MBA小作文思路

1、以2011年的小作文为例:CousinLiMing考上大学第一步:定位恭喜信第二步:归纳要求1.恭喜2.建议和指导第三步:模具对号入座1.开门见山就说事恭喜2. 打拳夸复旦,为你骄傲3. 肥肉（2个万能句）-建议指导:好好学习4. 结束语祝福前程似锦DearLiMing,IamhappytohearthatyouwillgotoFuDanUniversity.（开门见山就说事）Asweallknow,FuDanUniversityenjoysgreatreputationandpopularityallovertheworld,soweareproudthatyoubecomeapartofi

2、t.（夸复旦,也就是夸LiMing）Itisbelievedthatonessuccessdependsinlargemeasureonhishardworkanddedication.SoIdosuggestthatyourtoppriorityshouldbegiventolearnusefulandhelpfulknowledgeincollege,whichmakesiteasierforyoutobecomeanexcellentcandidateaftergraduation.（建议指导）Iholdanexpectationthatyouwillhaveabrightfuture/

3、greatprospect.（祝福）Yourssincerely,Zhangwei知识点:五点一.五种头:1. Itisbelieved/said/hoped/known/assumed/acknowledgedthat2. 众所周知Asweallknow,/Asisknowntoall,3. 我认为:We/Icometorealize/believe/thatIamfirmlyconvincedthatAsfarasIamconcerned,Intheeyesofmostpeople,Istronglyfeel/dosuggestthatIhavereasonstobelievethat4.

4、 Iamhappytolearn/hearthatIamsorrytosay/tellthat5. Everyone(inbusiness/intheworld)hasbeentoldthat二.换词思维:1. 换头:会的人:IamwritingthislettertoyoutocongratulateyouonthesuccessfuladmissiontoFudanUniversity不会的人:IamsohappytolearnthatyouwillgotoFudanUniversity2. 换词:e.g录取:会的人:youhavebeenadmittedby/gainedadmissio

5、nto/enrolledbyFudanUniversity不会的人:youwillgotoFudanUniversity3 .变长句的诀窍:3个字变成30个字-建议童鞋们要多练习长句=头+身体+尾巴+垃圾以复旦很有名为例:FudanUniversityispopular如何变长句头:Asisknowntoall,身体：FuDanUniversityenjoysgreatreputationandpopularity一主句垃圾:allovertheworld-介词结构尾巴:so,weareproudthatyoubecomeapartofit.-从句推荐使用从句:When/if假设逻辑关系bec

6、ause/so因果but,转折,which,who4 .静态动态语言(be动词的转化问题)Bepopular/famous:enjoygreatreputationandpopularityallovertheworldBecheap:enjoyalowandcompetitivepriceinthemarket.Beimportant:playacrucialroleindoingsomething:qualityplaysacrucialroleinboostingacompanyspopularityandreputationinthemodernmarket.5 :肥肉部分万能句(2句

7、话)-熟记1. 因果关系2. 首要任务放哪里,whichmakesiteasierforsbtodo.因果关系几种表达法:(1) Successdependsinlargemeasureononeshardworkanddedication.(2) Lackofcommunicationislikelytogiverisetosocialconflicts.可能:belikelyto=may应该:besupposedto=should能:beableto=can(3) Thelowprice,goodquality,superiorserviceareasignificantcauseofthepopularityofdomesticcars.(4) Lackofenvironmentalconservationawarenessissupposedtocontributetoglobalwarming.本文肥肉部分,万能句造句-建议对方好好学习,天天向上因果:努力造就成功建议:你的首要任务放在学习,whichmakesiteasierforyoutodo.Itisbelievedthatonessuccessdependsinlargemeasureonhishardworkanddedication.SoIdosuggestthatyourtoppriori