile phones to school 3. can watch TV 4. can surf the internet at home We did a survey about the rules at school and at home. Here is the result. _话题（一）一. 汉译英 1. 2008 年奥运会将在北京举行。 _ 2. 北京将是 2008 年奥运会的主办国。 _ 3. 天安门是世界上最大的广场之一。 _ 4. 北京发生了巨大的变化。

27、 _ 5. 欢迎到北京来。 _ 6. 北京有许多名胜古迹，例如：长城、颐和园、故宫等。 _ 7. 烤鸭是北京最重要的食物。 _ 8. 秋天是北京最美的季节。 _ 9. 那儿很暖和。 _ 10. 我想去暖和的地方。 _二. 写作任务： 北京作为中国的首都和一个国际化的大都市，每年有无数中外游客来北京旅游。作为2008 年奥运会的主办地，现在北京发生了哪些变化？请写一篇短文介绍北京的著名景点，并描述所发生的变化。字数：100 字左右。 提示词： capital, big international city, tourist, the Great Wall, Tiananmen Square, t

28、he Summer Palace, the 2008 Olympic Games, great changes, take place, learn English, building, gyms, Beijing Duck overpass（立交桥） ，话题（二）一. 汉译英 1. 汽车不但舒适而且快。 _ 2. 人们开着车可以随意四处走动。 _ 3. 很难找到停车的地方。 _ 4. 汽车很容易引起污染。 _ 5. 很多同学每天坐着汽车来上学。 _ 6. 我认为汽车是有用的工具。 _ 7. 让我们停止使用汽车吧！ _话题（三）志愿者工作 I. 翻译句子。 1. 你愿意做哪种志愿者工作？我愿意

29、清扫城市公园/修理桌椅。 _ 2. 你可以捐献一些书籍和玩具给那些乡村的孩子们。 _ 3. 一些学生计划在放学后的学习项目中做志愿者。因而他们能帮助小孩子们的功课。 _ 4. 他花费每周六上午的时间在动物医院工作。 _ 5. 我们打算建立一个英语俱乐部以帮助小孩子和老人学习日常英语。 _ 6. 我长大后想做教师，因此那对我而言将是一种很好的经验。 _ 7. 我校的学生在假期都自愿奉献他们的时间去帮助他人。 _ 8. 做志愿者很棒！ _ 9. 她擅长绘画。她更愿意在校报做志愿者。 _ 10. 我喜爱足球。我愿意为小孩子们训练一支足球队。 _ II. 写作练习 1. 学校将要组织志愿者“献爱心”活

30、动。请根据自己的爱好及特长选择一项适合你的活动形式。提出你的具体活动形式和计划，并附上你对志愿活动的看法及观点。 参考范文： We are going to do volunteer activities next month. We like to be volunteers and think its great work to make life wonderful. Im an easy-going girl and Im always friendly and generous. I like reading and traveling. Ive got many different

31、 kinds of books and Im quite interested in science and art. Im good at drawing and singing. So Id like to go to a primary school in the countryside and help the poor children there. Ill give away some interesting books about science and history. I can tell stories to the little kids and show them ph

32、otos of my trips to different places. Ill tell them to study hard and create their wonderful life in future. Also, I can teach them to draw cartoons and sing English songs. How wonderful it will be! Im looking forward to the volunteer work. And Ill keep on helping others as a volunteer. 2. 校志愿者俱乐部要组

33、织一批志愿者周末去 SOS 儿童村“献爱心” 。请根据自己及小组4 个成员的爱好及特长说说你们愿意为孤儿们做些什么事情。 提示词：soccer, repairing, cleaning, telling stories,. A group of students at our school volunteer club are planning to do volunteer work at an SOS village this weekend. _话题（四）奥运会相关话题 1. 我们在中学生中做了一项调查，怎样迎接 2008 奥运，涉及到三个话题，调查结果如下图所示。请先描述该图内容；然后

34、选择其中的两个你感兴趣的话题，发表你自己的观点。（80100 字） We did a survey about “What will you do for the 2008 Olympic Games?”in middle school students. Here are the results. _. 参考范文： We did a survey about “What will you do for the 2008 Olympic Games?”in middle school students. Here are the results. Most of the students th

35、ink that protecting the environments is very important. Although the environment in Beijing is becoming better and better, there are still some problems. Some students want to volunteer to work for the 2008 Olympic Games, because they can not only get great experience but also make lots of foreign f

36、riends. A few students would like to study English well because they will communicate better with foreign friends. In my opinion, I enjoy studying English well doing volunteering work. I think not only can I understand foreign friends better in order to do volunteering work well, but also I can intr

37、oduce the Chinese long history to them. Besides, I can find a pen pal. And we can keep in touch with each other after the Olympic Games. As for volunteering work, we should do something to prepare ourselves for our near future. Anyway, everybody should do something for the 2008 Olympic Games. 2. 现代社

38、会的发展带来了环境的污染与破坏，我们应当如何解决这些环保问题，请根据以下提示发表你的看法。字数：80100 字。 提示词：natural environment, pollute, destroy, river, factory, air, car, bus, subway, plant trees, keep clean, endangered animals, protect, one earth As the development of the modern society, the natural environment has been changed a lot. _ 参考范文：

39、 As the development of the modern society, natural environment has been changed a lot. We can find more pollution around us. Its necessary to do something to solve these problems. First, I think wed better keep rivers, lakes and the sea clean and save water. So factories must stop putting dirty wate

40、r into rivers and we should reuse water. Second, we should take subways or buses to work as much as possible instead of driving cars, or the air in the city will be more polluted. Also more trees should be planted to make the air cleaner and fresher. Third, all people are supposed to have good habits and keep the city clean. Finally, human beings should protect the endangered animals. In conclusion, we must pay more