202X202X学年高中英语Unit1GreatscientistsSectionⅣ—Writing课件新人教版必修5

1、-1-Section Writing针对训练写作指导写作模板阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进展续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Jenny was the only child in her home.She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.She couldnt help crying sadly when she thought of the scolding (责备) from her mother.Having walked aimlessly (漫无目的地) i

2、n the street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat,but it was not possible for her,since she had nothing with her.She stood beside a stand for a while,watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business.However,with no money in hand,she sighed (叹气) and had to leave.

3、The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,“Hey,girl,you want to have the noodles?针对训练写作指导写作模板“Oh,yes.but I dont have money on me. she replied.“Thatll treat you today, said the man,“Come in.The seller brought her a bowl of noodles,whose smell was so attractive.As she was eating,Jen

4、ny cried silently.“What is it? asked the man kindly.“Nothing,actually I was just touched by your kindness! said Jenny as she wiped (擦去) her tears,“Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother,drove me out of the house.She showed no care for me.She is so merciless (毫不留

5、情的) compared to a stranger!针对训练写作指导写作模板Hearing the words,the seller smiled.“Girl,do you really think so?I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you?Have you expressed your gratit

6、ude(感谢) to her?Jenny sat there,speechless with shock;she remembered her mothers familiar face and weathered hands “Why didnt I think of that?A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me grateful,but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me. On the way home,Jenny made up her mind to make

7、 an apology (抱歉) to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.针对训练写作指导写作模板注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写局部分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。针对训练写作指导写作模板Paragraph 1:Coming to the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath. Paragraph 2:A gentle touch on her hair called her

8、 mind back. 针对训练写作指导写作模板1.理解全文理解全文,把握主线。本文为记叙文。文中主要人物为把握主线。本文为记叙文。文中主要人物为Jenny和和the seller,围绕感恩这个话题展开。续写局部的情节相比照较正围绕感恩这个话题展开。续写局部的情节相比照较正统统,没有太大的悬念。没有太大的悬念。2.分析关键词和段首提示分析关键词和段首提示,展开想象合理续接。根据续写局部第展开想象合理续接。根据续写局部第一段的提示语我们可以推断一段的提示语我们可以推断Jenny在在the seller的教导下认识到了的教导下认识到了自己的错误自己的错误,决定回家向妈妈认错。因此第一段对于决定回家向妈妈认错。因此第一段对于Jenny的愧疚的愧疚之心应该有所表达。之心应该有所表达。3.结合逻辑和常识结合逻辑和常识,确定结局。根据续写局部第二段的提示语我确定结局。根据续写局部第二段的提示语我