高考英语写作指导ppt课件

1、How to improve writingDo you want to score high in the writing part ?15？20？25!Nothing is impossible!Todays taskWrite an application to an organization Task1：假定你是假定你是 。湖南省博物馆现。湖南省博物馆现在正在招募在正在招募 , 你希望成为其中你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写写 。内容应包括。内容应包括:个人情况：个人情况：个人条件：个人条件：承诺：承诺：留意：留意： 1. 词数词数120左右，开

2、头语已为你写左右，开头语已为你写好。好。 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。贯。 一封申请信一封申请信 英语好、爱好历史、善于沟通、乐于英语好、爱好历史、善于沟通、乐于 奉献、住所离博物馆近奉献、住所离博物馆近提供最佳服务提供最佳服务李华李华, 长沙人长沙人英语解说员英语解说员年龄、性别、学历年龄、性别、学历Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as an English guide in your museum. Im a boy and Im 17. I was born in Ch

3、angsha. Im a middle school student. I want to do something for the museum. First, Im good at English. Second, I like history. Third, Im good at communicating with others. Fourth, I like volunteering. Last, I live near the museum. It is convenient for the work. If you give me the chance, Ill try my b

4、est to offer the best service to others. Please accept my application. I wont disappoint you! Looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Huawhats more,I. Use correct sentence (使用正确完整的使用正确完整的单句或复合句单句或复合句)1. Sentence structure: (使用结构正确完整的单句，使用结构正确完整的单句，切忌参杂中文的句子模式，切忌中文式字对字翻切忌参杂中文的句子模式，切忌中文式字对

5、字翻译译)A. 单句结构单句结构 1） 主主+谓语谓语+宾语宾语主：名主：名/代代/Doing 或或 To do/主语从句主语从句 (注意主谓人称数一致注意主谓人称数一致)谓语：谓语：vt/vi+prep注意时态以及数的变形）注意时态以及数的变形）宾语：名宾语：名/代代/doing/to do/宾语从句宾语从句2主主+谓语谓语+表语表语谓语谓语:be/类系动词类系动词(seem,look,sound,taste,feel,touch)表语表语:名名/代代/adj/doing/to do/表语从句表语从句I. Use correct sentences (使用正确句型）使用正确句型）3) 主主+

6、谓语谓语+状语状语谓语：谓语：vi ; 状语：状语：adv/介词短语介词短语/状语从句状语从句Examples :I forgot to tell you my phone number.The manager often asks him for some suggestion.Seeing is believing. (To see is to believe) He used to live in shanghai, he has lived here since last year.This idea sounds good ,he looked happy after he knew

7、 that.2. 使用并列句使用并列句(用用and,moreover,but,however等连接的两等连接的两个或多个句子）个或多个句子）3.使用复合句主句使用复合句主句+从句；状语从句，从句；状语从句，+主句）主句）1)定语从句：放在主句中某个先行名词之后的句子定语从句：放在主句中某个先行名词之后的句子; 2)宾语从句：位于主句谓语宾语从句：位于主句谓语(vt/vi+prep)之后的句子之后的句子;3)表语从句：位于主句谓语表语从句：位于主句谓语be/类系动词之后的句子类系动词之后的句子;4)主语从句：位于主句谓语前主语从句：位于主句谓语前(即主句主语位置即主句主语位置)的句子的句子5)

8、状语从句：位于主句谓语状语从句：位于主句谓语vi 之后的句子，状语从句之后的句子，状语从句也可以放在主句之前，但必须要带逗号。也可以放在主句之前，但必须要带逗号。I. Use different sentences (使用多样句型）使用多样句型）Examples:I hope to help him, but he refuse my help. He sits next to the woman who is wearing a red coat.3. I am eager to know what he told you.4. My question is what I should do

9、 next.5.When well go outing depends on the weather.6.Because he was ill yesterday,he didnt go to school.7.It is believed that success comes from hard work.8. Its unknown who broke the window.Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as an English guide in your museum. Im a boy and I

10、m 17. I was born in Changsha. Im a middle school student. I want to do something for the museum. First, Im good at English. Second, I like history. Third, Im good at communicating with others. Fourth, I like volunteering. Last, I live near the museum. It is convenient for me to do the work. If you g

11、ive me the chance, Ill try my best to offer the best service to others. Please accept my application. I wont disappoint you! Look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua18.Choose advanced phrases (选取高级词汇选取高级词汇)be of great conveniencebe ready to / be willing to Word Phrase I like volunteering

