2020年12月英语六级写作ppt课件

1、2019年12月份英语六级考试真题writingThe Way to SuccessDirection:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincolns famous remark, “Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe. you should wri

2、te at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.v此次作文操作和以前一样，缘由景象类文章，以前的老套路也能套上。但不同在于，考生必需事先看懂考卷中的文字，林肯的那一段话。“工欲善其事，必先利其器。简言之，良好的预备是胜利的根底。假设能在文中表达preparation和success这两个关键词，要点就根本表达完好了。v从上午四级到下午六级，我们可以明确的发现，作文写作方法用老的套路和步骤完全可行。第一段，表述胜利和预备的重要性；第二段，分析缘由第一、第二、第三；第三段，总结。但假设考生读不懂提纲所示，那么就费事了。v所以，重点是看懂标题，并且能

3、把标题解释成一到两个简单的关键词。中文了解力很重要。能了解，行文就是模板。不能了解，模板就是废物。就这次作文来看，四六级作文在借用国际知名考试的出题方式。也再次验证了其科学性。 Everyone tries to achieve success in his career. However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails. Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other i

4、s easily disappointed or stops halfway. 对比提出问题范文范文1 Good preparation, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success (中心观念). A man of solid preparation and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Dr. Sun Yat-sen was such a

5、 man. Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty(简练的言语概括举例). Diligence means steadiness in ones work and study. Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies. Marx often worked 15 hours a day. Li

6、fe is short and we have many things to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything. I believe that where there is a preparation there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts (照应上文).范文范文2 Success is something everyone looks for,

7、 longs for and dies for (排比句). But have you ever considered what success is? (提出问题) Some may hold that success means one has beautiful life, like pretty house, cool cars and great power. Its indeed one way to define success. But to me, success is doing something one really feels like doing (主旨句). To

8、 achieve this kind of success, one has to bear in mind three essential prerequisites, namely knowing where your interest really lies in, possessing the strong will to pursue your interest and having the diligence to realize your dream (主旨句，新颖). In other words, they are “what “why and “how of success

9、. Its really luckily good for one, especially for the younger generation of today to find their dreams, follow them and in the end, make them come true and become successful (论据). Although its never easy to succeed, progressing with the strong will and diligence towards the right direction, youll be

10、 the one (总结).【作文解析】【作文解析】这是一篇议论文。作者首先提出问题“what is success?，但并没有在这个问题上着更多的笔墨，而是直接引出了本人的观念：success is doing something one really feels like doing. 立意较为新颖的地方。随后在第二段对这种胜利背后的三种必要条件做出了论述。整体看，行文流畅，用语规范地道。本篇亮点：1. 排比词组或句子的运用： Success is something everyone looks for, longs for and dies for. namely, knowing w

11、here your interest really lies in, possessing the strong will to pursue your interest and having the diligence to realize your dream.2. bear in mind3. lie in4. strong will to pursue your interest 本文有待提高之处：1. 文中人称有些混乱。有些运用第二人称代指读者，有些又以第三人称指代，建议一致。2. 构造上，普通情况下我们建议考生运用典型的“三段式，即，提出问题、分析问题、处理问题。该作者根本上遵照了

12、这个原那么，但第三段更多的却是反复了第二段的中心思想，并没有起到很好的总结作用。假设第三段，作者可以与第一段的“胜利定义相呼应，例如：即使没有这些身外之物，但心灵上的满足，梦想的实现，才是我心中胜利的本质。整体看，文章在言语表达和立意上还不错。但在文章构造上有些松散，有待提高。范文范文3 The famous American inventor Thomas Edison once said, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration. (名言) And here comes our ques

13、tion, what is the way to success? (问题) A strong will and great efforts are the most essential two keys to the door of success (主旨句-中心观念). Why do people fail to achieve their goal? The reason is that most of them give up halfway due to their lack of a strong will once they encounter any difficulty (反

14、面论述). A man of a strong will always sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be (正面论述). Would Thomas Edison be such a great man in history if he had done nothing but possessing a strong will? We are all familiar with his story that he had tried one thousand kinds of materials before he final

15、ly made his great bulb light up. Without hard effort, Edison might have been a nobody. Without efforts, no one can succeed(排比句). To sum up, a strong will and great efforts can help one open up the way to success(总结全文,与第一段中心观念呼应). Where there is a will with efforts, there is a way (名言改动-亮点).【作文解析】 此次

16、六级考试作文的话题依然是老生常谈，即通往胜利的道路，置信很多考生对此并不陌生，背过范文的同窗写起来一定也是得心应手。 该范文段落构造明晰，阐释说理也足以让人服气，是一篇不错的作文。开篇作者经过援用爱迪生关于天才的一句名言来引出问题，吸引读者留意，引起读者的思索。紧随其后，作者就开门见山地亮出了本人的观念：只需坚强的意志和不懈的努力才干翻开胜利的大门。 第二段，作者同样以一个问题来引领全段，引发思索。然后经过对比不胜利和最终胜利的人的不同表现，来阐释坚强的意志对获得胜利的重要作用。 第三段，作者进一步阐释“仅有坚强的意志，没有真实的努力，也能胜利吗？同样是先发问，然后举了爱迪生的事例，来证明答案

17、能否认的。举名人的例子，而非个人的实例来作为文章的论据才更有压服力，这也是这篇作文的高明之处。 最后一段，作者先以第一句话进展了总结，然后为了加强作文结尾的力度，作者还对名言“Where there is a will, there is way进展了改编，换成了本人的观念，为我所用，这也是本篇范文的一个两点之处。留意，写作文时对名言进展恰当地改编，不仅能表达幽默创新的一面，同样也表达了作者不错的文字驾驭技巧，考官也是很欢迎这样的文章的。2019年12月大学英语4级作文n本次四级作文讨论的话题是胜利与毅力之间的关系，话题不算新，普通考生对此都比较熟习，所以对考生来说难度不大。写好这篇作文，需求

18、抓住两点，一是紧跟标题要求，即对上述幽默性的话语做出评论，二是在评论的根底上要亮出本人的观念。 范文开头第一句即一针见血地对上述幽默性话语做出总结性概括，即戒烟看似简单实那么很难，随后指出该话语本质上是一个悖论，并且以一个“水滴石穿的俗语来指出困难所在，这句也是本文的一个亮点，表达作者在西方俗语方面丰富的知识贮藏。第二段作者那么进一步深化分析该话语，指出做某事在短期看来很容易，长期来看，恰恰相反，人们做事的结果也因此总是失败，缘由那么在最后一句点出：缺乏毅力。第三段作者进一步给出了本人的观念，通知大家如何防止堕入这种两难境地：首要条件即需求坚强的意志和长期的坚持。最后再以艾默生的一句名言 “没

19、人可以骗他远离他最终的胜利，除非他本人成认失败来总结全文，切中主题，铿锵有力。Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillAs we have read from above, quitting-smoking seems easy, but in reality it is rarely achieved. There is something provoking and interesting in this paradox, just because sword does not wear the stone as dripping water does.The ab