Module1SectionⅤWriting——电子邮件的回复

1、Section V Writing电子邮件的回复写作技法指导 文体指导 本模块的写作要求是回复一封电子邮件， 属于应用文， 时态以一般现在时为 主，人称以第二人称和第一人称为主。对电子邮件的回复一般可分为三部分： 第一部分写收到邮件的心情并引出话 题；第二部分具体回复邮件中所提到的问题， 并提出自己的建议； 第三部分的结 尾部分表达一下愿望。亮点句式 1常见的开头语：(1) It was great to hear from you.(2) Im very glad to have received the em- ail you sent me.(3) I was so pleased to

2、 hear from you, and I am writing to give you some tips on job interview.(4) Nice to receive your e-mail asking for advice on how to learn English well. 2常用表达建议的句式(1) I think its a good idea for you to .(2) In my opinion, it would be better to .(3) Whats more, it will be helpful to you that .(4) If I

3、 were you, I would/wouldnt .(5) What I want to stress is that .(6) Finally, dont forget to .3常用的结束语(1) Im expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.(2) If you have any questions, please dont hesitate to let me know.(3) Im looking forward to hearing your early reply.(4) I hope everything goes we

4、ll with you.满分佳作构建 写作任务 假如你是李华， 四月十五日收到你朋友张明的电子邮件， 说他准备在暑假期 间乘火车来北京度假， 希望你去车站接他。 现在请你根据以下要点给张明回个电第 1 页子邮件:1 欢迎来北京度假；2 假期票难买，请提前买票；3 北京有很多游览点，还可以参观北京大学；4. 请电话告知车次及起程日期(date of departure)准备去车站迎接 注意：词数100左右。Dear Zhang Ming,Yours sin cerely,Li Hua审题谋篇体裁应用文时态一般现在时主题对朋友来北京度假的电子邮件的回复人称第二人称和第一人称结构第一段：欢迎来北京度

5、假，并提醒提前买票。第二段：介绍北京的旅游点。第三段：要求告知车次及起程日期，以便去车站迎接。遣词造句I 对接模块词汇机会无论如何预先另外带领某人参观某地1. opportunity2. anyhow3. in advance4. in addition5. show sb.aroundn .巧用模块句式、语法(一)完成句子1非常高兴收到你的四月十五日的邮件Its great to receive your email on April 15.2. 由于假期之间票很难买，你最好提前买票。As tickets are difficult to buy duri ng the holiday, y

6、oud better buy your ticket in adva nee.3. 北京是一座漂亮的城市，有很多旅游地，例如颐和园和长城Beijing is a beautiful city where there are many places for sightseeing, such as the Summer Place and the Great Wall.4另外，你可以参观北京大学，它是我们国家最著名的大学之一。In additi on, you can visit the Peking Un iversity, which is one of the most famous un

7、iversities in our country.5 利用这个好机会，你将会非常愉快。Take advantage of the good opportunity, and you will have a wonderful time.6 请电话告知我何时到达，什么车次。Please tell me over the phone when to arrive as well as the train number.（二 ）句式升级7. it作形式主语改写2句的从句，suggest that改写2句的主句As its difficult to buy tickets duri ng the h

8、oliday, I suggest that you should buy your ticket in advanee.【导学号：75832019】8. 用名词短语作同位语改写4句In addition, you can visit the Peking University, one of the most famous uni versities in our coun try.9 用含有if引导的状语从句的复合句改写 5句If you take advantage of the good opportunity. you will have a wonderful time.妙笔成篇【

9、参考范文】Dear Zhang Ming：Its great to receive your e- mail on April 15.Welcome to Beijing to stay with me during the summer holiday.As its difficult to buy tickets during the holiday, I suggest that you should buy your ticket in adva nee.Beiji ng is a beautiful city where there are many places for sightsee ing, such as the Summer Place and the Great Wall.In addition, you can visit the Peking University, one of the most famous universities in our country.Anyhow, I will show you around if you like to visit these places .If you take adva ntage of the good opport un ity, you