一篇高中的书面表达指导

1、书面表达指导写作基本步骤：写作基本步骤：仔细审题，列举大纲。仔细审题，列举大纲。围绕要点，写出句子。围绕要点，写出句子。添加过度，确保连贯。添加过度，确保连贯。先求正确，再求灵活。先求正确，再求灵活。认真眷写，卷面整洁。认真眷写，卷面整洁。假如你正在参加学校举办的一个英语演讲比赛，就如何应对全假如你正在参加学校举办的一个英语演讲比赛，就如何应对全球变暖这个话题发表自己的见解，号召同学们过低碳生活，为球变暖这个话题发表自己的见解，号召同学们过低碳生活，为减少二氧化碳排放做贡献。请就这个话题写一篇演讲稿，陈述减少二氧化碳排放做贡献。请就这个话题写一篇演讲稿，陈述你自己的观点。你自己的观点。演讲稿应

2、包括以下内容：演讲稿应包括以下内容：1 节能减排，低碳生活，人人可为节能减排，低碳生活，人人可为2 改变以往的家庭生活习惯。（用电，用水）改变以往的家庭生活习惯。（用电，用水）3 出行使用公共交通或骑自行车。出行使用公共交通或骑自行车。4 -要求：要求：1 词数；词数； 100左右左右2 可适当增加细节内容，以使行文连贯可适当增加细节内容，以使行文连贯3 提示：提示： 低碳生活低碳生活 low carbon life 碳排放碳排放carbon emission 燃料燃料 fuelSample(示例）Introduction (topic)Body (supporting ideas)Concl

3、usion文章层次结构文章层次结构The outline (轮廓）轮廓）:Para. 1 - introduction 1. To present your topic directly2. To briefly explain the meaning of such an actionPara. 2 - body1. What/ how to do? Para. 3 - conclusion1. To emphasize/ sum up your pointElectricityWaterTransportation meansKey words and sentence patterns低

4、碳生活二氧化碳减少二氧化碳排放生活习惯公共交通方式节约能源的私家车环保low carbon lifecarbon dioxidereduce carbon dioxide emission / reduce producing carbon dioxideliving habitspublic transportation meansenergysaving private carsenvironmentally friendly (adj.)Para. 1 2. To briefly explain the meaning/reason of such an action1. To pres

5、ent your topic directly句型：句型： my topic today is - to fight Global warming . What is it? how does it come about? And its bad effects?句型： the earths temperature is becoming warmer and warmer due to-/ because - it bring about some bad natural consequences ,such as -Para. 1 the ending sentence :therefor

6、e, we must reduce carbon emission. Para. 1Good morning/afternoon/evening, everyone My topic today is living a low carbon life. As is known, the earths temperature is becoming warmer and warmer due to quantities of carbon emission. (说出问题和原因）It brings about some bad natural consequences ,such as , fam

7、ine, draught, terrible diseases and the disappearance of species. (说出后果）Therefore, we must fight global warming and reduce carbon emission. (结束句，接下文，点出主题）Key points (要点）1. 选个选个topic sentence 来统领第二段来统领第二段2. 写出要点句写出要点句：用电：用电/ 用水用水/交通工具交通工具- Turn - off, when dont use electricity Wear clothes instead of

8、 turning up heat Keep waster water for toiletChoose bike or our feet instead of driving private cars-如：That goal needs everybodys effortPara. 2 3. 注意注意语句间的连贯语句间的连贯，使用连接词，使用连接词：for example; and；what s more, however, in addition, on the one hand; on the other hand, thereforeas a consequence (of) , 4.

9、写个结束句写个结束句 ending sentence, 强调自己的观点，如：please believe it that small actions make great difference.Para. 2. That goal need everyone s effort. （that goal 承接上文；主题句，统领后面的文句）Actually, everyone can do small things in daily life to make great difference to that big problem. （对主题句的具体解释）In our homes, for exam

10、ple, we should save energy. (次主题句） When we dont use TV, the lights, computers and so on, turn it off! And wear more clothes instead of turning up the heat! (活用课本语句）And its a good idea to keep waste water during washing vegetable for toilet cleaning. （后几句是用电用水的节约方法，起到对次主后几句是用电用水的节约方法，起到对次主题句的支撑作用题句的支

11、撑作用） Another important energysaving aspect lies in what transportation means to choose. Since Cars contribute a lot to carbon emission, we can avoid using them if necessary, and choose bike or just our feet to go to school or office. That way is healthy and environmentally friendly. ( 此句此句开头就用开头就用en

12、ergysaving , 和前面的关键词和前面的关键词energysaving成对照，形成一种语义成对照，形成一种语义连贯连贯）（高级词汇加分：高级词汇加分： lie in; contribute to）Please believe it that small actions make great difference (总结句总结句）(对主题句的强调，加强论点效果对主题句的强调，加强论点效果） Para. 3I think, if everyone adjusts their behaviors to use energy economically , and when our efforts ad