12、. 2. I like history. 3. This is convenient for the work.be fond of / be interested in / have a great interest in/be crazy aboutdevoting myself to serving others.Choose advanced phrases (选取高级词汇选取高级词汇)Simple phrase Advanced phrase Im good at English. 2. I want to do something for the museum. 3. Ill tr

13、y my best to offer the best service.have a good knowledge of /have a gift / talent formake a contribution to/ contribute to/ devote tospare no effort /make every effort toIII. Use suitable sentences (使用合适句型）使用合适句型）1. I live near the museum . Its convenient for the work. I live near the museum, _. (定

14、语从句定语从句)2. Im a boy and Im 18. I was born in Changsha. Im a middle school student._.(分词作状语分词作状语/定语从句定语从句) which is convenient for the workBorn in Changsha, Im an 18-year-old boy,who is studying in a middle school Read the instructions carefully and decide the style. Follow typical patterns List the

15、key points. Put the key points into sentences.（列提纲）（列提纲）（明审题）（明审题） （选句型）（选句型）（妙联句）（妙联句）( (细复查细复查) )Develop the sentences into a passage. Check your work.北京国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的北京国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和和平、友谊夏令营活动，假设你是李华，请根据下列信息写一平、友谊夏令营活动，假设你是李华，请根据下列信息写一封申请信。封申请信。留意：留意：1、词数不少于、词数不少于120。 2、可根据内容要点适当增

16、加细节，以使行文连贯、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 Task2： 姓名姓名: 李华李华 性别性别: 男男年龄年龄: 17岁岁 学校学校: 长沙市一中长沙市一中其它其它: 爱好音乐爱好音乐,摄影摄影;善于与人交流善于与人交流, 乐于助人乐于助人;热爱自然热爱自然,热爱和平热爱和平参加夏令营的目的参加夏令营的目的: 结交朋友结交朋友,了解外国文化了解外国文化Task2： The outline of the passage：Para1: Introduce yourself.Para2: Reasons why you want to join the Peace and Friend

17、ship Summer Camp . Successs on the way ! Lets come to it !Please complete it in 10 minutes !北京国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的北京国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和和平、友谊夏令营活动。假设你是李华，请根据下列信息写一平、友谊夏令营活动。假设你是李华，请根据下列信息写一封申请书。封申请书。 留意：留意：1、词数不少于、词数不少于120字。字。 2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 Task2： 姓名姓名:李华李华 性别性别: 男男

18、年龄年龄:17岁岁 学校学校:长沙市一中长沙市一中其它其它:爱好音乐爱好音乐,摄影摄影;善于与人交流善于与人交流, 乐于助人乐于助人;热爱自然热爱自然,热爱和平热爱和平参加夏令营的目的参加夏令营的目的:结交朋友结交朋友,了解外国文化了解外国文化A sample of writingDear Sir / Madam My name is Li Hua, and Im a 17-year-old boy （1）（分词）（分词或定语从句）或定语从句） in Changsha No. 1 Middle School. （2我爱我爱好广泛好广泛 （S+V+O）. First of all,（3我热爱音乐

19、我热爱音乐V-ing作作主语）主语）. （4连接过渡连接过渡, Im interested in photography because （5） . （6善于与人交流善于与人交流V-ing 作原因状语）作原因状语）, I make many friends.（7连接过渡连接过渡, Im always ready to help others. I would like to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp for many reasons. The first reason （8是我热爱生活，是我热爱生活，热爱自然、和平热爱自然、和平. Bu

20、t9最重要的原因是，这为我提供了一个结最重要的原因是，这为我提供了一个结交朋友，了解外国文化的机会交朋友，了解外国文化的机会.If （10） （省略（省略&非谓语非谓语the chance, I will make full use of it to broaden my horizon and learn from others.Look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li HuaA sample of writingDear Sir / Madam My name is Li Hua, and Im a 17-year-old b

21、oy （1） in Changsha No. 1 Middle School. （2） . First of all,（3） . （4） , Im interested in photography because （5） （6） I make many friends.（7） , Im always ready to help others. 分词或定语从句分词或定语从句(who is) studying我爱好广泛我爱好广泛 (S+V+O)I have varieties of interests 我热爱音乐我热爱音乐V-ing作主语）作主语）enjoying music is my favorite连接过渡连接过渡In addition to that it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life. 善于与善于与人交流人交流V-ing 作原因状语）作原因状语） Being good at communicating with others,连接过渡连接过渡Whats mo