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1、书面表达突破 ( 五)阐述主体类原题再现据统计 ,目前我国有数以百万计的中学生在国外求学。面对中学生“出国热”这一现象,社会对此有不同的看法。请你以“ Studying Abroad ”为题 ,写一篇短文简单分析这一现象并谈谈自己的看法。注意： 词数 120 左右。写作模板学生习作Nowadays,there are more and more 现象 . It is estimated that 现象的具体数据 . Why have there been so many 现象？ Maybe the reasons canbe listed as follows ：The first one i

2、s 原 因 1. The second one is 原因 2.In my opinion, 我的观点 If 支持自己观点的理由名师点评Studying AbroadNowadays,there are more and more middle schoolstudents studying abroad. It is estimated that tens of thousands of Chinese students are studying in foreign countries. Why have there been so many middle school students

3、studying abroad? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows ：The firstone is that many parents believe thateducation abroad is far better than the domestic. And at least students can learn the foreign language faster andbetter. The second one is that many people in ourcountry have become much wealth

4、ier than before. They have the money to send their children to study abroad.In my opinion,sending children studying abroad is not a bad matter.If they like to study there,they can acquire a lot of things.本文是用三段论的方式进行写作的,第一段提出问题 ,其中用了 It is estimated that. 和 Why have. 等较为复杂的句式；第二段说明理由,用词确切,如farbetter

5、 than the domestic 应为较高级的词汇； 第三段发表自己的看法,使用了含有条件状语从句的复合句,使文章的档次得以提高。总之,该文要点齐全 ,符合要求 ,但美中不足的是第三段中sending children.matter若改为 it is not a bad matter sending children studyingabroad 则更常见一些。仿写训练请你围绕“建设节约型社会 ,从我做起”的主题 ,根据下面的要点提示 ,用英语写一封倡议书。要点如下 ： 1节约用水 ,避免不必要的浪费；2节约用电 ,离开时确保关掉灯及其他电器；3节约纸张等学习用品；4提醒父母及亲朋好友节约

6、能源。注意： 1词数 120 左右；2倡议书的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数；3内容可适当发挥,要注意行文连贯。Dear fellow students,Our government is aiming to build an“ economized society”_【参考范文】Dear fellow students,Our government is aiming to build an“ economized society” I think it is every citizen sduty to achieve this goal.As middle school students,

7、what should we do?We should focus our attention on details in our life.We should form the habit of savingwater,especially whenwe brush our teeth and wash hands,and never leave water runningunnecessarily.Meanwhile,weought to save electricity.Wheneverwe leave classrooms or ourhomes,make sure that the

8、lights and some electrical equipment have been turned off.Never keep the lights on in the daytime if unnecessary.We should also save every piece of paper as well as other materials.What s more,we should remind our relatives and good friends as well as our parents to save energy.Dear fellow students,

9、let s spare no effort to take action.补偿练习1 完形填空Our teacher,Miss Chua,is nearing retirement.However,she still commands our great1forbeing an excellent teacher.She has short hair that is gradually2white,an indication that age is creeping on her.Thewrinkles (皱纹 ) thatlineherface3ofyears of hardwork and

10、selflessdevotiontoherstudents.She wears a pair of glasses through which her kind eyes are always4fixed upon uswith affection and consideration.She looks splendid in her5 clothes which she will not throwaway for something more6,reflecting a thrifty ( 节俭的 ) nature.Through her,we have learnedto be more

11、 careful with7 .Not only that,she has also taught us the8of filial duty (孝道 )by setting us a good9 of looking after her eighty-five years old mother.All her life,she has never10 her duty towards her family and her students.Formuch ofher life,she has been workinghard,displayinga11of discipline and an

12、 attitude ofindustrywhich she is presently12 to fix in our mind.As her parents could not afford to13her touniversity,shesavedhardandmanaged tograduate14a masterdegreefromaBritishuniversity.Thisis aninspiration tous thatabsolute15leads toeventual fulfillmentofdreams.Miss Chua is totally committed to

13、the16 of her students.Armed with a keen insight intothe teaching process,she never fails to17our minds and most important,her gift to us has beenthe development of a good18of English.The day when Miss Chua19 school and retires,I will send her a thousand flowers withthe message “ You ve20us well. ” I

14、 will never forget her.She has made a great impact onmy life and on my English.1 A.supportB attentionC respectD view答案C解析根据下文的描述可知这位老师是一位各方面都很优秀的老师,因此应该得到我们的尊敬 (respect)。2 A.changingB turningC appearingD showing答案B解析老师年龄大了 ,因此头发渐渐变白了。turn white变白。3 A.tellB speakC talkD think答案B解析本题容易误选 A 项。 tell of

15、宣布 ,不符合题意。本题应该选择speak of 表示 “表明 ,说明 ” ,这里是指她脸上的皱纹表明了她多年的辛劳和无私的奉献。4 A.sharplyB suddenlyC generallyD gently答案D解析从下文的 “ with affection” 可知老师的目光是温柔的。5 A.matchingB expensiveC dryD new答案A解析从下文的 “ a thrifty nature ” 可知老师是节俭的 ,因此她的穿着打扮很朴素得体。matching 相称的；协调的。6 A.valuableB fashionableC comfortableD available答

16、案B解析根据下文的 “ reflecting a thrifty nature” 可知她很节俭 ,不会去追求时髦。7 A.friendsB studiesC timeD money答案D解析从很节俭的老师身上学生应该学到的是不乱花钱：be more careful with money 。8 A.virtueB lessonC methodD technique答案A解析孝敬老人也是老师教给学生的一种美德。virtue品德；美德。9 A.goalB exampleC patternD standard答案B解析老师以自己的实际行动给学生树立了一个孝敬老人的典范。set sb.a good ex

17、ample给某人树立一个好榜样。10 A.performedB doneC ignoredD had答案C解析老师一生中都没有忽视过她对家庭和学生的责任。ignore 忽视。11 A.processB needC seriesD sense答案D解析老师对工作的态度展示了一种纪律观念(a sense of discipline) 。12 A.tryingB willingC learningD getting答案A解析老师在教学中努力让我们牢记它们。因此应该选择trying 。13 A.sendB accompanyC takeD bring答案A解析老师读书时家里很穷 ,供不起她去读大学。故

18、选A 项。14 A.uponB toC forD with答案D解析graduate with a master degree 毕业时获得了硕士学位。15 A.developmentB determinationC decorationD distinction答案B解析她靠自己的决心成功地实现了自己的梦想。16 A.talentB successC experienceD entertainment答案B解析她对学生的成功尽心尽力。17 A.chargeB concentrateC challengeD change答案C解析从上句可知老师对教学有很深的洞察力,因此选 C 项。 challenge our minds 指挑战我们的思维能力。18 A.appreciationBwritingC commandD skill答案C解析在她的教育下我们对英语知识的掌握有了很大的进步。command 掌握。19 A.leavesB entersC quitsD attends答案A解析老师退休离开学校的那天。20 A.protectedB showedC guardedD guided答案D解析老师对学生的教育是通过引导(guide) 的方式。补偿练习 2 短文填词(2009福州一