大学英语四级测试作文评分标准

1、大学英语四级测试作文评分标准2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。8分：基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文章尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。大学英语四级测试作文评分标准11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误。字数不够扣分。（各段已给出的主题句均不得计入）段落不够扣分。评分样卷 (1)Women in the Modern World Women are playing an increasingl

2、y important part in society today. In today, many women have a work. They worked as well as men playing an important part in factories. There are many women in govener also. They lead other people comtral, and make out plans. There are many women scientist also. They event new things to improve our

3、life.评分样卷 (1) With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. In ancient, womens position in family is pity. They had to looks after their children, did every how husband ordered her to do. But now it is changed. They are equal to her husband. They hav

4、e the right of speaking of idea, discussion things with her husband, do what she wants to do.评分样卷 (1) In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized. We also should realize, womens likerty are limited. For example, many factories want men become its workers but t

5、he chance of women is less than men. Everyone should do their best to change this condition. Im sure, the liberation of women would be increased.5分基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误。评分样卷（2） Women are playing an increasing important part in society today. More and more women go to work to earn money instead of

6、 keeping the house or looking after the children. Women have entered many fields of society including scientific field. As we know, many women sports teams have won the worlds champion such as Chinese Womens Volleyball Team.评分样卷（2） With the changes in their social role, womans position in the family

7、 has been improved as well. Husbands are not the masters of wives in many places. Husbands and wife are equal now. They join together to overcome difficulties and share happiness.评分样卷（2） In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. Also in some places, women a

8、re considered being “things” belong to men. They have little chance to find jobs. They dont get equal pay for equal job. This is a problem must be solved not only by society but also by women themselves.11分切题，思想表达清楚，连贯。有个别句子结构错误及少量其他语言方面的错误评分样卷（3） Women are playing an increasingly important part in

9、society today. Many women today are playing an important part at works that was thought only could be done by the men before. For example, some women are not secretary in the office, instead , they become manager of a company.评分样卷（3） With the changes in their social role, womans position in the fami

10、ly has been improved as well. In the world today, more and more women have their own jobs. They get their own salary, and become more independent from their husband. With the economic situation improved, their family position is improving.评分样卷（3） In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman ha

11、s not been completely realized. Many husbands only want his wife to stay at home, and do some works or do some shopping. They only want their wife to be a housewife, but not a manager of a company.8分基本切题，思想表达尚清楚，基本连贯，有个别严重的语言错误及用词不当，但可以理解。评分样卷（4） Women are playing an increasingly important part in s

12、ociety today. In many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by society.评分样卷（4） With the changes in their social role, womens positi

13、on in the family has been improved as well. Husband and wife are now equal in the family. They cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each other. Also, you can hardly find out that in todays families, women are being busy with dinners, whereas men are comfortably sitting

14、 in armchairs, reading newspapers.评分样卷（4） In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized. A number of men still jealously guard their rights, and regard women as incapable creature. Few women are allowed to attend important international meeting dominated by men.

15、 Thats really the problems we should solve immediately.14分切题，文章通顺，语言规范。句法有一定变化，用词适当。有个别小错，但不影响理解。检查语法1. 动词 时态，语态是否正确2. 名词 单数、复数、可数、不可数，专有名词大小写3. 主谓一致 分清主句和从句，使各自的主谓一致4. 形容词、副词 用法是否正确，比较级与最高级是否得当5. 介词、连词 搭配是否正确6. 其他关联词 用法是否正确7. 单词拼写 8. 标点符号Model ( developed one ) (1) There has never been an agreement

16、 as to the issue of smoking. (2) Recently, however, more and more people begin to pay attention to this question, and some even write to the government calling for policies to stop smoking. (3) They have realized that smoking does great harm to the health of smokers and non smokers as well.表示列举的方法 n

17、First of all/Above all, secondly, moreovernIn the first place, in the second place, furthermore/whats morenTo begin(start) with, secondly, in additionnFor one thing, for another thing, for still another thing表示举例说明的过渡语nFor example, for instance, for one thing, to illustrate, as an illustration, a ca

18、se in point, nLets take as an example. Take for example.n is a typical example of n is a typical/proper case in point.表示递进关系的过渡语nIn addition, furthermore, moreover, besides, also, whats morenNot only, but also, similarly, nAnother isn is anothern is also a factor. 表示对比对照的过渡语nIn contrast, by contrast

19、, on the other hand,in comparison, on the contrary, unlike, like, contrary to, whereas, while, conversely, ndiffer/vary greatly/vastly fromnDifferent from 表示因果关系的过渡语nBecause of, on account of, due to, owing to, thanks to, for, because, since, as, for this reasonnTherefore, so, as a result, consequen

20、tly, in consequence, accordingly, hence, thusnThe reasons why/for are/lie inn results inn result from表示结论的过渡语nTo sum up, to conclude, to summarizenIn sum, in summary, in conclusion, in all, in a word, in short, in briefnSo, therefore, thusnWe can come to the conclusion that nA conclusion can be reac

21、hed that 表示转折的过渡语nThough, although, however, nevertheless, nonetheless, even thoughnLets look at the other side of the coin.nAs everything has two sides, we should not neglect the other side of the coin.nJust as there are two sides of a coin,. 归纳总结概括全文，得出结论 nAll in allnIn a word nAs for me nIn my op

22、inionnPersonally, I think /believenAs far as I am concerned作文模板（A or B）模板模板1：n Depending on personal experience , personality type and emotional concern , we find that some people hold the idea of A while others prefer B . From my point of view , it is more advisable to choose A rather than B . My a

23、rguments for this point are listed as follows .nThe main reason for my propensity for A is that _就理由进行解释。就理由进行解释。nAnther reason can be seen is that _就理由进行解释。就理由进行解释。For example _.nThe argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because _.nAlthough I agree that there

24、may be a couple of advantages to B . I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious . Such as _.nIn a word _.模板模板2 n From my point of view , it is advisable to choose A rather than B . My arguments for this point are listed as follows .n The main reason for my propensity for _is that _.n nThere is a

25、nother factor that deserves some words here _.n In a word _. While it is true that argument I disagree with hold a little bit of water , I think_. Agree or disagree n模板模板1： nNowadays , some may hold the opinion that_. But others have a negative attitude . As far as I am concerned , I agree that _. M

26、y arguments for this point are listed as follows . nI agree with the statement that _without reservation since _.n Anther reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that_.nIn a word , _ .Take into account of all these factors ,we may reach the conclusion that_. 模板模板2：n There may b

27、e one or two disadvantages to _, however , I believe that there are far more advantages . My argument for this point are listed as follows .nFirst of all , perhaps one disadvantage to _is that _.For instance , _. Anther drawback to _involves the possibility that _. For example, _. Even though there

28、may be one or two disadvantages to _, the advantages far outweigh them . The main reason for my propensity for _is that _. For example, _.n In a word , in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to _. I feel that advantages are more obvious _重复优点重复优点. Taking into account of all

29、 there factors , we may reach the conclusion that _.历年题目解析n2001年1月n面试在求职过程中的作用n取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是.n2001年6月:Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday. 1. 表示欢迎2. 提出对度假安排的建议3. 提醒应注意的事项n2002年1月假设你是

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