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1、12 高考书面表达专练高考书面表达专练 人物介绍人物介绍(Introducing Somebody) 3美文欣赏(美文欣赏(Enjoy Reading)Although Princeton, New Jersey, has a world-famous university, it is still a small quiet town. It is not a place where anyone would expect to see strange characters on the street. That is why one woman will never forget the
2、day in 1940 when, as a child, she suddenly saw a funny-looking man coming towards her. 4“I remember,” she tells her children now, “how wild his white hair looked-as if it had been electrified. He was short. His clothes seemed to be just pulled on to keep him covered, like a blanket to keep one warm.
3、 He had a big nose, a short, thick moustache, and deep-set eyes. He was staring, thinking.幻灯片幻灯片 4这一段的确写这一段的确写得很精彩,以得很精彩,以至于每每看到至于每每看到爱因斯坦的画爱因斯坦的画像时总想起这像时总想起这段描写,而背段描写,而背读起这段文字读起这段文字时眼前又总是时眼前又总是浮现出爱因斯浮现出爱因斯坦的形象。坦的形象。 5He almost knocked me down before he saw me. He gave me a friendly smile, then he w
4、alked on and went on thinking. I noticed he had on bedroom slippers. He had forgotten to put on his shoes. He looked as if he had just stepped out of my book of fairy tales and had passed me like a spirit. 幻灯片幻灯片 5这或许就是我们常常这或许就是我们常常说到的说到的“形象生动形象生动”、“栩栩如生栩栩如生”吧。吧。文段边忆边叙,为我们文段边忆边叙,为我们刻画了一位大鼻深眼、刻画了一位大鼻
5、深眼、短须乱发、衣着随意、短须乱发、衣着随意、不修边幅的人物形象,不修边幅的人物形象,而他竟然是大名鼎鼎的而他竟然是大名鼎鼎的爱因斯坦,也难怪爱因斯坦,也难怪He was staring, thinking。 6 That night at dinner when I told my family about the strange, funny man I had seen, my father put down his knife and fork, looked at me and said,My child, remember this. Today you saw the great
6、est man in the world!”That man was Elbert Einstein. How and why he had come to Princeton, New Jersey is a story of struggle, success, and sadness.幻灯片 2推荐背诵文段推荐背诵文段 7常用表达法常用表达法1. 性别与婚姻(性别与婚姻(Sex & Marriage)Im a man of forty and have a 9-year-old daughter.She got married in 1980 and now she has be
7、en married for more than 20 years.I m 35 ,male and unmarried.I got married five years ago but now Im single. 82.年龄(年龄(Age)He was born in 1995 and is eight years old now.Born in 1985,he is now an 18-year-old student, studying in a university.He began to make a living at the age of 14/at an early age.
8、In his fifties, he began to feel his age .By the age of 14, he had set up a chemistry lab of his own. 93.外貌特征外貌特征(Appearance)She is a lovely girl, with a round face, big eyes, white teeth and long waving hair.He is thin, tall and wearing a pair of thick glasses.He is a good-looking/funny-looking man
9、, with a thick moustache but no hair left.He is a tall man, with blue eyes and blond hair. deep-set eyes ,big bright eyes, long straight nose, brown curling hair, broad shoulders 104.身高(身高(Height)He is 1.76 meters tall.He is 176 centimeters tall.He is 176 centimeters in height.The boy is not tall en
10、ough to reach the apple overhead.He is really a tall man, about 1.98 meters in height.My height is 1.76 metres .(不合英语习惯不合英语习惯)Im 1.76 meters high.(身高不宜用(身高不宜用high) 115.健康状况(健康状况(Health)Well looked after, the children look healthy.Im not so strong, but (Im) in good health.Having been in hospital for
11、six months, now she looks very weak. 126.教育状况(教育状况(Education)I started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later.I went to study in Beijing University in 1984 and 4 years later I graduated (from that university).We learned many courses, includingIve been studying in Tianshan Primary School (No.1
12、 High School, Fudan University) for more than two years and will graduate next year.I got my bachelors (masters, doctors) degree in mathematics in April 1998. 137.特长爱好(特长爱好(Specialty & Hobbies)Im good at spoken English and even better at using computers.I won the first prize in the English speec
13、h contest at school last year.He got the first place in the homepage designing contest.My favorite sport is swimming and playing table-tennis.In my spare time, I like reading and enjoying traveling. 148. 详细特色(详细特色(Something in detail)举例法(举例法(Giving examples):He was strict with everybody and in every
14、thing he did. One day, we were having classes whenHe was very forgetful. Once he came across an old friend of his in the street and .He had a strange way of making his classes lively and interesting. I still remember my first day as a chemistry student. 15写作练习写作练习李涛是我校年轻的老教师。他被看作是老教李涛是我校年轻的老教师。他被看作是
15、老教师,是因为他教化学课已经有师,是因为他教化学课已经有2020年了。说他年了。说他年轻,因为他今年还不过年轻,因为他今年还不过3838岁。岁。 他长得较他长得较瘦。头上头发不多,灰白了。他戴着深度眼瘦。头上头发不多,灰白了。他戴着深度眼镜,牙齿又缺了镜,牙齿又缺了2 2颗。所以他看上去比他实颗。所以他看上去比他实际年龄要大。他说,在公共汽车上常常有人际年龄要大。他说,在公共汽车上常常有人给他让座。事实上。我曾看见他不止一次地给他让座。事实上。我曾看见他不止一次地给怀抱婴儿的妇女让过座。只要听一听他的给怀抱婴儿的妇女让过座。只要听一听他的化学课化学课那课又生动又有趣,你就会发现那课又生动又有趣
16、,你就会发现他真正的年龄。他真正的年龄。16习作点评习作点评Li Tao is a young but “old” teacher in our school. He is often regarded as an old teacher because he has taught chemistry for over 20 years. He is a thin man with thick glasses. The little grey hair and lacking of two teeth make him look older than his real age.He often
17、 says that there are many people giving their seats to him in buses. But in fact, I saw him giving his seat to the woman who takes her baby in her arms more than once. If you have his lively and interesting chemistry lessons, you will find that he is no more than 38 years old .本文叙议结合,对原本文叙议结合,对原材料调控
18、有度,取舍材料调控有度,取舍得当,是一篇很好的得当,是一篇很好的习作。习作。修改建议:修改建议:1 . 第 二 段 第 一 句 有第 二 段 第 一 句 有chinglish之嫌,可改之嫌,可改为为:says that many people give their seats to him.2.who takes改为改为 who took。3.最后一句应改为最后一句应改为If you have ever had 17参考范文参考范文A teacherLi Tao is a young and old teacher in our school. He is regarded as being old for he has been teaching here for 20 years. He is seen, at the same time, as being young as he is now but 38 years old. He doesnt have much hair on the head. And it is nearly all white. Missing two teeth and wearing thick glasses, he looks older t
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