高分作文技巧指导----丑小鸭变白天鹅魔法一：

1、.高分作文技巧指导 -丑小鸭变白天鹅魔法一：适当运用高级词汇在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用大纲上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。1.我对英语非常感兴趣。Im very interested in English.Im quite / extremely interested in English 2. 我们的校园位于市中心。Our school is in the center of the city. Our school is loca

2、ted in the center of the cityOur campus situates in the center of the city3.放学后，我们有很多作业要做。After school, we have a lot of homework to do.After school, we have endless homework to do.4) 我们可以得到社会及工作经验。We can get some working and social experience We can abtain some working as well as social experience5

3、 洗澡间和厨房都很好。The bathroom and the kitchen are good.The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished6. 大部分学生认为应当学好英语。Most of the students think it is necessary to study EnglishThe majority of the students hold the view that it is necessary to master English.高分作文技巧指导 -丑小鸭变白天鹅魔法二：恰当运用漂亮句型在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其

4、简明扼要。.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。使用漂亮句型，特别是打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子会成为得分亮点。1My brother is a college student, and he is glad to help others. My brother who is a college student is glad to help others. （使用定语从句） My brother, who is a college student, is glad to help others. My brother, a college student,

5、is glad to help others. （使用同位语）2. 我们应当尽力帮助他。 We should try our best to help him We should spare no effort to help him We should help him as far as we can. We should do whatever we can to help him.实战训练：1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so much about it. （使用名词性从句）2. Though he is young, he know

6、s a lot.3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 4. I passed the exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）5. She entered the room and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)7. I wont believe what h

7、e says. （使用状语从句） 8. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）9As soon as he arrived ,he began to work. (使用倒装句)10 If you work hard , you will make greater progress (使用the more the more的句型)参考答案：1. What makes him surprised is that the little girl knows so much about it.It surprises him th

8、at the little girl knows so much about it.2. Young as he is , he knows a lot.3. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened4. But for for your help, I wouldnt have passed the exam.Without your help, I wouldnt have passed the exam.If it had not been for your

9、help, I would have failed in the exam.5. She entered the room ,followed by many students.6. They went back to school singing and laughing.7. Whatever he says, I wont believe him.8. Study hard and you will make rapid progress.9. No sooner had he arrived than he began to work Hardly had he he arrived

10、when he began to work.10. The harder you work., the greater progress you will make.高分作文技巧指导 -丑小鸭变白天鹅魔法三：准确运用过渡词、过渡句在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点的运用，过渡词的准确运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用过渡句，使文章全文结构紧凑，表达严谨等。1表递进：and; then ; besides; whats more; in addiction ; besides furthermore;

11、 moreover ;2表转折：but; however; though; or else; otherwise ; on the contrary; while; after all等3表总结：finally; at last; in brief; in a word; in all; generally speaking等4表描述：for example; for instance; actually; in fact; as a matter of fact;in other words 等5. 表推理：as a result; therefore; thus; on account o

12、f等6. 表强调：indeed; certainly; surely; above all等7. 表对比：in the same way; similarly; just as; on the one hand , instead等8. 表目的：for this reason; for the purpose of; so as to; so that 等逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序first, second, then, finally/at last , soon， immediately, suddenly空间顺序here, there, on one sideon the othe

13、r side,in front of, at the back of, next to对称for one thing, for another thing; on one hand, on the other hand因果because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of)条件as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless让步though, as, even if/though, whether, who (what, when, where)ever递进whats more, besides

14、, to make matters worse, whats worse过渡性插入语I think, Im afraid, you know, As we all know实战训练一：用适当的过渡词填空，使短文通顺连贯：_( 目前)it is usual for us students to find part-time jobs in the holidays. Last summer, I worked as a waiter in a restaurant, and I learned a lot. _(首先), it was the first time for me to earn

15、money on my own, so I felt extremely excited. Now I can buy what I want without asking my parents for money as before. _(7第二), during the period I learned_(不仅) the value of money _(而且) the way to get along with others. _(第三), I gained some working experience _(和) social experience, which I found a g

16、ood preparation for the world outside school. It was useful to my future work. _(总之), I had a wonderful vacation.实战训练二：用适当的过渡词，过渡句使短文通顺连贯：_( 引出话题的过渡词), more and more college students, in recent years, are finding it difficult to find jobs in big cities. Why it is difficult for college students to fi

17、nd jobs? _(过渡句原因有如下几条)_( 原因一)，many graduates are looking forward to find jobs in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside. _（原因二）, some college students pursue too high goals and are too particular about such factors as working conditions, salary, and so on. _（原因三）, there are not enough op

18、portunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us._(事实上), Rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and youll be able to make greater contributions to the building

19、of new countryside. _（总结或表明观点） college students should have the right attitude towards themselves and the job. I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city.高分作文技巧指导 -丑小鸭变白天鹅魔法四：灵活扩展句子1北京很美 Beijing is beautiful. Beijing is so beautiful that many people come here. Bei

20、jing is so beautiful that many people come here every year. Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year. Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world. Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people, no matter young or old

21、, men or women, come here every year from all around the world.” Beijing is so beautiful that it attracts visitors from both home and abroad every year.2. 我们该保护环境 We should protect our environment . We should take action to protect our environment . We should take action to protect our environment t

22、o save the earth. We should take action to protect our environment instead of polluting the earth. Saving the earth is saving ourselves. It is time for us to take action to protect our environment。 As middle school students, what we should do is to spare no effort to protect our environment. 3. 塑料袋引

23、起白色污染 plastic bags will cause (result in,或 lead to) white pollution。 Too much use of plastic bags will cause serious white pollution . More and more plastic bags are used by people every day,which will cause serious white pollution.With the improvement of peoples living standard, more and more plast

24、ic bags are used by people every day,which will cause serious white pollution. As is known to us all, too much use of plastic bags will cause serious white pollution It is reported that the problem of “white pollution” caused by using plastic bags is becoming increasingly serious in the world.4中国人有必

25、要过洋节日吗？ Is there any need for Chinese people to celebrate western festivals? Recently there has been a heated discussion about whether there is any need for Chinese people to celebrate western festivals. As for the question whether there is any need for Chinese people to celebrate western festivals,

26、 different people have different opinions. Just as the saying goes, So many people, so many minds. As for the question whether there is any need for Chinese people to celebrate western festivals, different people have different answers With the development of economy and the improvement of peoples l

27、iving conditions, more and more Chinese people like to celebrate western festivals .As for the question whether there is any need for Chinese people to celebrate western festivals, different people have different opinions. As we can see, with the development of economy and the improvement of peoples

28、 living conditions, more and more Chinese people like to celebrate western festivals .As for the question whether there is any need for Chinese people to celebrate western festivals, different people have different opinions.实战练习1. 兼职工作会影响学生的学业吗？Will part-time jobs influence the studies of students ？ 对于兼职工作是否会影响学生的学业的问题，不同的人有不同的观点。_ 俗话说，“凡事都有两面性”。对于兼职工作是否会影响学生的学业的问题，不同的人有不同的说法。（恰当使用谚语）_2 . 一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. 绝大部分人认为，一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间._ 通过上面的讨论，我们不难得出结论：一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间_ 通过上面的讨论，我们不难得出结论：一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间，事实上，把