电子作文1110邓小康

1、题目：Advertising discourage us from being different individuals bymaking them want to be or to look the same. Do you agree ordisagree?In modern society, the advertisements are fully of our daily life,/our lifeis full of advertisemnts, but it is becoincreasingly common to hearpeople talk about the draw

2、backs of advertisements. I completely agreewith idea that advertising hinder the diversity of individuals.Admittedly, some people, supporting that advertisements are not anobstacle in the process of being different individuals, have their ownreasons. Firstly, advertise/an advertisement has limited i

3、nfluence onhuman. Although we can see advertisements from TV, newspaper andmanyotherplaces,peoplearealwaysreluctanttoseeadvertisements/them.Underthiscircumstance,peoplechoosethings/buy products according to their interests and increasingly becomedifferentindividuals.Additionally,differentadvertiseme

4、ntspromptdifferent products. For example, we see a wide variety of advertisementsabout cloths every day. However, these cloths have different kinds, stylesand colors. Hence, advertisements just provide a lot of choices forpeople instead of making them the same. Therefore, advertising is notthe root

5、cause that discourages people from being different individuals.However, this by no means indicates that advertisements do notplace/pose a threat to the diversity of individuals. In the first place, thereare many celebrities who have many fans in these advertisements. Ascelebrities always try to pers

6、uade their fans to buy a product, this willmake many fans use same phone/phones or wear same cloths, whichfurther makes them look the same. Besides, advertisements have apowerful impact on fashion. Advertisements can attract the minority ofyoung people to use their products and utilize these people

7、to influencetheir friends and family members. Increasingly, advertisements will leadthe direction of fashion so that makes everyone look the same. In otherword, advertising will undermine the differentalities of people.In, I fully support the view that advertising can bar us frombeing unique individ

8、uals.表达上好多了，没有之前的那种情况了。进步很大。The bar charts illustrates/illustrate the numbers of the United Kingdomgraduate and post graduates who did not go into full-time workdid after finishing their studying in 2008.It can be seen from the charts, the number of UK graduates who didvoluntary work after leaving c

9、ollege was the lowest with3500 while thefigure for graduates who did further study took a dominantposition (29665). Besides, the number of graduates who did part-timework/能不能有点替换，全都是 who did not,s doing part-timejobs 行不行 was just higher than those who have no work, 17735 and16235 respectively.Howeve

10、r, the data of postgraduates shows a different pattern.More precisely, the figure for postgraduates who did further study wasstill the highest with2725, followed bys who did part-time workwith 2535. Additionally, the figure fors who have/had no work(1625) was nearly five times as high asthose who di

11、d voluntary work(345).Overall, the number ofs who did further study was theconsistently highest in both graduates and postgraduates.表达重复, the highest, the lowest, who did not 题目：As well as making money, business should also have socialresponsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?In modern society, bus

12、inesses have become an essential part of our dailylife, but it is becoincreasingly common to hear people talk aboutthe social responsibilities of businesses. I completely agree with the ideathat businesses should play a wider role in society.Admittedly, some people, supporting that businesses must m

13、ake money,have their reasons. Firstly, businesses need to pay for many bills such asthe salary of stuff, the fee of advertisements and so on. If a businessfocus/focuses on other things instead of making money, it will bebankrupt,nottomentionundertakesocialobligations.Besides,businesses need to inves

14、t money in innovation. As innovation is theprime impetus of development, businesses will lose their leaderships intheir field if they have less money to invest in innovation. That meansmakingmoneyisthe primarypurpose ofbusinesses.Therefore,businesses must try their best to make money.However, this n

15、ever indicates that social obligations are not the target ofbusinesses. In the first place, businesses canum their profit byundertaking more responsibilities. Businesses which always donatemoney to charity will make/leave a positive impression of/to the public.Under this circumstance, people are wil

16、ling to purchase their productsand they can grow quickly. Additionally, businesses which do more forsocietycanraisetheproductivityofemployees.Asbusinessesovertake/undertake more social responsibilities, they will achieve a goodreputation. In this case, employees will be proud of their companies andk

17、eep active in their works. Hence, businesses also undertake more socialobligations.In, I fully support the view that businesses should do more forsociety than simple make money.表达上好多了，论证也挺The table illustrates the changes of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananassale in 1999 and 2004 in five main cou

18、ntries of Europe.It can be seen from the first table, the sales of coffee in five Europeancountries experienced a rise from 1999 to 2004. Specifically, the figurefoe UK increased sharply from 1.5 to 20 million of euros, while the figurefor Sweden ascended slightly by 0.2 million of euros. This similartendency can be also applied to Denmark. What is worth mentioningthat the sales in