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1、书面表达专题一、影响作文分数的因素：1 题目要求、内容要点；2 句子准确、通顺；3 层次结构清晰；4 拼写、语法等错误；5 卷面整洁度；二、做题步骤：1 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节；2 列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容；3 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；4 复查：2遍1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；5 誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。*总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称；三思：词汇>短语>句式；三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。三、作文一般框架： 文章分3段：（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；（2）正文主要内

2、容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。四、如何列提纲：例1：利弊型作文Microblog的利与弊Para1: （综述）with the development of the Internet, more and more popularPara2: （利）First, convenient, anywhere, any time; Second, share with; Last, express views free, money-freePara3: （弊）However, one coin has two

3、faces. On the one hand, a waste of timeaffect study; On the other hand, not safestolen, hurt feelingsPara4: （个人）As a student, make good use of it.例2：计划安排型作文谈假期安排Para1: （综述）graduate from, holiday is coming, plan for this holidayPara2: （正文）Firstly, study comes first. make preparations for the first se

4、nior year; Secondly, visit tourist attractions; Last but not least, do sports to build up my body.Para3: I am sure Ill have a meaningful holiday. (Im looking forward to the coming holiday.) (I cant wait to enjoy my summer vocation.)五、常用过渡性词语 叙事文常用的句子间连接词： At first; at last; in the endthen/next/after

5、 thatwhen/while/as soon as/not untilat the same time; at times; once in a while; so that,To ones surprise, Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunatelyin a word/in all议论文常用连接词表示并列：eitheror; neithernor; bothand; not onlybut also; 表示递进的：besides; whats more; whats worse; (moreover); in addition表示原因的：bec

6、ause; for; because of; thanks to; (for the reason that);表示结果的：so; as a result; sothat; therefore; 表示目的的：so that; in order that; (in order) to; for; 表示对比的：while; on the one hand + on the other hand; Each coin has two sides.; preferto; would rather dothan do;表示转折的：however; but; 表示举例的：for example; for

7、instance; such as; like; that is to say表示总结的：in short; in a word; last but not least; last; as far as I know, above all表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; have great/much influence on sb.; have an effect on sb.; affect;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy; be fond of; be interested in; sh

8、ow great interest in; lose oneself in; put ones heart into; be good at; be poor at; be weak in;表达个人想法的：I think/believe; (as) for me; in my opinion; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally speaking; As far as I am concerned 就而言，其他：in general; generally speaking; to b

9、e short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up ones mind to do; in a way; 六、丰富句式 1.熟记经典句子。Its+ adj for sb to doV-ing作主语 eg. Watching TV isThere is a general discussion these days overon education in many schools.According to the survey, the most popular choice of job is.For my pa

10、rt, I agree with this opinion for the following reasons.Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments/ideas on both sides.This view is now being questioned by more and more people.Could you please give me some suggestions for vacation spots？I think most people (30% of th

11、e people) are in agreement that fruit and vegetables are good for health.I would rather stay at home and read a good book than go to a party.I prefer to listen to classical music rather than go to the concert.The popularity of basketball has risen worldwide. 2.巧用谚语 As the proverb goes

12、 有句谚语说道 Where there is a will, there is a way.  （有志者事竟成）No pains, no gains. (不劳无获)All roads lead to Rome.（条条大路通罗马）It is never too old to learn.(活到老，学到老)Knowledge is power.（知识就是力量）七、常见的作文类型模板： 1、书信Dear ., Im glad to receive your letter - Best wishes! Yours, Lucy 1）书信开头常用语 I am very gla

13、d to receive your letter (hear form you). Hello, Jane. Is everything going (on) well? /How is everything going (on)? Im writing to you for some advice on how to Im writing to ask if you can . How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met. Thank you for inviting me to . 2）书信结尾常用语 Best wi

14、shes (to/for you). Wish you good luck. (I am) looking forward to hearing from you. 2 图表、数字比例型（提出讨论或调查的事实）Last week, our class had a class meeting on (how to) Here are the results. （表达出不同看法或观点）Most students think While 20% of them choose to. Another 15 believe There are also some saying that （表达个人看法）

15、 As a student, I agree to3 说明利弊型 Nowadays is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages . First, 优点1 Besides, 优点2 However, every coin has two sides. It also brings us bad influences. On the one hand, 缺点1 On the other hand, 缺点2 In my opinion,个人观点 4 不同观点型 We made a survey about whether we

16、should 提出矛盾问题. Different people hold different ideas. Some believe 正方观点. First, 原因1 Besides, 原因2 While others dont agree. They think反方观点. On the one hand, 原因1 On the other hand, 原因2 As for me,个人观点 5 解决问题型 Recently, the problem has been more and more serious. should do something to solve it. Firstly,

17、 方法1 Secondly, 方法2 Finally, 方法3 I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to , the will become better and better.八、范文赏析假如你是一所国际学校校办英文杂志的学生编辑。你看了下面食品安全这封信后，也想写一篇关于该信的读后感，内容要点包括：你对此事件的看法；解释你的理由并提出你的建议；向受害者表达尽快康复的祝愿。Today, I received the readers letter. I was shocked at it. Personally speaking, I t

18、hink we should pay more attention to the food safety. The government must make some necessary laws. Whats more, some businessmen shouldnt be only interested in making money. They must care about peoples health. Wed better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious, because eating

19、 unhealthy food does harm to our health.Finally， I hope the family in the accident will get better soon.现在越来越多的人在网上购物，网购已 成为流行趋势，二网购的利弊也成为人们讨论的焦点，请参考下面的信息，并结合就的观点些一短文，谈谈你的看法。1. 方便，可以在家买东西，不受时间限制。2. 有很大的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。价格较便宜。3. 买货容易退货难；实物和图片有差距。4网络支付不安全。提示词：实物：material objectNow Internet shopping is

20、 more and more popular in the world. Its a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages.The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shop are open 24 hours a day. It is often to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you cant buy in the shop .

21、Besides, its cheaper. But “Every coin has two sides.” So is Internet shopping. You cant see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and dont like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. Whats more , Its not

22、 safe to pay through the internet. So【网络交友】人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。 赞成的理由反对的理由你的看法1广交朋友1浪费时间？2可自由表达思想2影响学习3有利于外语学习3可能上当受骗       【参考范文】      Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The intern

23、et helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies.       Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which

24、 should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.       It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people ar

25、ound us.目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。原因：1.考试太难 2.自身勤奋不够 3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上 4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴看法与建议：1、作弊有害；2、要做人诚实，学习发奋；3、学校应减少考试。要求：1、字数80-100；2、围绕要点可适当发挥；3、文章开头不计入总字数。 参考作文：At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit - cheating in examinations.There are three main reason

26、s. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven't enough time to prepare for the e

27、xams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams

28、and more time to study for ourselves.“环境保护”话题书面表达好的开头1 As we all know, environment plays a very role in our daily life.2 As we all know, environment is very important to all of us.3 Nowadays, more and more people are talking about how to protect the environment.4 As teenagers, it is our duty to protect the environment.5 Since the environment is so