2018年九年级英语全册Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedar

1、/二、第四节短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中 最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 （A），并在其下面写出该增加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2 .只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。AFor this mon thsYoun g Worldmagaz ine , I in terviewed 19-year-old Asia n pop star CandyW

2、an g.Ca ndy told me that she used to really shy and took up singing to deal with her shy.As she g ot better , shedared to sing in front of her class, and then for the whole school.Now shesnot shy anymore and loves singing in front of crowds.I asked Candy how life was differe nee after she became fam

3、ous.She expla ined that there are many goodthings , like being able to traveland meet new people all the time. “ I did nt use tobe popular in school , but now I get ton of attentioneverywhere I go. ” However, too many attentioncan also be a bad thing. “ I always have to worry about how I appear to o

4、thers, and I have tobe very careful about what I say or do.And I dont have much private time anymore.Hang out with friends is almostimpossible for me now because there are always guards around me.”What does Candy have to say to all those young people who wants to become famous ? “Well，” she beginssl

5、owly，“ you have to be prepared to give up your normal life.You can never imagine how difficulty the road to success is.Many times I thought about giving up, but I fought on.You really require a lot of tale nt and hard work to succeeding.Only thevery small nu mberof people make it to the top. ”BHow t

6、ime flies ! Three years middle school life remi nds me many happy even ts. One of it is n ever forgotte n.ltis well worth remember.One day , Wu Mingjuan , my best classmates found that I was quite sad about my English compositi on , sothere were many mistakes .I did nt know how correct them.She told

7、 me how to do well in a patient way.She alsosuggests that I should do more reading and writing.I did as she told me.At last my En glish compositi on won the firstprize in the school compositi oncon test.Atthat time I realized of the meaning of “ Practice makes perfect. ” My c lassmates great helpbro

8、ught me great happ in ess.Happ in ess always go along with me in my middle school life.参考答案2AFor this month s Young World magazine.1 interviewed 19-year oldAsian pop star Candy Wang. Candy told me 1 hat she used to A reallyshy and took up singing to deal hewith her生hy . As she got better-she dared t

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